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Posted: 14 years ago
#51
congrats for new thread.
awesome parts.loved it.
so anu and maan are rbo.
any way make anu suffer and make maaneet united soon.
continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
Keyama..!! u r doing gr8 update...!!! 👏👏👏👏
Luv ur new FF...!!!!😃
OMG..!! Anu is maan Bro...!!!!😲
poor Geet y is happening wiv her...!!
Dev nahi tou Anu agaya Maan aur Geet ke beach main...!!!! ufff
lolz...Interesting Maan liking MOUSE...!!! hehhehe😆😆😆😆
poor soul nt accepting his feeling... he thinks he doesnt deserved it...!!!
OMG..!!! 😲Geet think Maan she do such thinks...!! lolz he change...!! cant u see Geet...!!!!
Keyama i find this funny...!!!😆😆😆
Lamo...seriously...!!!!! RADULA...AS DRECULA....hehehehe🤣🤣🤣
"Through out the meeting radula couldn't remove her gaze from maan"
sori...huh..i know..v ask 4 updates ASAP..u dont et chance 2 re-read it...!!!! 😆😆😆😆
yeah!!! did u notice had Dadi' son have giving his Sons names as ulta aplha order...!!!!! lolz...😆
Maan, Dev and Anurag...!! hehehehe😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53

part 29


As they started to eat.... Maan became really uncomfortable.... Geet ordered extra extra hot.... She was munching way.... While maan giving her an angry glare....
Maan: you had to order spice!
Geet: hmm... OMG sir.... Being a man you can't eat hot food!
Maan gave her another glare...
Maan: I can!
Geet: in HP men like you can eat... Idk 100s of chilly! And this chicken is only with hot sauces!
Maan getting more angry... Defiantly not liking geet talking about other men!
Maan: I can eat hot food!
Geet: aca! Then who was complaining few minutes ago?
Maan: geet!
Maan ate all the food... while Staring at geet angrily....
Maan just looked at geet eating 1/2 chicken then rice... Then garlic bread.... chips.... then 3 glasses of drink.... (ok i didn't eat that much ... lol....)
Maan: how much can you eat?
Geet: I am hungry! Don't disturb me! And stope talking about my apatite! I don't eat like a mouse!
Maan fuming: I don't eat like a mouse....
Geet: yea yea... We can see that... With pasta anyone can eat like a lion... They are soft... But when it come to chicken.... What happens to the show off... In are HP men eats like a lion....
Maan became really irritated and took two more chicken... And ate like a lion...

Geet started to laugh.... All the girls went FIDA over him.... he looked too quiet.....

Maan: happy!
Geet: there... Now you attracting some decent girls attention....
Maan looked round in confusion.... All the girls was drooling over him....
Geet laughed...
Maan looked at her angrily..... Geet puts her hand on her mouth... But no use.... She couldn't stope laughing....

For a moment maan was lost in her.... Loved the way he just made her eat like a lion.....

As they finished.... Maan paid the bill and walked out.....
Geet giggling behind him...

Maan: what is it?
Geet: nothing!
Maan: why are you giggling?
Geet: why? Can't I giggle!
Maan looked at her angrily and sat in the car...
Geet: hmm....
Maan: what is it?
Geet: didn't you like any of the girl?
Maan: geet....
Geet: sorry! Dadi told me to find you a good girl!
Maan: I can find one my self!
Geet: yea... Rasika!
Maan: geet! He shouts....
Geet: umm.... How about that one?
Bothe looked at the lady with 2 child....
Maan looked at her angrily.... Then slowly Bothe burst out in laugh....
Geet: sorry... Thy was a bit mean....
Maan smile....
Geet: keep smiling.... You look nice....
Maan was lost in her eyes.... To control he looked way....
Geet was trying her best to cheer him up.... She was absence of the fact that maan is upset because of her.... Not because of Sammera.... Maan understood she was trying her best to add some colour to his black and White life.... But nothing seems to work.... Because she was the colour that maan needed in his life...

Bothe made it to the next meeting... It was much better... No rasika or a girl... To flirt with maan.... She looked hyper... Maan was confused... Along with geet her self....

Few days have passed... Meeting after meeting.... No relaxing time... Nune at all....

Anu calls her... Geet was in washroom... So maan had no other option then to answer...
Maan: hello!
Anu surprised.... A man!
Anu: who is dis?
Maan: umm... Maan sing Khurana.... Anu nearly drooped the phone... He looked at his watch... 9:00 pm....
Maan: who is dis?
Anu: geets mangeter anu!
Maan stood there silent.... The word Geets Mangeter started to buzz in his head....
Anu new exactly what could make him tremble.... He somehow knew what he felt about geet.... Something deep serious.....

There was silent on the phone for a minute... None spoke....
Anu: umm.... Can I talk to geet!
Maan no answer.... He was lost in his thought....
Anu: hello!
Maan: hmm... Yes!
Geet walks out...

Maan: it's anu!
Geet became happy instently.... There was a day when her smile used to make maans day... But today the smile seems to hurt maan.... Why he was in pain.... Even knew the fact geet could be never his...

Maan walked out.... To give her some privacy....


Next: maan... drinks'



ooooo' what do you think will happen''.. hehehe

ONE room'

Maan angry ' possesive' and hmmm' Drunk' or not'????

awwwww

lol

leave u to solve'


loved all the comments

ok i want some more'.. what do u think will happen??? OR what do you want them ' u know' heheeh😈

:D

xxxxx

Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
hey all the three parts are awsome ........👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼 hmmmmmm not lik anu😡 continue soon😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: charmed ones

Keyama..!! u r doing gr8 update...!!! 👏

Luv ur new FF...!!!!😃
OMG..!! Anu is maan Bro...!!!!😲
poor Geet y is happening wiv her...!!
Dev nahi tou Anu agaya Maan aur Geet ke beach main...!!!! ufff
lolz...Interesting Maan liking MOUSE...!!! hehhehe😆
poor soul nt accepting his feeling... he thinks he doesnt deserved it...!!!
OMG..!!! 😲Geet think Maan she do such thinks...!! lolz he change...!! cant u see Geet...!!!!
Keyama i find this funny...!!!😆😆😆
Lamo...seriously...!!!!! RADULA...AS DRECULA....hehehehe🤣🤣🤣
"Through out the meeting radula couldn't remove her gaze from maan"
sori...huh..i know..v ask 4 updates ASAP..u dont et chance 2 re-read it...!!!! 😆
yeah!!! did u notice had Dadi' son have giving his Sons names as ulta aplha order...!!!!! lolz...😆
Maan, Dev and Anurag...!! hehehehe😆😆😆




hahahah ty hun… i have to fix that lol
it suppose to say Rasika lol… typing error… i so have to reread my ff… lol befor update… and yea… lol…. alpha order

i guss….. heheh

loved ur comments
xxxxx

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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
nice one.. luved the dinner part.... do continue
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
wao jsut superb updtae omg maan...drink.. plz update soon plz plz
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
The restaurant part was good, funny actually😆😆
Ah, now I got to know you had a good mexican meal today😉

Maan-geet still sharing room?😉 I mean, few days have passed😆
Maan recognized Anurag's voice or did Anurag told him his name? I am a bit confused here😕


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Posted: 14 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: shivangi783

The restaurant part was good, funny actually😆😆

Ah, now I got to know you had a good mexican meal today😉

Maan-geet still sharing room?😉 I mean, few days have passed😆
Maan recognized Anurag's voice or did Anurag told him his name? I am a bit confused here😕



sorry… he said its anu… i edit it… now ck :D
xxxx😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
maan drunk = likely to blurt the truth!!!!!!!!!!!!
haha at one point i thought maan wud tell geet that he has thoughts about "a certain" girl n hw he feels hes not good enuf <<<<jus to see hw she wud react.....as in wud she be understanding or perhaps jealous??
then agen 1 question...........hws he knw its anu???
alsoo they r brothers?? - but but hes gettin angry on his brother??? and erm.........surely he must knw geet works for his bro???(so when he found out shes at KC...y no mention there?)(or did u jus make him the brother afterwards 😆)
neways................i think thats enuf for now

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