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Posted: 14 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: dmg_fanatic
yippie....am the first one to comment....lol

Man....u've got some talent.....just when i was typecasting u as some lovey dovey kinda writer....u gave this....

Am speechless.....the actions described so perfectly....everything so much in place...

Wonderful n different concept....written with a perfect choice of words framed perfectly....i cud see it all happening in frnt of me...

thank god they realized their feelings...rather thank tia n u....lol...

Looking forward to the next part...to c shilpa regain conciousness...

Thanxs ever so much for the pm
The part was superrocking..

Continue soon

Lotsa love
Kavs

hello!!!!!!!!

kavs dear!!!😉

first of all congrats for commenting 1st😛

well i loved to read your comments and they always make me feel pride of myself😃

yeah i choose a different concept coz i wanna be unique writer😆

ok i have praised myself enough😆

anyway thank u dear for your awesome comments

and its my pleasure to have readers like u😛

Love

Armaan😉

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KAVYA VIDYARTHI

@dmg_fanatic

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: shona_lover

hello!!!!!!!!
kavs dear!!!😉
first of all congrats for commenting 1st😛
well i loved to read your comments and they always make me feel pride of myself😃
yeah i choose a different concept coz i wanna be unique writer😆
ok i have praised myself enough😆
anyway thank u dear for your awesome comments
and its my pleasure to have readers like u😛
Love
Armaan😉

lolzz....okiess....better not be too much of a proudy.....lol....tht wnt help.....😛

No doubt u r an unique writer...perhaps the only one who praises his own work....😛

Well...awesome log awesome comment hi karte hai...😛

My pleasure to read such wonderful work...😃

Edited by dmg_fanatic - 14 years ago

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naureen

@Norz

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#153

lovely part
finally they realized their love 4 each other

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anumeha khanna

@anumeha_rajat

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#154

woowww amazing part..

loved it...

so tia was there to trap them...

n how did armaan errupt the lite...

waitng for next part...

update soon...

thnx for the pm......

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Aviator

@Mrs.Hulk

Stunner

Posted: 14 years ago

#155

Hey ARMAAN😛

sorry for late editing😆
Awesome part
Loved it totally
keep continue
Thanku for the PM😛

love
prinz😳

Edited by Prinnia - 14 years ago

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Shamima

@-shamima-

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#156

Ooh loving it and Aww they're both in love with each other and I liked how Tia noticed that armaan loves shilpa and told him that she was in danger and I wonder who that was and what the demon prince wants anyways great update and continue soon 😊

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prajna

@cupid-struck

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#157

hey!!this is sooo interesting ya...

plzz cont soon...i love it:)

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KaSh_luv

@KaSh_luv

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#158

Awesome...loved it... ok so dey know dey love each other... now we need da confession... cnt wait!

luved how he protected her...

update soon :)

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rasikdhara101

@rasikdhara101

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#159

=DD i loveeeddd it soo muchh ! but omg hmmm thats interesting...she had a smirk and then like someone called to tell her to do everythint onight and then like she told armaN to go ge shilpa...hmmm was she like a good girl or bad? it maybe a stupid question but like u never know haha she migh hook them up and then like seperate them so they hate eavhother or like idkk haha...interesting hough andd awww they love eachother =D <3 so cant wait till the next part...thanks for the PM and update soooon ! i love reading this cause first of all...its ArSh and id read a ArSh FF anyday and welll i just love ur writing and this concept is just brilliant ! soo update sooon ! =]