Mayank&Nupur SS-Hum Jo Na Keh Paye[Last Part PG23] - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sajjal 🤗
Absolutely wonderful update! Really very well written! Bravo!
And I really like the way the story is going. Though I know both of them are heading towards doom but you write it in such a captivating manner that I just can't like it enough
And Nupur knows that ego only destroys love, but she doesn't love that she is harboring ego too! Interesting! =D
Amazing Sajjal!
Loved it <3
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks for PM'ing me...I didnt know about this FF. I loved both the chapters..Ego's do kill relations..

Looking forward to more parts! <3

Continue soon!

-Mansi
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey sajjal! u hv a very nice way of writing u know...easy to imagine .i love this ss so far..........ego clash between two ppl who love each other the most.....a very nice concept & i m waiting for ur next part.eagerly!!!!...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sajjal... Tht was a really nice update.. Egos do cost us our relations....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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'One moment you have the whole ocean surrounding you and the next u r all alone with nothing but bare sand'...i so loved this line...u r a genius...
This ff seems like a hollywood intense movie for me...U really have power in ur writing that pulled me like magnet...
I wanted to read this more and more but it ends...The concept is simple but ur writing made this an unique piece...
Sometimes our ego dont let us to be happy with our loving ones...
Very interesting...cont soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sajjal...this was a wonderful start to a wonderful FF😃😃

Thanks for the PM...😃

Hmm so both Mayank and Nupur have their reasons for pushing away ppl and hurting them...and why do i feel that they both do not know the stories behind each other's behaviour??? Anyways you always write wonderfully and it is no different this time as well...😃😃

Want to see Mr. Sharma's reaction when he sees Nupur getting engaged😃😃

A simple request...please make this a happy ending FF if you can...please😃😃😃😃😃

Once again, a brilliant start...do update soon😃😃


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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey sajjal

nice update..
ego do ruin relations!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sharma.nat

Beautiful part just loved it do continue soon

Thank You Dear

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Daania-

Sajjal 🤗

Absolutely wonderful update! Really very well written! Bravo!
And I really like the way the story is going. Though I know both of them are heading towards doom but you write it in such a captivating manner that I just can't like it enough
And Nupur knows that ego only destroys love, but she doesn't love that she is harboring ego too! Interesting! =D
Amazing Sajjal!
Loved it <

Hey Daania

Thank You so Much =) Yepp doom is one word for it lol:)

Aww i'm so gald u like it. I agree she fails to realize her own pride, while she wants destroy mayanks! confusing na!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Mansi-

Thanks for PM'ing me...I didnt know about this FF. I loved both the chapters..Ego's do kill relations..


Looking forward to more parts! <3

Continue soon!

-Mansi

hey mansi. well u know now =) so welcome and i'm very grateful that you like it.

Yep, ego is one special emotion that exists within all, its just that some learn to let go while others seem to hold on very tightly

will continue soon.

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