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Posted: 14 years ago
#81
good start pls add me to your pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
hi
awesome ff
loved it
loved the concept
cant wait 2 read more
plz con soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 3


Geet felt a hand grabbing her and covering her mouth with the other hand…Geet is shocked…who is that…

"How dare you threw water balloons on me?" she heard him whisper in her ears…He pulled her closer to him…Her head rested on his chest…
God what a perfume is he using…he smells so exotic and maly…I have to ask him the name and buy it for John…John's perfume was too extreme…And his chest is so hard…He must work out a lot…

Geet stop thinking about this idiot like that…What should I do? Haan! She bites in his hand…

"ouch" he scremed…Maan let her go of his grip…

"Are you crazy", he glare at her…

Geet laughed: it's your own fault…Maan wanted to grab her again…but Geet was faster she ran out of the room and ran the stairs down…and Maan starts to run after her…

Meanwhile an old woman was watching a beautiful girl was running the stairs down…This girls was a real beauty and her smile and the energy in her eyes impressed her…"She would be perfect for him….i have to find out who she is" than she saw him behind her… The old lady shocked to see him...running after a woman…what's happening here…

She fallowed them and has hidden herself behind tree as they stopped running…

Geet runs to the garden and Maans fallowing her… She stopped: apko sharam nahi arahi…running behind a woman in the public…what others would think…what else can I expect from someone like you? No manners…What do you want?

Maan: no one speaks like that me…samajhe tim…now say sorry…he holds her wrist and twisted her hand…

Geet: sorry for what…

Maan: hmm. Let me think…oh ya for throwing water balloons on me and biting me…

Geet: you deserved it…and now let me…if my family sees you holding me…they won't spare you…

Maan sarcastically: oh no I am so scared…look my hands are shaking…pls don't tell them I'll leave you…call them i want to know what

Geet: oh Mr. Khadoos can make jokes…I am surprised…but chodo mujhe you're hurting me…

Maan: I just don't care

Old lady now it's my time to enter…

Old lady came out: leave her hand…how you dare misbehave with a girl…

Maan was shocked to hear her voice…

Maan looked at her…how she could think he was misbehaving with a girl…

Maan wanted to say something but the old lady gestured with her hand to stop…

Old lady: I don't want to hear anything…just leave from here…

Maan left glaring at Geet…Geet was shocked…he went away without any objections....

Old lady holds Geets hand: are you all right beta? These men now days...they don't know how to behave…

Geet smiled: bil kul right mam…but this man goes beyond the others…but I am impressed mam he didn't say anything to you…thanks for saving me from this dhust…Geet kissed her on the cheek…

Geet doesn't know why but she liked her…

The old lady smiled at Geets act…yes she is perfect…

Old lady: lets go in beta…the pooja will start soon and we have to do some preparations…would you like to help me…

Geet: of course…

Meanwhile Maan really angry…

But then he sees an old coming down stairs…with carried some cartons….he missed a step and was to fall…Maan ran to him and could hold him in the last moment…

Maan: are you all right sir…

Old man: thx beta…

Maan: why are you carrying these cartons…let me help you…he first brought the old man to the leaving room and made him sit…and then he went to stairs and picked the cartons and brought them too…

Maan sit next to him and gave him some water…

The old man thought what a caring guy…

Old man: whats your name beta?

Maan: Maan sir…

Old man laid his hands on Maans head: khush rakon beta…

Mohidar came…

Dadaji: this man saved me today…

Mohindar: why? What happened?

Dadaji: I was to fall the stairs down….he came and saved me…

Mohindar: Are you all right…Mohindar became worried…

Dadaji: haan thx to him…

Mohindar smiled at Maan: thx beta…If something happened to him…

Maan: don't thank me…

They sat together and started to talk about business and things mans talk about…Geets brother and her cousin also joined them…

Geet and the old lady had a lot of fun…They cracked jokes…Geet told her that she looks really s**y and very young…they became friends and Geet starts to call her dadi…

Old lady: beta since a long time I had this much fun…

Geet: ya me too…

Old lady: Whats your name beta?

Geet: Geet Handa…

Handa…then is she definitely the poti of Gurvinder Handa…a good family…

Theek hai beta…they started the pooja…we should join them…

The pooja started…Geet sat next to daadi…Her female family members sat next to her…Geet introduced them to daadi…

Then Maan and Geets male family members came also… Geet was shocked to see them with this Sadoos...

Savitri Devi noticed also Maan and he was with the Handas…Their knot is made by god…

That's why Geet is with me and Maan with her family…now I have to talk to the Handas…

Geet and Maan glared at each other…They tried to kill each other with looks…

Precap

Daadi talks to Dadaji

Pinky's love

Geet damaging Maans car

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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
AWESOME updte dear... Both Maaneet's bonding with each other's family membrs was good.... Geet damaging Maan's car😲😲😲
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
wow nice update yaar .. but quite a long time for the update ... we want the update soon....😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
Nice part and soo lovey and wooow I think the next thing it there married and thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it was awesome dear..................their intro was started by slight fight n it was continuing till now but y she want divorce plz...............don't separate them yaar..................
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
awsome excellent update
do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
hahahahaha they are unknowingly patao-ing their in laws ahahaha
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
Superbbbbbbbbb.
Loveeee maneet's bonding with eachother families.
Continue soonnnn.
Thanxxx for the pm.



Fatima

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