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Posted: 14 years ago
diiiiiiii plssssssssss update it
Edited by Kool_Naina - 14 years ago
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-truly magical-
part 16


maan - if u keep checking him on rare view I am sure u will
again hit some one on the road today...
cccccrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeechhhhhhh breaking sound
maan - are u fine..Geet?? geet???
geet - main teehk hoon..I am fine..
maan - where r u right now
geet - don't panic...actually some stupid guys, they usually create trouble
aaj body gaurds wali car nahi deehki to they are just troubling
maan gets wild and put her call on hold makes another call
maan - some guys are creating trouble
xyz - umm
maan - i will be there in few mins
xyz - umm
maan tells the driver to turn the car towards her
maan resumed the cal
geet - kya huwa
maan - drive slowly
geet - don't worry bachan
those guys on the bike again cross over & geet braked hard again
maan - u stop the car but don't open ur door or window
geet - relax bachan
maan - do as I say
geet - bachan u r overreacting
the guys on the bike again almost run into her car...
she stops in a jerk...
maan - lock ur doors
geet - they are parking the bikes around me
maan - don't worry prithvi is there right?
geet - actually there are 5, nahi, 6, nahi 9 guys, how will prithvi manage
maan - don't worry, just bend down
the guys start crowding around the car & wooing
prithvi slides his bike in between them & get off in style
geet - wow kya stlye main entry mari hain
maan smiles
prithvi - just back off...& let her go
1 of the guy - tu iska body gaurd hain kya?
another one - nahi majnoo lagtha hain..and raises his hand to break the cars window
prithvi holds his wrist & turns it in a jerk, guy falls dowm with a broken wrist
geet - bachan haat tood diya...geet starts panicking
then starts a major action sequence between prithvi & 8 others
prithvi manages to kick 5 of them away
one of them pick a knife & slits prithvi's arms
other two overpower him, geet steps out of the car...
maan - don't u dare step out the car
geet pulls the ear plugs out & takes a stick to hit the guy from back
how was about to stab prithvi...the guy turns with the knife to geet
geet hits him with the stick... nothing seem to happen
she hits really hard & tried to move back
he pushes her dowm & tries to force a kiss on her lips
she kicks & punches making him bleed but still he comes really close to her face....
a hand comes between their faces... the hand lifts him by his face & then in mid air
lifting him by his neck throws him away...
maan turns to geet holding her by arms...tum teehk ho na, geet
geet - bachan not bad yaar ... tere bhi biceps aachey hain
maan - i asked u not to step out of the car
geet - they were about to stab him
maan - he would have managed, he might be trained for all that
geet - i was worried
prithvi - i am ur body gaurd I am responsible for u
geet - body gaurds insaam nahi hote, unhe choot nahi lag sakti
i cannot just sit back & watch him bleed because of me
maan checks prithvi's wound...
prithvi - i am fine
maan - I will drop her, please go the doctor now
geet - u can take off for few days if u want
prithvi - I will call the guards to get ur car & join u in the college
geet - papa ko mat bolna he will get worried
prithvi - I will have to report it any way
geet makes a face & turns. she locks the car after taking her belongings
and gives the keys to prithvi
maan makes her sit in the car, he comes in from the other side
and looks at her a for a while, geet looks at him lifting her eye brows
kya huwa? maan - tum teehk ho na?
geet - umm.. aap yanha kaise
maan - sirf tumhi mujhe tond sakti hoo? main nahi..he starts the car & changes
the gear...moves on
geet - mera liya yanha aayee the
maan -nahi mujhe prithvi ki chinta ho rahi thi
geet - gay types umm!!
maan - GEET !!
geet - actually thanxs
maan stops the car geet looks at him...maan looks deeply at her
tumhe thanxs kehni ki zaroort nahi... tumhe kuch ho jata to ...he stops
and looks away
geet - to??? peeping close to him..bolo to?
maan changes the gear & moves on - to meri biwi ko kaun manayega
geet - how mean
maan smirks and drops her in the college...
maan waits for her body gaurds to arrive...tells them to stay close
geet - bye
maan - sunno
geet - umm
maan - aapna khayal rakna
geet - pata hain ... aap ke biwi ko tution deneke baad hi maroo..
maan closes her mouth... aaj keh diya dobar aise mat kehna
geet was taken a back... aap itna serious kyun ho rahe ho
maan moves his hand away & turns his head
geet smiles aacha baba nahi kahongi... ab jane do mujhe, bye
she meets up with prem
prem - woh kaun tha
geet - wohi to bachan hain, chal mila thi hoon
prem - woh to chala gaya
geet sees him reversing - teehk hain kal mila toonghi
prem - is he going to drop u every day?
geet - woh kyun mujhe drop karegha
prem - phir yeh sab kya hain?
geet - aarey u won't believe what happened today
geet narrates the whole incident
prem gets really annoyed - tune mujhe phone kyun nahi kiya
tu teehk hain na
...he calls his gang & drags her to the car
calls armaan & tells him
prem barges into those guys college & bashes up their bikes
those guys were sitting in a group near the canteen...
prem - aab himaat hain to haat laga ke dikha..pushes geet infront of them
armaan - itni himaat inme kanha
they bash up the 8 of them & parcel them to sanjeevni along with the one
who was already getting treated for his broken wrist
geet hold them from ears...& pushes them in the car
aab is case ko papa se kaun bachayega
they drive to armaan's flat..geet cleans their wounds & applies medicine
geet - kya zaroorat thi unse ladne ki, sab kuch sort out ho gaya tha
armaan - no one messes up with u..
prem - do u get that
geet - OK...relax...aaj subha se log mujh pe itna possessive kyun ho
rahen hain
armaan & prem pin her on the floor - aur kaun possessive ho raha hain
geet gets intimidated - koi nahi...
they spend the whole day watching movie & playing video games
rano calls geet
geet - ji mama
rano - aaj karva chuat ki shopping karni hain, jaldi aana
geet - ji mama

geet pushes armaan from her lap & rushes to leave
prem - pulls her back
geet - late ho rahi hoon
prem - mera pillow
geet slips pillow under his head & says bye
armaan comes down...& gives a confused look
geet - kya huwa
armaan - woh mujhe
geet - kya baat hain
armman - i want to know about karav chaut
geet - kyun?
armaan - main bhi ridz ke liye
geet hugged him so sweet....
she tells him how to keep the fast
geet - come home in the morning we will have the
breakfast togather...be there at 4.00am ok
armaan - umm

geet takes rano for shopping
they first get glass bangles....then go to pick up
other beauty stuffs...geet gets bored while rano was picking sindoor, kaajal, lipstick
she called maan
maan - umm
geet - kya kar rahe ho
maan - tumhare liya shopping kar raha hoon
geet - seriously kya ker rahe ho
maan - I had come for some jewellry shops openning cermony
geet - umm
maan - tum kya kar rahi ho
geet - mama ke saat shopping, kal karvachaut hain na
maan - aab to tumhare liya gift lena hi padega
geet - kyun
maan - aab tum merliya fasting karooghi to mujhe bhi gift to dena padega na
geet - BTW I am not fasting for u
maan - fasting to kar rahi ho na
geet - woh to har saal karthi hoon
maan - is saal main tumhara BF main hoon
geet - to
maan - to mere liya huwa na
geet - don't confuse me
maan - aacha sunno
geet - umm
maan - red wali sari leena
geet - kyun
maan - mujhe pasand hain
geet - nahi main blue longi mujhe blue hi pasand hain
maan - tumhari marzi

precap
😕😕😕😕how is maan going to break her fast????!!!😍😕😕😲😲😲😲!

NEXT PART 17
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow nice and a long update .... do post the next update soon................😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow.. muskaan... i loved ur update..
it ws just awesome....
haayeee.. maan going to brk geet's karva chauth..😍😍
i m eagarly waiting...
pls update ASAP
Edited by MaanEET_FAN - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
😆.... Nice update.........waiting for the next one............ Can i have it today...???? 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow awsome! M waitin to knw hw maan goin to break her fast.update soon plz
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Posted: 14 years ago
AWWW sos so so so cute!!
Cant wait for the next part
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Posted: 14 years ago

Loved this update baji!!

They are soooooo cute!!! Maan came to save her awwww!!
So Geet picks the blue sari, but Maan said red 😆!!
And she gonna keep fast for Maan 😳😉😃!!!
Can't wait to see how he will break er fast!!
Thanks for the pm!!
And update soon...!! xx
Edited by humz_786 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update muski... Loved it...
Geet is so confused... She is fasting & Maan is convincing her that "U're fasting for me"..... Superb....
Awww ..... I loved the way Maan comes to rescue Geet... Amazing description... I could imagine that scene happpening in front of my eyes... & ya Geet was right while speaking to Prem & armaan... Maan is getting a bit possessive about his Geet...
& one unexpected part was wen Armaan & Prem are so concerned abt what happened wid Geet in d morning & they bash up those guys... Love the friendship track also... Please show them studying together sometime... Jab dekho the gang is partying... Masti & stuff... kidding ha... nahi toh kalse lecture ki baate hogi...
I really hope that Geet keeps her fast that too for Maan... & she dresses up in Red saree.... & I how will Maan break her fast... & where... Will he come to her place?? will Geet go to Maan's place to break her fast??? kaise hoga??? What will he gift her... Im getting excited(jaise ki mujhe gift milne wala ho),,, Cant be in front of the family as nobody in the family knows abt Geet & Bachan's GF-BF-Karvachaut....
Please Please update soon dear... I was Checking out IF since 12.30 for ur updates... Finally here it is...
now the wait for the update is 24 hours.. too long... Please update asap...
& ya my most favourite line from today's update is...
when Geet asks Maan... "Aap yaha kaise".... Maan says.."Prithvi ki jinta ho rahi thi..." & Geet replies..."Gay types ha...."... I cant control laughing....
well talking abt our real Maaneet... I scared afta watching maan's reaction... Im scared for Maan... Dev deserves more punches... Mera man kiya ki main bhi jaake Dev aur Nt ko thapad maru...
Yest episode comprised of Passion(Geet's love for Maan)..Romance(From Geet's side)... Curiousity(to y Geet is leaving kC)... Anger( that she doesnt trust their relationship)... Agony(after knowing the truth)... excellent acting by alll
dying to see today's episode
well Im ending here... Love u Muski for giving such awesome updates.. waiting for the next eagerly
Edited by Tressa - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
how will msk break her fast, oh i am sre MSK will find a way, he is smart, hai cant wait to the update

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