MayUr FF: I Thee Wed (Ch. 13 - Pg. 105) 12/06/2013

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daniella

@daniella05

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

it was an awesome first part....

really it was fun to read it...n quite naughty too😉

and mayur are just right 4 dis story!!! a cute,funny n naughty couple!!!😆

eagerly waiting 4 next part.

thanks 4 the pm

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362035

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

awesooome intro.......

loved it....

cont.soon..........

thanx for the pm........

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Ally

@.PINK.

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

lol I sachi mein just love part 1 na

realli loved it to the core=D
Nupur kidding around with Mayu😆

n when he comezz out closing his eyezz🤣

Akki u wrote everything beautifully na

congoo on new FF
em realli looking forward to read more=D

-Lina-

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anju011

@anju011

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

another ff . wow thats g888888888
i loved the 1st chapter. totally mayurish, their cute fights, their trust on each other.
loved it completely.
continue soon & do update other ff's too.

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manjeet

@love.mayurarti

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

wow!!!!!!!!fabulous update

luved it........it was really fun to read

mayur r sooooooo adorable cute n naughty

mindblowing

cont soooon n tnx fr pm

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Mansi bhatia

@-Mansi-

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Wow...this is what I call a nice..entertaining FF! The intro was excellent Akansha..I totally loved it..and Im glad you wrote it!

Please do update this frequently..as it has a good scope to improve ur writing! haha! Kidding =P

Im loving this whole relationship..and the wedding..that red lingerie which was so funny..even the hair part was funny...gosh Indian brides dress up so muchh! =P

Edit- I loved Mayank's dialogue..of her keeping quite..otherwise what would ppl outside think they are doing=P hahaha!!😛

Continue soon! :)

-Mansi

Edited by -Mansi- - 14 years ago

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Nirvrithi

@Nirvrithi

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

I am happy that you posted it finally 🤗 Thanks to your constant inspiration ,whoever or whatever it is.. 😊

Its a unique concept and my most favorite for obvious reasons😉

I am curious to see how their relation is proceeding further

Edited by Nirvrithi - 14 years ago

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Nithya

@tellycrazy

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Akki, your stories are always a pleasure to read and this one's no exception. It just cracked me up when Mayank sang "Give me some sunshine..." 😆😆😆 Both of them seems to be evenly matched in pulling each other's legs😉 It would be interesting to see how their relationship progresses. Thanks for starting this naughty FF😃