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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: samiralovemayur

Mansi glad to see ur back 🤗 welcome back hunn the update was really verry sweet parthonestly woth waitingmayur scenes were adorablemayu beaing such cute partner 😍 like keep hugging nh holding her close olso odering her to sleep till 11 really was amazingu said u got over MN bt plzzz try to recreate their MAGIC in ur FF hun

n Sajan parts were wonderful
Gunjan come to help Sam was great
n how she done his bottons really good no like Gunjan in MJHT
thanks alott for the pm and the update 🤗


Yea I know im over dem..but they will always be in my heart..and their essence will always be in the chapters :) Thank You!!

Originally posted by: hiiiiiiiiiii

wow awsome update

i loved it actully the last chapter i read was two parts ago and since then ive been waiting for an update
i think i missed the part before this
but i read it all today
i seriously loved it
and this part was cute
im loving both mayur and sajan
do continue soon
love
tanzeel


Thank You for catching up Tanz!! Glad yu liked it!! :)

Originally posted by: -Mehak

Mansiiiii...my cuteeee...so glad to see u back!! *hugs*

as always the chapter was lovely and the innocent relation of mayank and nupur was so heart warming, i enjoyed it so much, especially the comparison was beautiful and very realistic! well done.

SAJAN were again marvelous but as u know i can't get over MAYUR.😳😆

excellent and continue soon! 🤗




Eeeeeee...Mehak!! Thank You!!

Originally posted by: -Faria-


Mansiiiiiiiii
welcome back dear
thanx a lot for updating this ff
it was awesomeness usual
love my all time fav mayur
they r really very sweet and adorable..
hmmmm u got over frm Mayur- but i m helpless thats why cant get over frm mayur magic

Again a special thanx for updating this FF- we were eagerly waiitng 4 this update
i know u r busy - hir bhi plz try to update next part soon
take care
May GOD bless u dear


Faria!! I posted this chap specially for you..seeing your comments!! Thank You!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey mansi...welcome bak to IF...nd the update was mindblowing...cant wait to read wat happenes next...plz do pm me wenever u update...
Edited by stuti123 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazinggg update dear
loved it
sorry for being late n short comment
me too hell busy like u these days
mayur sajan both were fantastic
very well writtn
do continue sooon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Mansi when will u update...!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hy Mansi where are u
plz update it soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sorry for the late chapter :( Been really busy..:( I know its very late ..
last chap- 13 pg 134 Please do read it once before moving to next chapter :)
CHAPTER - 14
Nupur slept like a baby..without any tensions and doubts in her mind. A sweet smile crept upon her face. She had a dream that there was a big house wih four children playing in he garden..two girls in pink and two boys in blue. The sun was shining bright and the weather was beautiful..She and Gunjan played with all he four of them..and it looked like a scene out from fairytale..but then she was woken up..

"Nupur get up..tumhe jaana nahin hai..Muskaan ke ghar..Get up." Mayank was screaming. It was already 10.30 and with the speed Nupur got ready...he knew she would be late.

Nupur leisurely yawned and streched..but almost shouted looking at the time. She threw the bed-sheet in a hurry..tied her hair in a pony..pushed Mayank aside who was spiking his hair up..dressed in formals..(Okay he was looking hot; but she was in a HURRY) picked up the towel and rushed inside the washroom. Mayank sighed...thinking if she would ever change. He had no hopes.

Nupur came out wearing a red salwar suit, the same that she had worn during the meet with his mom. Her untangled hair fell on her shoulders as she dabbed some kajal over her eyes and a little compact powder. She slipped into a pair of gold heeled shoes. She then took a hair brush and started setting her hair. She tied her fringe in the front with a clip creating a buff. She left the other hair loose.
She turned to Mayank. "How do I look?"

But he was totally lost into her. "Hmmm.." He just blabbered.

"What??" She asked with her eyes wide. "Im not looking nice?" She turned back to the mirror and looked at herself.

He got out of his trance and giggled at her behavior. "Nupur! Your looking nice only. Now come Ill drop you. See the time you are already late." She glanced at the watch and started hurrying out of the door.

"Kya Mayank..tumhare wajah se Im always late. Uggh. Chalo ab!!" She said to him as he stared at her angrily.

"Mere wajah se late?" His voice echoed.

"Okay okay whatever. Main neeche wait karti hun. So hurry up." She said in a guilty voice. "Bye." She went down the stairs.

Mayank smiled as he adjusted his tie and went down.

They sat in the car and soon Muskaan's house came. "So Ill see you at night??" He asked.

"Yes..yes you will. Bye." She smiled and got down from the car. She shut the door and turned towards him but stayed silent.

"Thank You to bolo Nupur.." He said in a sarcastic tone.

Nupur grinned. "Oho..thank you and all hun." She moved a little and leaned towards the window and caressed her finger on his cheek. "Thank You main raat ko bolunge..Byee..." She said in a seducing tone. When she had turned she burst out laughing; she turned back to see Mayank's expressions.

He gulped and muttered a "paagal ho gaye" expression and left from there. She still kept looking at his path. She found him totally adorable.
Nupur and Muskaan sat on her bed and were gossiping as usual.

"Toh madam is finally hooked up with Rahul only hun?" She said hitting her shoulder.

Muskaan blushed for the first time ever. "Nupur! Shut up. Mera chod. How is Mayank?" She asked with a grin.

Nupur lowered her eyes. "Ya hes fine only..usse kya hua? "

"Is some one blushing hun??" Muskaan asked shocked bending to look over her.

"Get lost.." Nupur shouted getting up.

"Okay sorry meri ma..." She giggled. "Everything is fine na Nupur?" Muskaan's voice turned serious.

"Yes madam. All okay. Now its your time. What say lets have a spinsters bash?" She said with a wink.

"Nupur you are not a spinster any more!!"

"So what you are?? So lets party.." Nupur interrupted.

Both the friends looked at each other and started laughing..they fell on the bed laughing.

There was a minute silence.

"Muskaan...?"

"Hmm.."

"Mayank is very nice..and I like him." She said softly.

Muskaan just gave her a tight hug. "All the best madam!!" , those words made her day.

"But Samrat I dont want to bunk the class!! Please will you listen to me. Just one more class till 6..then well .."

It was almost 5 in the evening and Samrat had finished his work. "Cmon Gunjan..tumne kitne saalon se movie nahin dekhi hai??" He said sarcastically.

"Hmmm..." Gunjan was thinking while walking. "I think.."

"Gunjan!! Your such a dodo!! Lets go." He said hitting his head and pulling her hand towards the car.

They were sitting in Band Bajaa Baarat. Samrat passed her the popcorn as they saw the movie.

"Pata hai Samrat ..thanks for bringing me here. Maine bahut time se theatre nahin aaye." She said this time with a smile.

"I know Chashmish. Its okay." He smiled back.

They continued to watch the movie with comments and laughter. But one scene left both of them dumbstruck. The scene where Ranveer-Anushka kissed.

Gunjan stared with her mouth open and lowered her eyes , meanwhile Samrat giggled seeing her expressions. "Gunjan its just a kiss. Relax." He patted her hand.

"Eeew" She said in a soft voice.

"What??" He asked.

"Kuch nahin." It was the interval, so Gunjan quickly got up seeing the lights on. Samrat smiled seeing her behaviour.

Gunjan was just walking around the washroom. "So embarassing..how do I go inside again now? Ya..Ill just go home!! Nooo..I cant. Okay concentrate. Relax Chashmish..I mean Gunjan. Its all okay!!" She gathered up courage and went back inside and sat down. Samrat smiled so she too smiled back.

The movie started again.

"Gunjan..tumne..kabhi bhi..hmm..kisi ko kiss nahin kiya hai na?"

"K...Kya??" She asked shocked. "Hmm.." She shook her head.

He smiled as he put his hands over her. "Its okay...apne aap samajh main aa jayega."

"What do you mean?" She asked raising her eyebrows.

With her hand, he pulled her closer; she got nervous and closed her eyes. He just sat there staring at her. He slowly moved towards her and pecked her lips. The kiss lasted for only a few seconds. He moved away ..and her eyes were still closed. He kissed her cheek with a smile and she opened her eyes. Silence was the only thing that spoke.

After a few minutes.."Chashmish?"

"Hmm..?"

"Kiss is not 'eww'...its beautiful.Okay?" He said in a strict tone.

She smiled and nodded. She put her arm around his arm and placed her head on his shoulder.

Samrat was surprised by her actions but he maintained his calm. He was angry upon himself. He shouldnt have kissed her. Maybe the time would have been right but the place wasnt. He decided he wouldn't do anything again without her permission. But whatever happened seemed really special. He entwingled his fingers with her and kissed her fore-head.

Samrat had called Nupur and told her that Gunjan was with him and they are going out for dinner. So it was her duty to lie and convince Mayank. As she unlocked the door..she smiled. Hearing Samrat's words she was happy that things were finally working out between them...and thats was what she wanted the most. She went to her room and removed her jewellery and went to get dinner ready.


Mayank came home an hour later. They sat down for dinner.

"Gunjan nahi dikh rahe?" Mayank asked.

"Hmm..woh apne friend ke saath dinner pe gaye hai..phone aaya tha uska.." She said going back to her food quickly.

"Okay..good..Im glad shes socializing a little."

"What??"

"Nahi kuch nahin." He forced a smile.

After Nupur cleared up the table and did the dishes she went on top to her room. Mayank was already on his laptop facebooking. He had already changed. She too changed. Hearing the bell, she went down to open the door.

"Gunjan..hi..kaisa tha tumhara din?" Nupur asked.

"Haan bhabhi it was..very nice.." She smiled. "Okay good night."

"Gunjan..if you ever need anything to share...Im always there ok..dont forget that please."

Gunjan felt so amazed. "Bhabhi.." She hugged Nupur. "I will. Promise."

"Okay ab so jao." She cupped her face. "Good night."

"Bye."

Nupur went back to her room..Mayank was waiting for her.

"Gunjan?" He asked. She nodded. "How was your day Nupur? Preparations kaise chal rahe hain?"

She was back in the energy mode. "Haan everything is going really well. What to say!! Pata hai aaj main Rahul se mili..arre Muskaan's 'guy' " she said with a wink. "Hes so sweet..they are so cute together Mayank I tell you..." After talking so much she finally felt relieved...and gave a big smile.

"Oh..ho gaya? Itni jaldi?"

"Hawww!!" She smacked him with the pillow.

"Acha waise aaj mujhe raat ko ek special Thank You milne waala tha? Where is it?" He asked with a wink.

"Mayank..chiii..your so sick. I dont want to talk to you." She became pink and got up from the bed.

"Arre batao na pleasee Nupur." He said tugging her arm as he walked behind her teasing her.

"Woh..woh to maine aise hi keh diya tha.." She said walking backwards.

"Aise hi??" He asked walking towards her. She reached the wall.

"Ofo Mayank..Dont irritate me. Im going to sleep!!" He put his right arm blocking her..and he grinned.

"You think its funny?" She made a face as she moved to the other side. He blocked the other side with his left side.

He was not saying anything but just staring at her. She kept both her hands on his chest to push him...but her hands froze there as she was not able to do anything under his sharp gaze.

"M..Mayank..I..." She fumbled with her words.

Mayank caught both her hands and placed them on either side and moved close. Nupur was breathing hard as she didn't know what was happening. The whole world seemed spinning around her when she heard his voice.

"Nupur are you okay with this?" He asked in a serious tone.

She looked deep into his eyes and said nothing. She was trembling. He slowly left her hands and moved a little back. But Nupur caught him and hugged him tight. He was just calming her by rubbing her back.

"Nupur Im sorry. Main toh sirf mazak kar raha tha. I didnt mean to make you nervous."

"Mayank..aaj pata nahin maine na tumhe bahut miss kiya.." She said hiding herself in him.

He broke the hug. "And why is that?"

"Simply..I dunno." She looked down.

He moved really close to her and cupped her cheeks. "Can I kiss you?"

She slowly nodded and closed her eyes as she felt Mayank coming closer. He placed his lips upon hers and softly kissed her. He was again in for a surprise when Nupur responded and kissed him back. It was the best moment of their life.

Nupur kept her hands on his chest and he pulled her from her waist. They broke from the kiss after a few minutes their fore-heads rested on each others as they tried to grasp what had even happened.

Nupur soon feeling so shy moved away from there. "I think I should I sleep now. Good night." She went and lied down on the bed. Mayank too went and lied down maintaining a distance from her. He too covered himself with the bedsheet. But after a few minutes..the tension died down and there was only a smile on both their faces.

"I think I should talk to her." "I think I should talk to him." Both of them turned dashing their heads with each other.

"Ouch ouch." Nupur shouted. "Mayank!!"

"Nupur..Im so sorry. Really sorry. Kahan lagi dikhao.." He said rubbing her fore-head.

"Chodo...Im fine." She said pushing his hand. "Kya hua? Tumhe kuch bolna hai?"

"Nahin..toh..tumhe??"

She shook her head.

"Okay..good night." He muttered turning to his right side.

"Mayank your such an idiot." She said to herself.

"What?" He again turned.

"Nothing nothing." She said guilty.

He turned and caught both her hands. "Who is an idiot?" He asked.

"Idiot? How do I know?"

"Acha Ill tell you who is an idiot.."
He said increasing the grip.

"Okay okay Im sorry..sorry Mayank..chodo mujhe.." She said screaming now.

He kissed her cheek and left her hands. "Good night."

She just stared at him and smiled.
Please guys no comparison..whos got more scenes..Ive already written this with difficulty..Plz do comment :) and let me know ur views! :)
Edited by -Mansi- - 14 years ago
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''can i kiss you?'' oh god! you know my whole world just stopped when i came upto that line. its just mayank. only mayank in the wide world could ask this with so much innocence and honesty. no wonder i've fallen for him hard. and so is nupur. excitedly waiting for their confession to take place.
thanks for the awesome update and try to update the next part soon.

ps:i'm the first one to comment!yeippy!!!!!
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mansi it ws worth the wait...such an awesome part..loved it..specially the sajan part..though it ws less bt still really nice...specially the kiss scene made me blush...so adorable..loved it alot..
thnx fr the pm..
cont. soon
ambika
Edited by ambikamuskaan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww...mansi dis ws soo heavenly..i always wait to get da updates n da wait makes it worth...😳

i soo soo soo loved dis update...😃
forstly sajan..awww how cute...😉
gunji in theathre feeling shy n den da kiss...blissful ...😍
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n mayur...m simply out of words at dis moment...😍
i cnt express how muc i loved dem...❤️
mansi..dis ws surely da best...👍🏼
it made my day (oopps night?)...😉
aww..da way he asks her...

truely amamzing...👏
tczzz
loads of love dear...😊
plzzz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
it was beautiful Mansi😍
but why no pm??😕

~jiya~

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