izhaar pyaar kaa(A RN FIC)

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Hi Ria

The first part of this fiction was really gud👏👏

So Rajeev is playing himself only..His family was really nice.

But he is engaged to some othe person..

I hope he meets Priyanaka soon😊

Pls continue soon

Bye

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maanmishti

@maanmishti

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

awesome fic.......loved rajveer and their family.........plzzz update soon

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Purnima

@-purnima-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

such a cute part 😃😃..................... its was surprise update ............ a treat to read 👏👏👏.............the best part of the fic is Rajeev as himself 😳😳😳............. his family is so sweet ......😊 😊😊......loved how the fic started 😃😃😃
wat a perfect way to celebrate his Bday 😃😃😃..........busy man working even on his bday ........... 😆😆😆................ loved prachi's surprise........... 😛😛😛.........

anshu is cute too............hope RK fulfills his promise.........😃😃......

missed PB in the part 😕😕😕........ keeping my fingers crossed hope manjiri wud not be making an special appearence ..............keep her away atleast in the fic 😆😆😆😆..............

will wait 4 next part 😃😃😃
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Edited by Puri_2711 - 14 years ago

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poojabi

@poojabi

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

hey riya boht acha tha jaldi cont kar.

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ria

@ronojoy_ria

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

woh insan jisne prachi ke cake kha lee woh aur koi nahin balke MR.VIKRAM hote haai the director of the film "jokar" rajeev aur prachi dono he unhe dekh kar surprised ho jaate haai specially prachi woh vikram ke taraf haairani se dekhte hue pucchte haai "vikram sir aap yahaan ?" "kun main yahaan nahin aa sakta kya ?" vikram says in a very relax tone "nahin nahin sir mera kahena ka yeh matlab bilkul nahin tha actually aap ko jab mainne subhe phone kiya tha is party ke liye invite karne ke liye tab aapne kaha tha naa ke aaj aapko press conference mein jaana haai isliye when i saw u i got surprised " prachi ke baat sunke vikram starts laughing and says "are prachi yeh press conference mere "jokar"ke birthday se baar hai kya mainne unhe kahe diya ke i cant answer any more questions of them aur yeh bolke main yahaan sidha chala kunki " vikram ab rajeev ke shoulders ke uper aapna haath rakhte hue bolta haai "mere dost ka khas din ho aur main us mein shamil na hu aasa kabhie ho sakta haai kya " vikram ke baat sunke rajeev ka mann bhar aata haai usse aaj ehsaas hota haai that vikram is really a true friend woh vikram ko hug karte hue bolta haai "thanks vikram for coming here and making my day so speciall" par vikram he is really a man who dont like this emotional things in life so to make the situation lighterwoh rajeev se kaheta haai "dekh yaar mainne na yeh sab sirf tere thanks sunne ke liye nahin kiya haai i have done this soo that WE CAN GET A PARTY from u" vikram ke baat sunke rajeev gets really shocked he looks at him and says "what ? party but i havent arranged any party " "woh sab toh hume nahin sunna haai hume toh party chaheye basssssssss kun guys what"s "ab vikram ke saas saath team ke sab log bhi party ke demand karne laagte haai so rajeev had no option left he has to agree

HOTEL BLUE SKY mein rajeev ke birthday party ka arrangements kiya gaya haai sab guests ek ek karke aane laagte haai They all were wishing rajeev a very happy birthday rajeev bhi unhe welcome kar raha tha unke saath baat kar raha tha when he heards some voices which is very familiar to him but at that moment he was not able to recognize the voices so he started looking at the way from where the voices were coming and to his utter surprise he saw his old fellows ie his lrl gang who were standing and looking at him rajeev ko jaise aapne aakhon par vishwas he nahin ho raha tha ke usse milne uske lrl team ke gang aaye haai raj goes to them and with a surprise tone he asked them "aap sab yahaan ?" "kun sir hum kya aapke party mein nahin aa sakte ?" gzal rai (who played pooja's character in lrl )asked rajeev rajeev felt really bad that yeh log usse milne aaye haai uske birthday ke din aur usne unhe kaise sawaal pucch liya so to make atmosphere lighter he says "are nahin nahin gazal mera kahena woh matlab nahin tha actually i wan to know ke aap logo ko kaise party ke baare mein kaise pata chala ?" "hmm well woh pata karna thore na koi muskil the woh humne jab aapko wish karne ke liye phone kiya tha tab aunty jee hume baata diya tha ke aaj aapke birthday party haai HOTEL BLUE SKY so here are we " gazal aapne chulbulee andaz mein bolte haai "aaccha toh yeh baat well thank u very much for remembering my birthday come let's go inside and enjoy the party " rajeev yeh bolke gazal ,kunal kappor (yudi) ko leekar ander jaane he baala hota haai ke koi picche se bol utthta haai "are sir jee aapna birthday gift liye binaa he ander chale jaaoge aap?" rajeev very well knew who the person was so he says "cadet HUDA ka gift liye bina kya main kabhie ander jaa sakta hu ?" rajeev ke baat sunke gazal ,kunal and even vikas(huda) ek dam surprised ho jaata haai

vikas jo abhie chuppa hua tha ab rajeev ke samne aata haai aur baare he haairani se rajeev ke aor dekhte hue pucchta haai "sir aapko kaise pata chala ke main hu ?" rajeev bhi aapne cute se smile dete hue vikas se kaheta haai "vikas tum sab mere aapne ho aur aapno ko kabhie bhulla nahin jaata " "thanks sir for remembering us still now " vikas ke aakhen num ho jaata haai aur yeh dekh kar rajeev feels bad so to lighten the atmosphere rajeev vikas ke shoulder par aapna haathte hue kaheta haai "are vikas tum toh baare he bhullakar ho mujhe gift ke liye rokh kar abhie tak gift nahin diya this is very bad i wan my gift " rajeev shows his fake anger rajeev ko aase dekh kar vikas bhi aapne purane style mein aa jaata haai aur rajeev ke haatho mein ek champgnine ka bottle dete hue kaheta haai "happy birthday sir jee "rajeev ko bhi vikas ho phir se masti mood mein dekh kar aacha laagta haai so to make the moment more enjoyable he says vikas "this is a nice gift but i am feeling scared kahin is bar bhi tum ne is mein koi poison toh mix nahin kiya naa?" rajeev ke baat sunke vikas gazal kunal sab log hasne laagte haai "sach mein sir woh scene abhie bhi aapko yaad haai ? "

rajeev-are bhai mujhe zaher diya gaya tha main maarne se bal bal baccha tha toh kya main itne imp cheez kabhie bhul sakta hu " he says while laughing😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆 "sach mein sir kya din the na woh bhi hum sab ka shootoing ke beech beech mein pranks karna phir priyanka ke ghar ke banne hue besan ke laddo khanna all were really sooooo nice naa sir"vikas ke muh se achanaak priyanka naam sunke pata nahin kun rajeev ko kuch ajeeb sa he feeling hone laagta haai woh jaise un pallo mein kho sa jaata haai when kunal clicks his finger infront of rajeev and says "kya hua aap kaha kho gaye " kunal ke baat sunke rajeev came out from his thoughts woh kunal ke taraf dekhte hue kaheta haai "kunal yeh priyanka ,harshad ,arjun yeh log kaha haai kya tum logo se unke contact nahin ho paaye?" before kunal could reply gazal bol utthte haai "actually sir hume sab ko he phone kiya tha par harshad aur arjun toh u know dono he aapne aapne serials ke shooting ko leekar busy haai aur priyanka aapne di se milne New zealand gaye haai " "oh aur baatao tumm logo ke life mein kya chal raha haai " rajeev aur woh sab chatting karne laagte haai when someone comes over there aur rajeev ke arms ko pakkarte hue kahete haai "kya baate ho rahe yahaan zara hume bhi toh pata chale ?" rajeev towards the person it was none other than his would be wife "MANJIRI "

rajeev looks at her and says "tum kab aaye ?"

manjiri-well jab tum aapne friends ke saath baate karne mein busy the tab "she says with a great attitude " gazal jo ke yeh sab dekh kar rahe unhe yeh bilkul aacha nahin laagta woh kunal ke kaano mein dheere se kahete haai "dekha tune kunal aasa behave kar rahe haai jaise ke queen elizabeth ho " gazal ke baat sunke kunal ko bohot haase aa jaate woh taraf dekh ke dheere kaheta haai "bilkul sahe kaha tune madam of attitude" manjiri jo ke rajeev par aapna haq jaantane bohot show off kar rahe the usse yeh sab nahin dekhta woh bas rajeev ko waha se lee jaana chahate the to prove that he belogs to her rajeev ko bhi manjiri ka aasa behaviour aacha nahin laag raha tha but what can he do so goes with her but also invites gazal ,kunal and vikas along with him

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poojabi

@poojabi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

nice bt mujhko na bus rn fic hi ache lagte hai.

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Well that has been a nice update but to be honest.....I cant really read sumthing too close to the real Rajeev....I mean cud u pls change the name of Manjiri at least?? I dont wish to even think like that...pls that wud be a request on my part.....however the scenes were beautifully written....