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Sweety

@nightangel

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Posted: 19 years ago

#11

hmm.... see k & k is alwyas well to eachother....😛 "success formula 4 rocking ur fiction... 😉 "
no need to say sorry 4 G & k...

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Nikita

@nikita_88

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Posted: 19 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: nightangel
hmm.... see k & k is alwyas well to eachother....😛 "success formula 4 rocking ur fiction... 😉 "
no need to say sorry 4 G & k...

LOL

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Nikita

@nikita_88

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Posted: 19 years ago

#13

Part 4 Remember we have reached to when Kumud is 18

Kk: K I am going to work ok I will see u later
K: bye mama
Post guy gives Kumud a letter in the letter it says she has got a scholarship in the best college in Mumbai
Kumud happy

At Night
K: Guess wat mama
Kk: Wat beta?
K: I got a scholarship in a college in Mumbai can I please go mama?
Kk (after some thinking): Ok beta you can go
K tells A and A is worried but lets her go as well

At the station wit Simran K says bye to Kk and A then her and Simran leave to go Mumbai we see some shots of Mumbai
K: Wow we reached
S: Yes it's so big wow
They clean there new house

At College they fill out their membership and about to leave when Simran almost gets hit by Nakul's car and Kumud saves Simran. We see Harry and Nakul get out of the car…
H: Can't u see where u re walking
S: Excuse me but can ur friend drive or can't he see I was crossing
H and S argue
Whilst K and N see each other they re like shocked and N gives his hand to K so he can pull her up H I shocked
S: At least he has some manners
N: K OMG ( hugs her) how u doin?
S: What u doin to her?? Kumud says somthin?
K: N well I am fine u? miss me for the last 2 years??
N: Well I am gd don't think Ka is last year she wasn't cumin out of her room until she got ur letter
K: Really y didn't any1 tell me?? Hows Pinky and Ks??
N: They re both fine
H and S confused 2gether: What's goin on?
K and N start to laugh
K: Long Story
N: Yeah it is but every1 will be so happy to see u how many days u been here??
K:1 day
N: And u didn't even tell us u were cuming??
K: All happened in a hurry
N: Anyway cum into the canteen Ka will be so surprised to see u!!!!! and Ks will be so happy as well he just got back from USA after finishin his studies

Go to d Canteen

Ka Sees them is Shocked!!!!!!!!!
The end of another part
Hope you enjoy it!!!!!!!!

Edited by nikita_88 - 19 years ago

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Nikita

@nikita_88

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Posted: 19 years ago

#14

Thanx for all d great comments guys!!!!!!!!

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zoya

@destinyz

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Posted: 19 years ago

#15

hiya.....
not really a kkusumite.... but like ur story....continue soon..

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Sweety

@nightangel

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Posted: 19 years ago

#16

can't wait to see kshitij's reaction.... 😛 gr8 going....keep it up... 👏

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Mamta Singh

@Piku_S

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Posted: 19 years ago

#17

great part
i wonder what will happen when kshitij sees kumud after two years
plz write soon

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Nikita

@nikita_88

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Posted: 19 years ago

#18

Part 5 Thanx for the comments guys!!!!! Got nothing major I sort of ave to build d story a bit so it's a bit boring guys srry nuthin bout kshitij and kumud guys sorry need to build up to it
Recap Kumud comes to Mumbai to go to college, Simran is almost run over by Nakul but then see's Kumud and they hug, Nakul takes her to meet Kali……

Ka shocked
K: Hi Ka angry wit me??
Ka ignores her
N: Come on Kali give her a chance to explain then u can be angry wit her
Ka: And u asked her to explain rite????
N just looks at Ka
K: Sorry no my mama won't let me cum

(Please remember at this point Kk doesn't know K has met Abhay and Ka, Ka doesn't know who K is her sister, also K doesn't know bout Abhay as she threw away his picture at the station witout looking at it!!!!)

Ka: Well when I met Ur mama I will ask her y she kept u away from all of us?
K: Ok Friends?????
They do their friendship shake
Simran: K who is tis??
K: Oh this is my friend Kali d one I told u bout??
S: Ohhhhhh yeah

H: Nakul that girl how can u know such a middle class girl?
N: She isn't middle class ok she is my friend and don't say anything against her
H (thoughts): that girl is the reason d 1st time N had a go at me I will eva forgive her 4 that

K goes to Kapoor house wit Kali
K outside Ka inside
Ka: Guess who is here??
Sohan: Who?
Ka: Guess????
So: Nakul
Ka: No it's a girl??
So: Pinky
Ka: No she hasn't been her in a long time??
So: Um……… Give up
K walks in
So: Kumud
K: Already forgotten me??
So: How can we form wat Ka did last year?
So and K laugh
K: I ave to go say hi to every1
Ka: u just got hre I know but I ave to call mama and plus Simran will be waitin 4 me
So: A girl?
K: Yes but don't get any ideas
So: Me would I do such a thing????
K laughs: Bye
K Leaves

In d car park she bumps into Abhay
The end!!!!!!
Hope u enjoyed it can't wait to read ur comments

Edited by nikita_88 - 19 years ago