Maaneet SS: Shaadi&SuhaagRaat COMPLETED pg:1,10,19

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Razz22

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Posted: 14 years ago

#141

GOD!!

*faints* i shall let u know more wen i ave recovered....

Edited by Amreen22 - 14 years ago

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salma

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Posted: 14 years ago

#142

OMG OMG yasu i as told u yesterday that i will read it all today !! well i read all three parts together !!!

1st and 2nd chappie was beautifully written👏

and now onto the 3rd chappie WOAH WOAH WOAH

reserved for rest of comment till i recover

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well not really recovered!!! 😆 but W*F was that YASU. frickkin amazing!!!😲😲😲 I have read it like thrice !!

U should seriously start writing an FF or something coz ur damn good in wat u do!!!

This topic is sure gonna blast by the evening 😆😆

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bd670816

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Posted: 14 years ago

#143

awesome os yasu. loved it very much.

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ansah

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Posted: 14 years ago

#144

hey that was so awesome....really loved it..

great update...thankuuuuuu🤗...

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sheena

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Posted: 14 years ago

#145

OMG!!U left me ☺️i still cannot stop blushing!!It was just splendid honey...love it...u rock girl n i literally mean it!!!🤗

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Fatima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#146

Yaz it was very ahem ahem☺️!!! U gave us just what we wanted!!! You r awesome girl!!! can u believe it, this is the first thing i was looking forward to as soon as i woke up!!! hai ur stories have made me very besharam. yes yes i'll blame my besharmi on u😆😉..OMG if ur mom saw this u would so be a goner😆..anyway would it be asking too much if i say u continue this, like give us a morning after scene😉 pretty please!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Muniza Riaz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#147

Omg killing killing killing update, just awesome, lovely, so sizzling....Thanks for the update, thanks for making the weekend so special....Love MaanEet.....

Muniza

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Serenity_me

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Posted: 14 years ago

#148

😳,,,,,,,continue wid maneet first morning,,,geet wid wet hairs , geet saying wake up maan,,,,wid his fav coffee,,,n ahem ahem....😳

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Absoluv

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Posted: 14 years ago

#149

☺️SUPERB WORK YASSU....👏...It was so decently written yet it was HOTTTTTTTTTTTTTT.....😉

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bahane

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Posted: 14 years ago

#150

dear yasu
thank you for your wonderful ff👏👏👏
i think it should be so difficult to write about this kind of scene,isn't it????????
to be honest i was expecting more passion and emotion especially in the last part!!!!!!!
and the last line of geet 😲
but please dont be upset, it is my big problem (high expectation) 😕i should solve it by myself!!!!!
you made their union especially the last part seem real 😉but i ..... just forget it😳

thanks again for your interesting ff
best wishes

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