FF.manneet **TREMBLE of LOVE** part 25 pg70 - Page 31

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Posted: 14 years ago

amazing update!!!

awww poor maan😭😭...

is she really pregnant??

if so....is it even maan's baby????

cant wait for the next part!!!!!

pls cont.soon!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
hay you all i havent pmd anyone yet.. so dw
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LOVED ALAL THE COMENTS
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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

part 16


Maan sat in the office... Thinking whats happening to his life... He was becoming a father... But why he wasn't happy! What was bothering him... Dadi have refuged to talk to him... BCs he decided to go back to Sammera.... She have tried... Enough to separate them... Only person... Who could talk to dadi now... Was geet.... And he haven't seen geet in 4 weeks now.... He was hopeless.... Everyday... He brings out hop to see her.... But there was no use.... Nothing could be done.... There are no chance of maan seeing geet.... But he was dying to see her one glimpse....

Jewlary shopping:

Sam: maan.... Maan... Ok which one?
Maan: any!
Sam: you have no taste!
Maan: they all looks the same!
Sam: no... Bothe different!
Maan: umm! Whatever!
Sam: maan... Dev used to choose better then you!
Maan: why don't you ask Dev!
Sam: maan! You are too much!
Maan ignores... He looks at a ring... White gold.... Guci... Spines.... Maan about to ask for it... A ladies voice interrupts.... Maans eyes twinkled... Seeing her.... He couldn't stop looking....

Geet: hay....
Shopkeeper: hello madam...
Geet: I Have enough for thy ring now... May I please....
Geet didn't realize at all... Maan was standing right next to her....
Sk takes the ring out....
Geet tries every finger... Just before she could try it on her index finger... It drops in maans pam....

Geet: I am so sorry... I.... Her voice disappears as she looks up... Hi sir....
Sam disappeared....
Maan: it's ok.... He gives the ring back... Geet puts it on her finger...
Geet: how are you sir?
Maan smiles faintly... As Sammera hugs him from the back...
Sam: hi geet?
Geet: hello mam!
Sam: what brings you here....
Geet shows her the ring...
Sam: engagement ring!
Maan shocked...
Geet: no... I loved this ring... Was waiting for ages to buy... Just managed to save enough... To buy this....
Sam: oh yes.... Forgot you are middle class!
Maan felt like slapping her....
Geet laughed.... Took her word as a joke... : not everyone is lucky to have a super rich MSK....
Sam: of course... Sammera gets the best.... You can make a move on Armaan....
Maan really started to get irritated....
Geet gave her a disgusting look...: no thanks.... I will pass.... Excuse me please...

She brought the ring and walked out....

Geet: pappa ji.... Am I always the one who meats so low person!!! Why??? SHe laughed at her self... Feeling sorry for maan...

Maan looks at her lovingly... As she disappears...
Maan: you are sick!
Sam: wht do you mean!
Maan snaps out payed the bill and leaves the shop... Leaving Sammera....

He rans after geet.... Geet enters a food shop...
Maan: geet....
Geet jumps and turns around....: hi sir....
Maan: I am sorry for Sammera!
Geet: it's ok.... Never knew you were back together!
Maan: umm... Yea....
Geet: I am happy for you! Congras... How is dadi?
Maan: actually... She is not happy with me! Because of Sammera!
Geet not surprised at all... : oh... Umm... I am sorry!
Maan: it's my fault!
Geet: ek bat bolo apse!
Maan: bolo!
Geet: ap Sammera jasi larki Ke shat shadi kue kar rhi ho!
Maan gives her a sad smile...
Geet: I ... Know... You don't love her!
Maan: looks up... That's not true!
Geet: you wouldn't have come after me... Leaving your future wife in the shop alone!
maan looked at her thoughtlessly... Not sure how to react!
Maan: umm... Ohh... She is pregnant!
Geet: ahh... Congras...
Maan: thanks! heart more
Geet: you don't look happy! You becoming a father... She smiled...
Maan: I am happy...
Geet: my food is ready... Congras again... Sirr... Please do send us the innavation... To us your employe... She smiles as she disappears...
Maan felt helpless... He wanted to scream... Every word that came out of geets mouth... It heart him for some-reason.... It was unknown... His feeling...... Towards her... Was unknown... She had no felling... Nothing for him.... Nothing.... Probably never will... Only in his dream.....
It was raining... He soaked him self.... Dripping....
Maan drooped sam home and he made his way home...
Surprisingly geet was there... Talking... Laughing with dadi...


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Posted: 14 years ago

part 17


Maan: dadi!
Bothe jumps...
Rahul: hay... Congras...
Geet: Congras again...
Dadi: ap mera Bhu kab arhi hi... Mera gr8 gr8 grandson ki sat?
Maan shocked... The thing... He couldn't say... Geet have told her...
Maan looked at geet... As suddenly... The whole hall started to fill with people.... Everything froze ... Everything... He just couldn't remove his gaze from geet... There was something special about her.... Something special.... Maan was hugged... Greeted... By one person to another....


Later on in the party...

Maan: thanks!
Geet: it's ok... I knew Dadi would be happy... Hearing about your child.... So I said that good news... Before other less happy news!
Maan bursts out in laugh....
Geet looked shocked... Just stood there... Actually whole hall went silent... All looking at maan....
Maan stopes: ummm... Ehh....
Geet: you laugh! I mean I am sorry sir!
Rahul pulls her way... Maan didn't like that....


Rahul: what did you say... That made him laugh?
Geet: I don't know!
Rahul: he never laughed in his lifetime! Well we never seend him!
Geet: idk!
Rahul: just stay way from him!
Geet: stop telling me what to do and what not to do!
Rahul: geet!
Geet: please... You are not my BF!

She leaves....

Dadi: are you alright beta?
Geet: yea...
Dadi: what happen?
Geet: it's Rahul... He is being complicated!
Dadi: just give him time...
Geet: I hope he finds a good girl... I am not really in to him... He is just not my type!
Dadi: don't worry beta...
Geet: how shall I not worry? He have been like this for past few years
Dadi: just ignore beta...

Rahul left early.... Leaving geet... Angry annoyed....
So maan dropped her home....
Geet: thanks...
Maan: I hop everything is ok between you and Rahul!
Geet: don't worry about him... He will be fine by 2mx....
Maan: thanks... For telling dadi!
Geet: it's ok... By....

Maan looks at her loving... No matter what happens to him.... He will be always there for her.... Intel his last breath...

Maan sat his room silently...
Dadi: beta... Are you alright?
Maan: yea... Just taking sam for a scan...
Dadi: yes.. Beta... That's a good idea...
Maan: yea...
Dadi: why you are not happy?
Maan: nothing dadi!
Dadi: what's wrong?
Maan: nothing
Dadi: maan... What's wrong?
Maan: I don't love her...
Dadi: what do you mean?
Maan: I don't love her at all... Like I used to...
Dadi: why are you marring her?
Maan: I don't know! Probably because of are child!
Dadi: maan... I know you don't love her...
Maan: what can I do?
Dadi: just go for a checkup...
Maan: yea...
Dadi: and don't tell Sammera... That you taking her!
Maan: why?
Dadi: just do!

In office:

Armaan: I think we are doing very well
Geet: yea... I think we are sir...
Armaan: do you think.... You can finish this by tonight?
Geet: I see why not!
Armaan: I will stay and help...
Geet: as you wish... I really do need some help...
Armaan smiles... Looks at her lovingly...

.... .... .... .... After hour....

Geet: I am done with this... Would you like me to help you?
Armaan: yes please...
Geet starts to designee... While Armaan next to her...
Armaan: geet...
Geet: yes sir...
Armaan: umm... There.... My sister wedding is next week... Would you like to come with me?
Geet looked at him in surprise... : umm.... I will try... But I won't promise....
Armaan: thanks!
Geet smiles and stands a bit far way from him...
Didn't like his closeness...
Armaan forcefully grabs her close.... against his body.............

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Posted: 14 years ago
i hope sam isnt pregnant....!! awesome update please continue soon!!:)
Edited by maangeetcrazy - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey sweety😊,

Is sam lying😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡......i hope so and maan should slap her tight so that she should know she cant play with maan😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆........and geet should slap armaan......i mean how dare he touches her😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡i will kill him..........geet is only maans😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉...........waiting for them to fall in love.....plzzzzz update soon.

------------------vinitha😊
Edited by vinithaa - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: vinithaa

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hey sweety😊,

Is sam lying😡......i hope so and maan should slap her tight so that she should know she cant play with maan😆........and geet should slap armaan......i mean how dare he touches her😡i will kill him..........geet is only maans😉...........waiting for them to fall in love.....plzzzzz update soon.

------------------vinitha😊


ty hun loved the comments……… i will slow down this track now…. less update….. bc to collage 2mx……… :(
just kidding lol……. still willl do few pdate on this…. intell it starts the lovestory track… so not to worry…. and thats far way…… as u know are maan….. silly maan…. is not capable of any relationship at the mom
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Posted: 14 years ago

awesome update!!!

hope sam is not pregnant..and just faking it!!
cant wait for the next part!!
pls cont.soon and thanks for the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg!!!
Awesome!!
Can u plzzzzzplzzzplzz post another part rite noww!!
Im literally dying to read more
Plzzzzzzz
-Jassi
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi wonderful update but i hope armaan doesn't do something stupid to Geet pls cont soonnnnnnn i'm scared i have bad feeling from the start Maan has to find out that sameera liar about the pregnancy

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