MAYUR FF...Unexpected Magic. - Page 34

mehak the most beautiful confession 😍

wow !!!!!!

i have a feeling that all the words they said about niagras are actually your own feelings. tell the truth-niagras your heaven,right?
their story is unbelievable. just like magic- you dont believe them but want to see(in this case read) more.

cofession was jst amazing!!!!it was awesum..

o God mehak, it is so out bloody standing, nothing could be better than this!!

awesome update that was romantic!

i was in tears while readings..mayank wors infact ur words were juz out of world..one of the best confession i ever read...loved it dear..........................

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Reserved for Part 11&12.

I'm sorry i'm so late, was out of town just came back today...so will catch up very soon today and comment :)

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Part 11...

Very endearing part you have presented Mehak, the way you portrayed their connection is too cute!😳 And the sketch ...when he saw ...his eyes spoke so much without him having to say it ..😍..hmmph confession at naigara falls...how serene...I have been their and Mehak its soo beautiful especially in winter...the water kinda frozen, you stand their with a cup of freshly brewed coffee and watch the water fall is just Beautiful

Part 12

. u make me smile, u make me laugh, , u make me loose my senses, u make me love my life, u make me love this world, u give meaning to my life'u complete my life nupur'u complete me '

Mehak this sentence is just out of this world, simple words yet so much emotions filled into it.! The cofession was soo cute i was reading but really more so i was imagining it happen all in my mind. It was so honest and truly beautiful

And then the Kiss☺️...that just kicked the ball out of the park.

Kudos for such a wonderful updatethat have me on the edge of my seat.

Sajjal

WOW>.......

k i am speechless right now