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Posted: 14 years ago
hello muskan i have become a big fan of ur ff do continue sssoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
really gr8 updates yaar do add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago


updates

PART13

she parks the car & rushes to the reception
Mr.Bachan kanha milenge...
receptionist - sorry
geet mumers aab uska naam yah - DD kanha milenge
receptionist she checks the list of people yanha koi DD nahi hain
she pulls the records & starts reading the names
receptionist - you cannot do this & calls the gaurds

geet - I am not leaving without meeting mr.bachan, get that straight
ek to woh phone bhi nahi utta rahe hain...aur tum mujhe aapna yeh stupid attitude
dikharahe hoo
receptionist - if u don't leave now I will call the police

geet - call the army if u want I am not leaving without meeting Mr.bachan
maan smiles... at her act
geet follows..main so gayi thi aapne mujhe raat bhar sone nahi diya tha na
maan stares at her...teehk hain maine hi phone kiya tha
lekin aap to mujhe sone kaha sakte the
maan shots another stirn look
teehk hai kaha tha ...lekin main soee to nahi na finally
maan wearing the gloves and looks away
geet - itna naraz kyun ho rahe ho main to sirf 1hr late hoon
maan looks at the watch
geet - new watch...aachi hain
maan pulls his hand away
geet - 1 hr se thoda jada
maan - haan 1hr se 1hr jaada
geet - teehk hain 2hrs late hoon
geet - sorry kaha na
maan picks a club ...looks at it & keeps it back
geet - please itna gussa mat karo
he lifts a cub & swings it in the air...geet bends down getting scared
geet - maroo ghe kya?
maan puts the club down & takes another one
geet - us se hi mar lena tha...hey muskan yahan bhi muska waooooooooooo
geet - uff finally smile to kiya & left his collar
main kab se aap ko mana rahi hoon..itna koi gussa karta hain kya
maan - u were 2 hrs late
geet - so do I have to manaofy u for 4 hrs
maan - atleast 1hr
geet aacha
& starts hitting his chest still sitting on his stomach

PART 14
geet - aap mujhe bhut pareshan karte hoo
maan - lunch khane challen
geet - mujhe bhut bhoog laghi hain
maan - what do u want to have
geet - khana

geet - aur nahi to kya pehle hi kah diya hota mat piya I do mind ...nahi piti na
maan - kis haq se kahta
geet - arrey abhi to main aapki offical GF hoon pura haq bantha hain
maan kept looking at her for a while

part 15 is

geet calls maan
maan - bollo
geet - aap mere dost ho na
maan - is ke liya phone kiya
geet - nahi woh meri mama nahi manti ki aap mera dost ho
challo aap bolo mama ko ki mera dost ho
maan - nahi nahi meri baat suno geet...in wane she gave the phone to rano
both maan & rano in unconfartable situation
rano - namaste beta
maan - namaste aunty ji
geet wispers - hain na bikul decent decent types
rano - aap kaun se college main ho?
geet wispers nahi college main nahi hain kuch business hain
rano - I am sorry wat do u do?
maan - Khurana Constrctions ka naam suna hoga aap ne, main uska MD hoon
rano - aachi baat hain, come home some time
maan - ji
geet wispers hogayee taslee...phone chodo... mujh khana kilavoo
she snatches the phone - bachan thanxs bye ..waise kya kar rahe ho?
maan - tumhe yaad kar raha tha
geet - abhi main ne mama se aap ke bare main itna itna aacha bol rahi thi chi chi
bachan ...very bad
maan - kya kya bola
geet - nahi bolti...mama sun loo maine jo bhi bolata bachan ke bare main
sab galat tha
it. want

geet - bachan ...yah maan ..u know
maan - aab kya kiya maine
geet - tum nahi yaar Maan woh...kya tha uska naam
maan offers Maan Singh Khurana
geet - han han wohi..usko koi award mila hain it seems
maan - han best businessman of the year ka ward mila
geet - usko kaise mil sakta hain
maan - kyun
geet - aap bhi business karte hoo
maan mumers wat is she getting to
geet - mere ko lagta hain ..zaroor usne judge committe ko bribe kiya hoga
u know some people have this attitude
maan - GEET !!... he is hard working I know him personally
geet - usse kya hota hain, character bhi to aacha hona chahiye
maan - kisi ne mujh se kal hi kaha tha..don't judge the book by the cover
geet - aap usko itna defend kyun karte rahete hoo, I don't like it
maan mumers..yehloo aab main khud ko bhi defend nahi kar sakta
maan - tum chathi kya hoo
geet - mujhe woh pasand nahi hain bus aur aap usko support nahi karoghe
maan - lekin kyun... as far I see from ur point of view u haven't meant him
geet - mujhe milna bhi nahi hain
maan - chodo use...hum humari baat karthe hain







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Posted: 14 years ago
Heyyy there amazing fanfic and can't wait to know how will maan manage to break her fast. I am getting excited lol.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Maan will break Geet's fast?? 😃😍

Thanks Di!! 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMGG! Geet is gonna fast for maan! HAYE! soo soo cuteee! (: how he told her to wear red sari..
& how prithvi saved her & maan got soo worriedd! (: OMGG! AMAZING!
HOW THE HEK maan will open her fast? OMG! updt soonn! :)
CAN'T WAITTT!
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update!
awwwwwwwww maan came all d way to help her!
how sweet!
n i lurv prem n armaan
they r true frndz
they bashed up d guyz!
awwwwwwwww...........................tat wz sooooooooooooo SWEET!
luv them!
n poor prithvi!
hehehehehe.........
n how will maan break her fast?!?!?? 😲😕
update soon!

luv
Navpreet

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Posted: 14 years ago
Great update! Interesting.......there are 4 people to take care of Geet and all are hatta-katta naujawans....lolz......but I seriously liked the part when Geet came out to hit those jerks......Maan toh hai na Geet ke liye.....lolz. I love their friendship......Prem and Armaan bashed them.....loved all the maar-dhar...lolz. Geet is gonna fast for Maan.....😲😕😆....do continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
geet or karva chuat😍
maan will break her fast................😳
omg omg omg omg...............................................................
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Posted: 14 years ago
it was just awesome.....karvachaut...it would be interesting to see how maan will break her fast..
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh oh oh that part was awesome muski di and ooh ooh i know maan pipe pe charke jayega vrat todne

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