MAYUR FF...Unexpected Magic. - Page 33

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PART 12

Mayank and nupur reached the Niagara falls at about 10 am in the morning, they had traveled about 3 hours in the train.

They went to their hotel straight. They got the keys from the reception'

M..Nupur ab plz ziyada time waste nahi karna hai hai aisey kamre main beth kar pehle hi hum bus ik din k liye aye hain

N..oh ho ho thora sans to le lijiye abhi tu hum aye hain.

She took of her shoes and lied down on the bed..

N..wiase bhi main bht thak gayi ho thori dair so jate hain phir bahir chaley gey..

M..nupur not fair, ye kia baat hoyi

N...dekhiye abhi so jate hain, phir raat ko dair tak bhair rahen gey..ok..waise abhi bht thand hai bahir..

M..tu raat ko kia garmiyan a jaye gi aur mujhe neend nahi ayi..

Nupur was looking at him with a sweet smile'and when mayank looked at her..

M.. ik jo tum mujhe apni smile se blackmail karti ho na'bus ik ghanta soye gey hum..ziyada nahi,..

He pulled the sheet over him and turned to the other side, trying to show his anger....

Nupur just smiled and switched off the lights and they both went to sleep..

It was about 4 in the evening, when nupur woke up she turned towards mayank and he was still sleeping, she pulled the blanket over him properly

She herself opened their luggage and took out the clothes they both were going to where

Mayank opened his eyes and nupur was struggling with the luggage..

M..Dekha sham ho gai hai,., hum kitna late ..

N..tyarr ho jaiye..

She handed him his clothes..Her sweet smile and her sweet gesture made him forget all his anger'but he still tried to show some of it..

Mayank got ready, and when he came out of the wash room nupur was speechless..

Black jeans with a black V-shaped collar loose sweater, as usual full sleeves were pulled up till his elbows, he was looking so handsome..

M..ab tum bhi jaldi sse..

His voice made her come back to the world'

N..ok ok, ap neche lobby mian jaiye'mian tyaar ho k ati ho..

M..Haan ok, jaldi ana'

Mayank went down stairs, he was sitting in the lobby studying the map of naigra falls when nupur came from the stairs'

Blue jeans, with a baby pink loose high neck sweater till her thighs, a baby pink shawl wrapping her , wearing a small amount of sindoor on her forehead, wearing light make up, and light gloss on her lips.. and her open hair, tucked behind her ears, and half of them brought forward from both the shoulders. She was looking BEAUTIFUL..

N..chalen

her voice made him come out of his magic'

M..ummm..haan'

They stepped out of the hotel and chilled breeze welcomed them'

The fall was on walking distance so they started walking, as they were moving close they could hear the voice of water falling from height. they finally reached a walk-way built on slight steps, they climbed the steps and '

The first view of the NIAGRA FALLS'

Gigantic mountains, with a huge stream of water falling from the tip of the mountain to its base, wetting all the surrounding places.., it was spread on a number of mountains'' a huge walkway was made for the tourists, which had barriers'but their were ways to walk down, to experience the real water fall, the base was covered with rocks and,... and as it was December so there was snow covering all the mountains, but the water was flowing, pushing the snow from its way with utmost force'.the weather was clouded'all the trees by the side of the fall were covered with snow, with small red flowers on them,

M..beautiful..

N..Mesmrising

M..enchanting..

N'captivating..

They both unconsciously held each other's hand'and spoke together'

M & N'.Its HEAVEN!!...

They both looked at each other and smiled'they moved forward till the barrier.

They voice of water falling and seeing water fall in front of their eyes from such huge height to the base was seriously a life time experience'

it was a larger than life view water truely at its heighest peak of beauty was here

There weren't many people bcz of the weather, it was chilled weather, but everyone who was there was spellbounded

Mayank held nupur hand more tightly..

M..yehi sketch kiya tha na tum ne?..

Nupur looked at him and smiled, he had really fulfilled her dream.

Thy walked through the whole path-way., the water fall noise was musical, mayank had coffee from a near by shop..

M..cutee u cannot enjoy without coffee,

N...koi baat nahi, ap enjoy kar rahe ho merey liye itna hi kafi hai

Every time Mayank was left speechless by nupur's affection.

M..acha chalo niche chaltey hain, is mountain ki base pe,..lets sit on the rocks ..

N..haan cahliyen..

They moved down the path way, there were paths made, there was none, as the night was falling so the amount of people also reduced more..

They both moved down the path and reached the base of the mountain

The view from here was again a whole new world'seeing water falling at ur footsteps was something which could not be explained in words..

Mayank sat on a rock but nupur was standing there seeing water and gently placing her hands in the water..

M..nupur ye kia kar rahi ho?..

N..please bus thori dair

This peaceful environment made him remember all his past with nupur, his life had changed after nupur entered, and now he wasn't able to imagine his life without her..

She was playing with the water. Mayank was staring at her,

innocent, cute, bubbly, sincere, beautiful, hardworking,

she was the perfect girl, the perfect wife

Love , care, affection,...she had done everything for Mayank'

Never asked for a return, never complained, never demanded'

She was so selfless

All the events started flashing in front of mayank's eyes..the first time he saw her..in the red lehnga..the mehndi of her hands..her wet hair...her nervous looks ..her beautiful smile..her confident smirks...her childish threats..her worried expressions..the glow on her face...the innocence of her eyes..

Mayank was all again lost in Nupur.

Nupur took off her shawl and handed to mayank..

N..ye zara pakriye

She herself pulled her sleeves till her elbows and started playing with the water.some of it wetting her hair

N..uff itna thanda pani hai

Her voice made her remember the words she said to her that she was living her dreams,mayank was the one she had always dreamt off.

Mayank felt so satisfied after remembring her confession now his own feelings, his own subconscious began to take over him..

His wife was standing in front of him, playing with water, with her hair getting wet and her innocent gestures made his heart flow.

finally his feelings and his emotions became so strong that they were moulded into words

he knew what to say,how to say

M.. yahan aao nupur..

Mayank's voice had so much authority and love that nupur was surprised,

M..mere pas betho

Nupur was lost in the magic of his eyes..this was the UNEXPECTED MAGIC, she had never seen such an expression in mayank's eyes

Nupur smiled and sat down., she gently placed her head on his shoulder.

Nupur's closeness made mayank feel the bliss of love.

N..i don't believe that something can be so mesmerizing'I love water places per ye jagah tu

M..its magical.aisa lag raha hai hai k pechli sari zindagi bhol gaya ho..it feels as if I have nthing in my life except this flowing water and...

Nupur said in a mischevious tone..

N..and me

Mayank smiled..

M..of course and you

She held his arm more tightly..

N..acha app se ik baat pochon..

M..pocho

Nupur gently raised her head from his shoulder

N..ap ko ye pani dekh kar kia yaad ata hai

M..mtlb?..

N..mtlb when we entered tu sab se pehle ap k zehn main kia aya?..

M..beauty.. peace ..magic ..love

N..love?..

M..haan..love..anyone can fall in love at such a beautiful place'

N..oh!...so have started understanding love..hmmmm

M..yes I have..tum ne sikhaya hai nupur..

Nupur straightened her head, and looked into his eyes'

M...u have taught me how to love..u have taught me the most beautiful thing of life'

Nupur lowered her eyes, her lips having a gentle smile, her cheeks going red, she gently titled her head, as to avoid eye contact with him, she was about to leave his arm, but mayank held her hand tightly.

M...meri taraf dekho nupur...

She was too shy to lift her head and look at him, but she looked at him..

M... u know u make me feel special nupur...u make me feel worth living...

Mayank was constantly staring in her huge beautiful eyes,

M... u make me smile, u make me laugh, , u make me loose my senses, u make me love my life, u make me love this world, u give meaning to my life..u complete my life nupur..u complete me ..

Nupur was staring mayank, she was totally still.

M...Nupur completes Mayank...

Tears had started forming in nupur's eyes'her eyes started sparkling in the moonlight..

M... I love u nupur.

Nupur was stunned, speechless.

Mayank finally gave voice and words to his feelings,

nupur had never asked for a return, but getting it had always been her dream'

M...I love u

Mayank moved more close, 'and nupur closed her eyes, allowing all the tears to flow from her eyes'She had wanted to listen this from so long and now her lips were trembling to give the answer..she opened her eyes..

N..ap..mujhe se..pyar..

M..haan, main ne tum se kaha tha na..jis din tum se pyar karon ga us din tumhain bata don ga.shiyed itni busy life main main ne kabhi hamare bare main socha hi nahi..aur jab tumhain ghor se dekhne ka pehli baar mauqa mila..tumhare bare main sochne a mauqa mila tu foran pata chala gay ik its love...i love u nupur.

Nupur couldnt believe her luck, WAS IT REAL??...her own lips were stammering '

N..ap sach keh rahe ho?..

M..tumhari kasam..

Nupur felt as if the whole world had fallen to her feet..she had conquered the world's most blissful happiness..her lips still trembling..

N..I..I..I love u too..

Mayank gave her the smile she could die for...gently collided his forehead with her's

M..I know baby..

She softly smiled and hugged him, tightly clutching his sweater in her fists, with eyes firmly closed as if wanting to freeze this moment. Mayank also tightly held her, his hands caught in her hair.

Mayank slowly separated her from himself, her tears constantly flowing...

He gently wiped them off with the tip of his thumb,

and moved forward, nupur closed her eyes

Her breath was becoming fast and her lips were slightly parted away, gently trembling....Mayank held her face in his hands more firmly...gently rubbing his thumb on her cheek..

He moved more close, finishing every bit of distance between them...pressing his lips against her's

The first touch of love...the first feeling of being connected to each other...the first kiss

And to celebrate their first kiss, nature showered snow flakes

You brought me in tears Madam ... it had so much to it and Mayank's words just cant ... I messed it up - Okay, Mayank's words are really close to my heart for the obvious reasons ... actually the whole confession was beautiful and was really special ... I can't talk about Nupur but I can go on with Mayank ... the realisation of the feelings - was subtle and too real for me to handle ... I am still having tears in my eyes and I so want to thank you for writing this beautiful part ... you may write many parts to this story and I know all of them will be wonderful but this one will remain my favourite of all ... this one is the most special one ... the flow of love; emotions; tears and the tenderness is beyond everything .... Thank you so much ...👏😭👏👏

huh, when i was reading the niagara fall description i started feeling the waters around me
i swear, you describe things perfectly and way too beautifully.
i just loved this part and mayu's sweet confession
aww.........cute and sweet kiss. that was really good

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edited
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awesome written
I am totally speechless
confession part was awesome

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awwwwwwwwwwwww m drooling!😉😳😳😳😳😉

mehak ......🤗 i am left speechless after reading this part ........... it was sooooooooo beautifully written ........😍 the way you have potayed the flow of emotions ............it was marvellous 👏........... loved it soooooo much ....cant express it in mere words ...........you are such an amazing writer ...........👍🏼.......do continue soon ..............it hasto be one of the best FF's i have ever read ................loving it more nd more ...............