We're the Perfect Two-MJHT FF- Part14- pg140 19/5 - Page 99

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Posted: 14 years ago
Mansi welcome back dear - really missed you here🤗
And now coming back to the update - one word : Beautiful ...

In this update I must say, I loved Gunjan the most - she was like a little girl, you know how these little girls think that boys are eww hehe ... Frankly I hated that film but I loved how just through that scene you showed the comfort level developing between the the two of them, it was really cute and gosh Samrat was awesome when he said kiss is not eww ... Lovely ..

And now coming to Mayank and Nupur - he surely shocked me ... I mean I didn't expect this in the near future but they way you brought it out was beautiful ... Starting form their morning conversations to the little leg-pullings and then of course, I can see development here too - and it was really good to see them getting attracted to each other ...

Okay, but I am not liking that Nupur is hiding Samrat and Gunjan from Mayank - she is his sister and looking at their past I don't think it's a wise decision to hide something like this from him ... If he reacts negatively to the hiding part - it might spoil several relationships ... And about your note - we understand and no one will get a chance frankly to dig out any mistakes so just relax and do what you wish to do ... :)

Anyways. continue soon dear ...
God bless you,
Jaee D. Rathore
Edited by JaeeDevRathore - 14 years ago
-Mansi- thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Im sorry..Messed up PM's...too many ppl and ID changes..sorry again :(
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Posted: 14 years ago
MANSI...
THNKU FOR THIS UPDATE...
it was heavnly..truly ...aww...
im short of word
first sami n gunjan so sweet ...n wht sami said even it took me to get wht he said..n th...aww...
thn my MN...it was soo sudden n so much from inside him..he evn didnt ralize whn he found tht urge...the way he asked her...n thn...
beautifull
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow itni jaldi updt de diya tune clapsss

sharam kar sharam kar... itna late updt??/

alsmost story bhul chuki thi me tere is ff ki...

btw jo bhi ho der se hi sahi updt to kiya...

come to the ud...

superb amazing..

n totally awesum sajan n mayur scenes yaar...

haayy kissi kissi cho chweet lol

do cont asap ok...

warna nxt time late updt ke liye standing ovation deni padegi lolll
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Posted: 14 years ago
❤️it was so cute 😃

MN will always b adorable😳
continue soon 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Mansiii

u know what???
ur update alws make me happy...
i m just love this ff- loved the relation b/wmayur, Sanu and Gunur
...
mayur r just awesome--- the way tu r progressing their relationship-it just amazed me...

haye mayur kissed each other- u made me blush yaar...
haye i've lost in mayur dram land... they r so adorable... loved them frm the bottom of my heart

sajan r also very cute

it was fantastic part
outstanding...

plz try to update next part soon
take care

and thanx a lots for ur nice update




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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update. Loved it. Liked sajan scene. Do cont very soon. Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww their first kiss
that too sooo sweet :P
it was fantastic :)
sajan scn was awesome too :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
edited my comment on page 141🤗
mayuloveu thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful update mansi. very romantic. Mayur are so cutr. thanx for pm. plz continue soon

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