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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update... hey but i didnt get ur pm.. but no probs i read the part .. next time if possible plz add me
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: muskaan_cute19

hey gr8 part loved it du update soon
bt u didnt pmed
me i saw this accidentally


sorry, I will be more careful next time. I'm really sorry........
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: perfectflirt8

nice update... hey but i didnt get ur pm.. but no probs i read the part .. next time if possible plz add me


sorry, i will be more careful. I'm really sorry.
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part.....geet was 2 gd in her drunken state.......plzz add me to ur pm list......
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey nice part du update sson
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 25
Maan n geet walks walks more distance n then Maan reminder "O no car." n looks back. Geet asks him what "nothing our car..."
"car."
then a police van comes n stops before Maan n Geet.
Geet says "Great u said car n car came."
"Its not car n its van"
"Van... (looking at van.) O yes u r right its van."
"N that too police. God know what will happen now." thinks Maan.
Maan n Geet look at each other.
A police get down from the police van n comes near Maaneet.
"what r u doing at this time here."
Geet laughs louds n say "i wish who r u to ask."
listening to this police gets anger n Maan tension.
Maan whispers "shut up."
"AA u r asking this uncle to shut up. too bad."
police looks at maan seriously n Maan says " No.."
police come near Maan n says "U r asking me to shut up, great so sir what else should I do."
"No sir I did not say.........."
he holds Maan's collar n says " 1st learn to respect ur police, reminder that police r not ur servants that u speak to them the way u want."
Maan looks at police tensely n Geet looks at Maan sadly n says "sorry."
Police looks at Geet n says "see she atleast has some manners, I mean some." Maan looks at Geet n smiles n whispers "Its ok" seeing this Geet smiles. police who was looking at Geet goes near Geet n says "O no she drunk."
Geet moves her head right to left n says "No I'm not."
"r u sure."
"yes"
police turns towards Maan n says "lets go...."
"where ur home, I mean from today."
"means" says Maan. Maan n Geet both looked worried.
"jail."
"jails" shouts both Maan n Geet.
"yes jail."
"but y" asks Geet.
police turns towards geet n says "no u my girl, don't worry my assistant will drop u home." Geet gets relaxed.
Maan asks "i"
"u, u will come along with me ur ur new home."
"but sir...."
"what do u think of urself, It has become new trend to Make girl drunk n ........ chi don't u people feel ashamed while doing this with girls. Many cases like this has been reported in last 1 week but it was reported after......... but today this girl will be safe n will report again u before ......."
"but say I'm not like that."
"o everyone will say the same thing with they get caught ."
"sir she is my wife."
Geet is watching all this silently. police comes near Geet n asks "do u know him."
"yes"
"see sir" says Maan.
"wait.......u tell me from when u know him."
"2 weeks but everyone think 2 years."
listening this Maan hits his head with his hand. "what" says police.
Geet looks Maan doing that n remains silent n looks at police innocently.
"Mr, u r saying that she is ur wife but ........"
"I'm his wife but...."
"see sir."
"wait..........but."
geet puts her right forefinger on the right side of the head n hitting to 3 times says "i forgot."
Maan gets relaxed.
police says u Maan "u come here " n Maan goes.
"Give ur id card I will verify."
Maan give his visiting card to him n after seeing it he says " u r Maan singh Khurana."
"yes"
"O ok u can go."
"thank u. Geet....come."
there comes a taxi n maaneet gets into it n leaves.
Geet falls asleep i car as ther approached the guest house Maan tried to wake her up but she did not so he carried her in his arms. As he when into the house n as he was climbing the stairs Geet gets up n finds herself in Maans arms.
"leave me" she shouts. Maan looks at Geet n Geet says "leave me.."
then Geet gets up n looks at Maan seriously.
Maan says "u were sleeping n even after we here u did not get up n even I tried to wake u up but u did not so......"
"stupid."
"what??"
geet turns back n sees the entire house n shouts "help..help me.
Maan gets shocked n says "what?????what happen y r u shouting like this.' saying this Maan was coming near Geet.
'Maan don't come near me. don't come." saying this Geet was moving bcak.
"what's wrong with u."
"where u we?"
"o, u r drunk so I can't take u home so we r in guest house."
"Guest house."
"S"
"O..r u sure."
"yes"
"OK then"
then Maaneet goes upstairs.
After getting into the room Maan lies down on bed n Geet comes near Maan n says "get u"
"what?"
"get up"
Maan gets up n Geet lies down.
"hello."
Geet stands n says "everyday u should only sleep on bed."
"what?"
"Maan tell me is there n rule book that Maan Sigh Khurana should sleep on bed n geet on sofa. it has been 2 weeks that I came to u place n since then I'm sleeping only on sofa. Why??? u happily like a lord will sleep on bed n i with uncomfortably on sofa. why should only I sleep on sofa?
I was waiting for u to come n say I will sleep on sofa for today u sleep on bed, but no. Today I will sleep here n u there." Maan thinking about it says "Ok"
"I should get coffee everyday for u in the morning......why? u will speak so harshly to me..why? U don't care for me......why? I know that I have come here on a contract but it doesn't Mean that u don't give me respect or unimportance, behave the way u want n........." saying this Geet faints. Maan quietly n sadly puts her properly on bed n covers her with blanket n slowly walks out of the room thinking " did I behave so badly with her. May be..... who care....who care?? I care, I made her my friend so i should care, n I will" while closing the door he thinks " today is very special day for our relation , relation???? .......yes relation, our friendship .......as it is the day which told me what exactly Geet is...... the child in her........n at the same time her maturity, but why do I feel that I did not understand anything ,what n feeling is this ...why at the same time I feel I got to know a lot ........almost everything but nothing ( he sits on a chair) . today she told me may be only little about what she thinks about me n what she expects from me................. n as a friend I will try to stand up to her expectations ,God today I'm giving a change to friendship to come into my life again, I don't know how will it change my life this time........hope to good. though my mind is saying no, my heart is asking me to give a chance, hope this time I will have a better experience with friendship n this new friend Geet..............
Geet tomorrow is n new beginning........ "
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update
thanks for quick pm.
continue soon.
Edited by cutee987 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it dear... so a new beginning...waiting for the update dear...
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Posted: 14 years ago
so cute.....looking forward 4 the nxt update......
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awe that was so cute geet drunk and opened up a bit about what she thinks about maan and how he treats her and good to know that maan is going to give their 'friendship' a chance anyways great update and do continue soon 😊

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