Coffee house:Rajeev Aamna FF climax - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice part..............all the couples are in this part...................cont soon...............
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Coffee house Part 3



Devyani,Chandni and Gunjan are chatting and laughing at the Coffee house.Suddenly Gunjan's eyes fall on Manav who is sipping coffee and watching Gunjan.
She thinks:Manav is here...
She blushes when she realizes that Manav's eyes are fixed on her face..
She goes to him leaving Devyani and Chandni in wonder.
G:Manav...you were here?I did'nt know that.
Manav thinks:You never know my presense even when i'm with you.
Manav smiles simply.
G:What a pleasant surprise!How did you vanish so fast yesterday?
Manav says in his mind:I wanted to be with you for more time.But i doubted whether you will like it.But now your eyes say that you crave for my presense.I hope so.
Manav gets up:Ok..Gunjan..i'm going.
G:Ok bye.
Manav goes.Gunjan does'nt move till he vanishes completely.
She goes back to her friends.
D:That is the business man Manav.Right?
G:Yes.
D:Saw him at yesterday's party.Why did you go to him?
Gunjan smiles simply.
D:Yesterday i was shocked to see you dancing with him when he asked you to dance with him.Today he came here.You went and spoke to him.Is it love?
Gunjan becomes shy.
D:Gunjan..be careful.We can't trust these rich business men.For them girls are a time pass.
Gunjan's joy fades from her face.
C:Manav Gareweal?No way.Adi knows him.He is a nice guy.
Gunjan smiles.
D:But love exits only in the beginning.After some time the sweetness of love disappears.Earlier I and Druv used to crave to be with each other.We used to find time to roam about.But now..Druv is always busy in his hospital.When he gets free time i'm stuck up in the school.Now there is no romance in our life.Life becomes boring fast in our busy life.So don't think this excitement will last forever.I don't believe in love.
C:I don't think so.I believe in love.I know Adi since our college days.Our romance has'nt gone sour.Still we have candle light dinners and a walk on the beach.But Gunjan..i forgot to tell you one thing about Manav.I heard that he is a divorcee.
G:He divorced only once?
C:Ya.Why did you ask like that?Teasing me?
G:No never.I know that he divorced his first wife.Did'nt he remarry?
C:No.He is single.He did'nt marry after his divorce.
Gunjan's face becomes gloomy.
C:What happened Gunjan?Suddenly you went to some other world.
D:Still thinking of Manav?
G:Yes.
D:After knowing that Manav is a divorcee also you are thinking of him?
G:Yes.I can never stop thinking of him.Because i can't forget him.
Chandni grins:Gunjan is out of control.Deeply in love with Manav..
D:What rubbish!Gunjan..you don't know anything about Manav.You don't know how his character is..why he divorced his wife..then how can you fall in love?
G:I'm not falling in love now.I fell in love with him long ago.
Chandni and Devyani are wondered.
D:What?You have seen him before Adi's birthday party?
G:Yes.Our first meeting took place long ago.And i know why he divorced his wife.
D:How?
D:Because his wife was none other than me.
Devyani and Chandni are shocked.
They:What?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi ๐Ÿ˜Š
the up is really good๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š and full of shocks๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ and surprise๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
gunjan devyani and chndni are as usuall chatting in the coffe house๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š when gunjan saw there manav she was totally surprised to see him๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ she goes to manav and started asking him why he left her yesterday after the dance but manav maintaining his attitude didnt response to her q and simply goes from there
by seeing gunjan and manav devayani and chandini feels tyhat gunjan must have some crush on him๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰
devyani gunjan ko samajhte haai ke woh manav se dur rahe aur chandini also tells her that manav is a divorsee ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก
par gunjan toh un dono ko he surprised karte hue unhe kahete haai ke woh yeh sab kuch jaante haai kunki wohi the manav ke patni ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
really shocking๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oh oh oh....thats soooo exciting....So Manav is for real...hehe. Actually the way he disappeared I was shocked...hehe. Jokes apart.....its nice to knw that Manav's ex-wife is Gunjan only....but they love each other sooo much....they why not together?? Wud luv to knw wat happened.....pls continue soon!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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kya baat hai nice twist and great going ...awesome part thanks a lot for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#16
what???????????????? manav and gunjan were married?????????? wow...............cont soon...................
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17

Coffee house Part 4



Gunjan:Yes.I'm Manav's ex-wife.
Chandni:Are you joking?
G:No,it's not a joke.I'm serious.
Devyani:Why did you divorce him?Maybe like me you also must have got bored of the unromantic married life.You and Manav are busy with business.No time for each other.How can the marroage work?
G:We had a different reason to split.
D:What is that?
G:I was in Nainital orphanage.Orphans have no right to dream of marriage.Who will marry an orphan who does'nt know anything about her own birth?But Manav was willing to marry me.Our head mother was happy about that and she told me that i'mlucky to get a man like Manav in my life.I dreamt a lot about my life with Manav.

Flashback...
The head mother gives a red lehenga and ornaments to Gunjan.
She:Usually orphans get married in a simple manner.But Manav wants you to look grand on the wedding though the wedding is simple.So he requested me to hand over the wedding dress and ornaments to you.
Gunjan smiles.
She:You are lucky.That's why Manav chose you from the girls he saw here.
She blushes.

Gunjan wears the red lehenga and ornaments for the wedding.She feels secure and confident when Manav ties mangalsuthra around her neck.

Gunjan sits on the bed like a shy bride.When Manav enters the room,she craves to look at his face.But she is too shy for that.
Manav sits near her and looks at her face.She is nervous as well as happy.
He realizes that.
M:Don't be nervous Manav.It's me.Not a stranger.
Gunjan lifts her eyes slowly and looks at him.There is a sweet smile on her face.
G:Thank you for accepting me as your wife.If you had'nt married me,i would have lived the rest of my life as a spinster.
M:Why?
G:No one marries girls from orphanages.You are great.
M:I'm not great Gunjan.You are mistaking me.
G:You are very down to earth.
M:There is a reason for marrying you.
She looks at his face seriously.
M:I was in love with Soniya.
She is shocked.
G:Soniya?
M:My ex-girl friend.She deserted me when her parents found a richer guy for her when my business started falling.I managed to bring success again.My bisiness is going well now.I want to take a sweet revenge on Soniya.I want to make her jealous.That's why i married.
Gunjan is shocked.
She thinks:The person i considered as my Pati Parameshwar does'nt love me.This marriage is only a drama to take revenge on his ex-girl friend.I'm such a big fool.A girl like me don't have the right to dream of marriage.Still i dreamt.That was my biggest mistake.
She feels that her head is spinning.
M:Please Gunjan..Please help me.You will help me.right?
She nodded her head.
M:I knew that you are sweet enough to help me.At the first sight itselfi understood that.That's why i chose you from all other girls in the orphanage.This is a contract marriage.Only for 5 months you have to stay with me.I have arranged the divorce papers.
He showed the divorce papers to her.
She thinks:Divorce before marriage?Marriage is a game?
M:You can sign now itself.We will give it to the court later..after i get what i aimed for.
He signs the paper.
M:I signed it.Now you sign.
She feels that Manav is pricking her heart.She tries her best not to cry before him.
She signs the divorce paper.Her fingers were shivering while signing.
M:Thanks a lot for understanding my condition.I promise that i will choose the best guy for you.
Gunjan is numb.His words fall on her deaf ears.

The next morning...
Gunjan brings coffee for Manav.Manav had just woken up from the bed.
G:Manav ji...Coffee..
He grins:Manavji?Call me Manav.I prefer that.
He takes the coffee and sits on the sofa.
M:You also sit Gunjan.
Gunjan sits near him.
He sips coffee.
M:Did you drink coffee?
G:No.
M:Why?
G:I don't feel like drinking tea.
M:Ok.
Suddenly he sees the clock.
M:Oh!Time goes so fast.I have to get ready for the meeting.
He keeps the tea on the table and runs to dress up.
G:You drink finish drinking coffee.It was bad?
M:Not at all.It was very nice.But i have no time.Sorry Gunjan.
He goes to the bathroom.
Gunjan looks at the coffee.She takes the cup and drinks coffee from it.
Manav's sister Rupali sees it and smiles:Gunjan bhabhi drinks coffee from Manav bhaiyya's cup.So romantic.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Okay....so Manav and Gunjan had a contract marriage....hehe. Guess Manav had the realization later.....wanna knw hoe it all progressed.....pls continue soon!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#19
Manav and Gunjan had a contract marriage wowowo another thing great both of them i think hiding from each other

I love this line


:Gunjan bhabhi drinks coffee from Manav bhaiyya's cup.So romantic.


awesome part thx for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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last two parts were good................first it shocked.....................gunjan manav ki wife ha...........................they both had a contract marraige..............manave u sploit all the love scenes of gunjan yar.............plz plz con't soon dear

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