mayur FF $journey from hatred to love$ - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice Concept Jenny! Will be waiting for your Updates,thanks For the Pm.

Natasha <3
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -ArTiMaNiAc-

Nice Concept Jenny! Will be waiting for your Updates,thanks For the Pm.

Natasha <3

awwww thnx dear
will surely pm u 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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credit goes to yash^^^
so guys here goes my first part😳
1st part
nupur's house at morning
g : nupur utho
n gunjan sone do naa itna achcha srk ka sapna dekh rahi hoon.😆
g :utho aaj college ka pehlaa din hain late hone kaa irada hai kyaa
n : ( sits on a bed with a jerk ) kyaa subah ho gayi
g : haan ab tayaar ho jaao warna late ho jaaogi
nupur gets ready for her college
g : byee nupur all the best for your first day
n : byee gunjan and thnx

at college
nupur was walking at the corridor
nupur: (thinking)pata nahi aaj ka din kaisa jaayega gunjan bhi nahii aayi
a boy was coming having books in is hand guess who he is non other than mayank😉

and nupur was coming from opposite side lost in her own wold
both was in hurry there was some water on floor both fo them didn't noticed and
fell down.😲
n: ahhhhhhh ye pani pata nahi kisne girayaa😡
m: ouch ye pani bhi naa aaj hi girna thaa college ke pehle din 😡
a boy came
b: sorry aap dono ko lagii to nahi naa woh mujhse paani gir gayaa thaa

nupur get up
m : its ok (nupur interrupts)
n its ok kyaa tumhe kyaa lagtaa hain ki main sorry se maan jaungi dekh ke paani😡
nahi pee sakte dekhaa mera dress kharab ho gayi😆
m: rehne don naa sirf paani hi toh gira hai
n : tum to chup hi raho main itni jaldi kisi ko maaf nahi karti samjhe
m : tameez se baat karo samjhi muhje bhi koi shokh nahi hain tumhare saath behes karke mera din kharab karne ka
n : mujhe bhi nahi karni koi sadu ladke se baat
m : kyaa kahaa tumne sadu main tumhe sadu dikhtaa hon
n: dikhte nahi tum to sadu hon
m :mera naam mayank sharma hain aur tum muhje sadu bulana bandh karo waise bhi aaj
mera pehlaa din hain so i don't want it to spoil ok bye tumhara naam jo bhi ho
n : mera naam nupur bhusha hain yaad rakhnaa sadu kahinkaa
lunch break at canteen
nupur was sitting at table suddenly someboy calls her and she went putting her bag
at the table when she came back she saw mayank sitting on the table where she was sitting
n : mr sadu tum mere table pe kyaa kar rahe hoo yahaan pe main bethi thi
m : pehli baat main sadu nai mayank hoon aur doosri baat ki yahaan pe utmhara naam nahi likhaa
n: par maine pehle apnaa bag yahaan pe rakhaa thaa
m: bag to mera bhi hain yahaan pe
n :tum mujhe chain see atleast khaane to d pehle corridor main aur ab yahaan pe
and their u tu main main continued till half an hour and then they ended up by doing lunch at same table

so guys here was my first part of my ff 😊
hope u like it😳
precap: nupur and mayank come to
know that they are neighbours also😆
so guys plzz do comment and press like button if u liked

Edited by jainypatel - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
jenny tu tou writer nikli😲
omg awesome work dear🤗🤗
n i loved it😳thanks for the pm jann🤗
n me waiting for next part😛
Edited by -sibgha- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
very cute first part....totally mayurish...😆..waiting for the next part now. good job ....keep it up👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: -sibgha-

jenny tu tou writer nikli😲
omg awesome work dear🤗🤗
n i loved it😳thanks for the pm jann🤗
n me waiting for next part😛

awwwww dear itni bhi tareef mat karoo😳
glad that u liked 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: Mou.

very cute first part....totally mayurish...😆..waiting for the next part now. good job ....keep it up👍🏼

awww thanks for ur lovely comment dear😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: achoose

very cute part dear.............

thnx alot dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
ur welcome dear 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hmm jenny
its nice dear!! bole to bilkul mayur style haan good!! keep going sweety!

love
komal

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