My First OS: Before The End - Page 2

Originally posted by: brainychild92

is this from my sister's keeper or did u write it yourself? omg its amazing.. i cried.. especially the last line... it just goes to show that there are so many people who love you but there are some who will go to any extent to see you happy.. her mom loves her.. but her sister gave up her life to see her sister happy..in peace... even tho that meant letting go of her family....

thank you for the pm. i would've missed something really great if you hadn't sent it!

This is like the story of My Sister's Keeper but it has its own significant diffferences. You'd know if you tally both the novel and this.. .I have deleted a lot of things and created an overall new ending for it. . That was a little less sad ending in the novel but this is the ultimate edge of it.

Thanks for appreciating, it means a lot to me.

Regards,

Nidhi. :)

Originally posted by: phoenixgirl

nice story!!

touching....

Thanks a lot. =D

Awesome os
loved it
was amazing
thanks 4 da pm

Originally posted by: Divya_kaldivya

Beautifully written Nidhi..

Thanks a lot for your appreciation. =)

Originally posted by: kashndsel4eva

Awesome os
loved it
was amazing

thanks 4 da pm

Thank you so much. =D

awesome os yaar

very touching u have me in tears loved the sisterly love totally beautiful thanks 4 da pm

Rez!

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Okay... Now I'm a li'l composed.... This is one piece or writing which will always be very very clost to my heart....Coz, I've witnessed something like this in real life....

I mean.. its nothing similar to this... But... still the whole thing connected to the hospital and all.... jus took me back to those sleepless nights, those anxious days .... I buried them deep deep down... but your OS brought them out... 😕

Will tell you the story... later on... 😆

And your OS... is err..... Heart touching .... It seriously is... You've put some magic into it... which showz.... Its beautiful in every way...

I totally love the way you wrote it Nidzi...

Kudos to you girl! 👏

Amazing work!! ...... ⭐️

And which novel is that??..

Love
Sharmi

Originally posted by: ARMAANKSGFAN

awesome os yaar

very touching u have me in tears loved the sisterly love

it was so sweet

totally beautiful thanks 4 da pm

Thanks a lot!! =D

Originally posted by: sariska_mnarti

amazing os

loved it

Thanks a lot Sariska.. =)

Originally posted by: -Sharmila-

Rez!

*Edited*

😭

😭

😕

Okay... Now I'm a li'l composed.... This is one piece or writing which will always be very very clost to my heart....Coz, I've witnessed something like this in real life....

I mean.. its nothing similar to this... But... still the whole thing connected to the hospital and all.... jus took me back to those sleepless nights, those anxious days .... I buried them deep deep down... but your OS brought them out... 😕

Will tell you the story... later on... 😆

And your OS... is err..... Heart touching .... It seriously is... You've put some magic into it... which showz.... Its beautiful in every way...

I totally love the way you wrote it Nidzi...

Kudos to you girl! 👏

Amazing work!! ...... ⭐️

And which novel is that??..

Love
Sharmi

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Oye, kaun si story?? Mujhe pakka batana!

Thank you so much such a lengthy and lovely comment dear! =D

Seriously, I too loved it while writing.. .

The novel is "My Sister's Keeper". Its one of the best I have ever read. Waise, iss OS mein aur usmein kaafi kam similarities hain. I have made many many changes. The ending here is much more saddening than in the novel.

Love,

Nidhi. :)