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Posted: 14 years ago
hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
awesome update
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cant wait 4 da talli sajan
con soon
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Awsm nd fantastic updt yar.
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plz cnt wid nxt part soon.
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Hey friends how are you all doing?

Anyways, here goes part-B of chapter-10. This part is dedicated to all those who were eager to read the SaJan talli part, and were angry on me because I did not include it in my previous part.

And there are many words used in this part, which you might not understand, like-

Flool= floor

Ghal= ghar

Ale= are

Sputid= stupid

Ealning= earning

Light= right

Clime= crime

Hope you all enjoy reading!

CHAPTER- 10 Part- B

All the guests had gone. Samrat's parents were not in home, as they went to meet their neighbours.

Mayank and nupur were sitting in hall, with their both hands on their head, and an irritated look on face. And the reasons behind this irritation were samrat and gunjan, as they were drunk and behaving like kids!

N- mayank, main thodi der mein in dono ka sar phod dungi agar dono aise hi behave karte rahe to!

M- in dono ka? Main to apna phodne waala tha!

"wow samlat......tumhale ghal ke flool kitni silky silky hain!! Is pal chalne mein kitna maza aata hai!" gunjan exclaimed childishly, running here and there on the floor.

"mele papa ne banvaya hai!" samrat said proudly.

"kaash mele papa bhi hote........to wo mele liye bhi wo sab kalte, jo tumhale papa tumhale liye kalte hain!" gunjan made a sad face, and sat on the floor.

Mayank and nupur felt sorry for gunjan, as she was an orphan. She really missed her parents.

Samrat went upto her, and held her slightly by her chin.

"tum sad mat ho na chashmish! Tum sad sad achhi nahi lagti ho. Jab tumhale paas bahut saara paisa hoga na, to tum isse bhi achha flool banvana!" samrat smiled.

"sachi?" she looked at samrat innocently.

"muchi!" he replied sweetly.

They kept on looking at each other lovingly. Nupur and mayank smiled at their innocence. But then nupur realised that both were drunk!

"a.......agar tum dono ka sachi muchi khatam ho gaya ho to hum gunjan ko ghar le jaayein?" nupur went to them.

"naahi........mele ko na, abhi aul khelna hai." gunjan replied adamantly.

"khelna hai? Lekin yahan to koi toys bhi nahi hain, khelogi kisse?" mayank exclaimed.

"tum kaun ho?" samrat looked at mayank with suspicious look. "tum wahi ho na jo mele chocolates chula lete ho?"

"ye mera hone wala pati hai, samjhe? Koi chor nahi!" nupur replied quickly.

"ab tum kaun ho?" he looked at nupur in the same manner.

"samlat! Ye tumhali badi behen hain, namaste kalo!" gunjan said sweetly.

"oh!" samrat bit his tongue. "namaste didi!" he said, joining both his hands in front of nupur.

"chup!" nupur hit him slightly on his hand. "behen hun, koi aunty nahi hun jo namaste kar rahe ho!"

"chashmish hum dono kya khelein?" samrat looked at gunjan.

"ummm.......samlat main lamp walk kalke dikhaun?" gunjan spoke, after looking at the floor with wide smile.

"lamp walk?" he exclaimed. "tum lamp pe chalogi? Lamp toot jayega na!" he made a cute puppy face.

"budhhu!!" gunjan hit samrat slightly on his head. "lamp nahi, lamp.....jispe wo, fashion show ki girls walk kalti hain?."

"ohh lamp walk! To kalke dikhao naa!" samrat pleaded.

Gunjan walked 2-3 steps forward, and then came back to the same place, jumping like a kid. She continued to do this, while samrat clapped like a kid.

"wow!! Tum mele show ki show stoppel banogi!!" he exclaimed happily.

"ye ramp walk aise hota hai?" mayank asked slowly to nupur.

"tum dono among youlself kya slowly slowly talking kal lahe ho?" samrat looked angrily at mayank and nupur. "chalo, backglound music do."

"backglound music??" nupur exclaimed.

"Haan. Fashion ka hai ye jalwa!" samrat sang. "meli chashmish lamp walk kal lahi hai to backglound music to hona chahiye naa!" he added.

Nupur went to gunjan and stopped her.

"ale, loka kyun chashmish ko? Wo to mele show ki show stoppel banegi!" samrat spoke angrily.

"tum dekh rahe ho gunjan kaise chal rahi hai? agar wo gir jayegi to?" nupur looked at samrat.

"to kya hua, main hun na use sambhaalne ke liye!" samrat blushed slightly.

"aawwww tum kitne chweeeeeeet ho samlat!!" gunjan pulled his cheeks.

"chashmish mele cheeks mat pull karo!!! Meli ek nupul di hai na, wo bhi aisa kalti hain!" samrat made an angry face.

"hmmm?..lekin abhi na, main lamp walk kalke thak gayi hun!" gunjan went forward and sat on the sofa.

"to fil hum kya khelein chashmish???" samrat went after her and sat beside her.

"chalo sochte hain!" gunjan suggested.

"waah, kya brilliant idea hai!" mayank exclaimed to nupur.

Samrat and gunjan started to think about what to play, with their hands resting on their cheeks.

"hum ghal ghal khelein??" gunjan exclaimed happily.

"ghal ghal? Wo kaise khelte hain?"

"ale sputid! Main na molena mein bahut khelti thi! Lekin mela koi pati nahi banta tha. Uday bhaiya to mumbai mein the, aul mele ek bade bhaiyya hamesha padhte lehte the." Gunjan said.

"aaawwww??lekin abhi hum kaise khelenge??" samrat asked.

"hum dono husband wife bante hain, tum office jaake kaam kalna, main tumhale liye galma galam khana banaungi!" gunjan smiled shyly.

"lekin mujhe kaam kalna pasand nahi hai! Main na, girls se flirt karunga!" samrat smiled and got up.

"lekin usse to money ealning nahi hogi na!!" gunjan got up.

"lekin main koi kaam nahi kalunga! Tumhe pata hai kitne saare files pe sign kalna hota hai? Mele haath dukhne laga to?"

"jao, katti!" gunjan angrily sat on sofa.

Samrat sat beside her. "achha sholly!! Main kaam kalne jaata hun, tum mele liye khana banana!

Mayank and nupur were quite irritated by this. They went to samrat and gunjan.

M- bahut khel liya tum dono ne. Ab bas karo.

G- ale lekin abhi to hum dono so ke uthe hain. Samlat ke liye naashta banana hai mujhe. Aul tum dono padosi, padosi ban kal laho!

S- chashmish theek keh rahi hai. Neighbouls kisi ke ghal mein aise hi nahi aa jaate hain. Bell ling kalke aate hain!

N- chashmish ke chamche, chup kar!

G- wo mera spoon nahi hai. Mela spoon to kitchen mein hai! Aur samlat mela husband hai.

M- baaki ka game kal continue karna, abhi tum ghar chalo gunjan.

S- lekin kyunnnn?????????????

M- kyunki use ghar jaake jaldi sona hai, aur jaldi uthna hai!

G- eally to bed, eally to lise, keeps a gunjan healthy wealthy!!

S- but it makes samrat unhealthy unwealthy!!

N- (to mayank) ye dono fir shuru ho gaye!

M- gunjan, ghar chalo.

S- naaah.......fil mera kya hoga?? Hum dono to ghal ghal khel lahe hain na!

M- samrat, gunjan ko jaane do.

S- use jaldi hi sona hai na? Koi baat nahi, chashmish mele loom mein mele saath so jayegi.

G- haan! Mujhe koi ploblem nahi hai! Dekha, samlat meli kitni help kalta hai!!

M- GUNJAN.......tum kya keh rahi ho??

S- she is light! (holds gunjan's hand) chalo chashmish, hum sone chalte hain!

They both moved towards the stairs, when nupur blocked their way.

N- a.......tum dono saath nahi so sakte ho!

S- lekin kyun? Main use bilkul paleshan nahi kalunga!

N- samrat, tumhare room mein single bed hai, to fir gunjan kahan soyegi?

S- hmm??chashmish, tum na, apne ghal jao, hum kal game khelenge!

G- okiee!!

They came outside. Mayank took samrat and gunjan to his car, but samrat pulled gunjan towards his bike.

M- (to nupur) samrat ko to hum sambhaal lenge par?.gunjan?..uska kya karein? Dia aur uday to ghar gaye!

S- aleee main kisliye hun?.

N- pata nahi!

S- (cute angry face) chut-up!! Mela matlab tha ki main chashmish ko bike pe leke jaunga!

M- tum bike chalaoge??? Tumne bhaang pi rakhi hai??drive kaise karoge??

G- wo kal lega na jiju?..aap distulb mat kalo! (smiles) samlat, tum dlive kalo, main peechhe baithungi?.

S- good girl!!! Chalo, achhi bachchi ki talah chup chaap baithna?let me concentlate on bike chalofy?..

M- (confused) chalofy???

N- mayank plz kuchh karo.....warna ye dono sach mein bike se chale jayenge!

Mayank thought of something and then smiled.

M- samrat, agar tum meri baat maanoge na, to main tumhe chocolates ka ek bada sa box dunga!

S- yummmyyyyy........sachchi?????

M- haan! Bas meri ek baat maan lo!

S- bolo! Lekin main kisi ka muldel nahi kalunga. It is clime!

M- tum chup chap ghar pe raho, main gunjan ko uske ghar chhod dunga.

S- lekin.......

M- chocolates chahiye na?

S- haan!!

M- to meri baat maano.

Gunjan stepped down of bike and stood clumsily. Nupur supported her.

S- bye chashmish!! Hum kal khelenge!

G- tata!!

S- tata kehne se fil milne ka hope finish ho jaata hai!

G- nahi sputid! Wo to alvida kehne se hota hai.

S- ok then tata!

Gunjan goes with mayank.

Nupur brought samrat in his room, and made him lay on bed properly.

S- tum kaun ho? Aur ye kiska loom hai?

N- (irritated tone) main tumhari badi behen hun, aur ye tumhara hi room hai.

S- oh, mele ko laga ki mujhe wo STML ho gaya hai!

N- STML??

S- sholt term memoly loss!!

Nupur puts blanket on him and turned to go out of the room.

S- kahan jaa lahi ho?? Mujhe sleep nahi kalaogi?

N- matlab??

S- ale, mujhe lullaby suna kal sleep kalao na!

N- lekin mujhe.....koi lullaby nahi aati hai!

S- chal hat jhooti! Sheila ki jawaani nahi aati?

N- sheila ki jawaani......wo lullaby nahi hai samrat!!!

S- acha?? Pata nahi, lekin mujhe gaana gaa ke hi sleep kalao!!

N- achha fine!

Nupur sat beside him. Samrat gently rested his head on her lap. Nupur smiled at his cuteness and then caressed his head and face.

S- pata hai nupul, neeche wo jo ladki aayi thi na, chashme waali, mele ko wo bahut achhi lagti hai! Lekin main use pasand hun ya nahi?

N- of course wo tumhe pasand karti hogi! Dekha nahi tha, kaise tumhare saath khel rahi thi?

S- hmmmm......

Samrat then went in a deep sleep. Nupur smiled, and then made him lay on bed properly. She came out of the room.

PRECAP- samrat and gunjan feel awkward in each other's presence.

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Ok here it ends. I hope it was upto the mark. I tried my best to make this part funny and at the same time, to show the sweeter side of both samrat and gunjan.

Please comment and feel free to criticize.

Edited by ria_lovesajan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
RESERVEDD!! me first!! :) :) :)
**Edited**
Firstly I am Sooooooo Sorry for editing my comment sooo late..
Next time I will surely update jaldi..
And you also better updt this FF jaldi se because I have started to love this FF more than your other FFs!! I even like the other SaJan FF but yeah waala is very close to my heart! This reminds me of MJHT! The old days in college. Its great to read all this!
And what should I tell you about the update! We have talked alot about it!
I just wanted to say that I read the update again now and well I guess the "Ghar Ghar" scene was justified.
The update was damn funny! I was smiling and laughing the whole time!
Just lovedd it! The way gunjan called "SAMLAT!" Aww..
and my favourite was "LAMP" walking! "Arrey lamp walking nahi hota "LAMP" walking hota hai!"
I even liked the way you changed all the R's into L's!
And SaJan saying they would sleep together was damn funny!
I can iomagine them waking up the next morning and feeling SOO embarrassed for their behavior!
And samrat teasing gunjan, "Chashmish LAMP walk karo naa" hahahhah!
and gunjan blushingg!... Haaaayyyeeee!
Update sooooo ria! Cant wait! LOVE YOUUU loadz!!
Edited by SajanRox11 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
resss..me 2nddd🥳

heyy twiiniee..
awesomee hillarious part yr...
thank god u updated warna..lol
btw sajan were chooooooooooooooooo chweeeeeeeettttttttt..
full on TALLIIIIII😆
hayeeeeeeee thy were soooo adorable...😳
d ghal ghal part was too cutee
i was laughing out alottt🤣
poor mayur..unhe do bachon ko sambhaln pada..😕😆
i lovd d languge u used but..😆..me n manji we bth were usinggg it..hehehe🤣
n d precap is amazingg..poor sajan bth embarrasd...😆
cant wait 2 read moreeee...cont soon!
luv yaa
ur doll..
Edited by SM_317 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
agar tum teeno mein se kisi ek ne apna res edit nahi kiya to dekh lena!! 😡😡😡
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Posted: 14 years ago
ALEEEEEE YAAAR KYA UPDATE THAA.......
AMAZINGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
SAJAN WERE SHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO CUTEEEEEEEE
MELE KO YEH UPDATE BAHOOOOT ACHA LAGA.....VELY NICE...
ALEE YAAR DEKHO NAH MAIN BHI BILKULL SAJAN KI TALAH BAATH KAL LAHI HU....
WELLLLL...let me cm in my original tone..
well it was damn amazing part very funny + very beutifull..
vely...i mean very nice...
luved it turelyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

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Posted: 14 years ago
WOW!!!!!!!!!Ria really enjoyed the tali update a lot!!It was hilarious 🤣SaJan was so cute!!The language made it really perfect!!Can't wait to read more...Plzzzz continue soon...😆
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I loved the updates of both part!
Aweosme!
Edited by Ayesha_LuvSaJan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part
loved it
sajan were soooo adorable
continue soon
thx 4 the pm
Edited by ammykhan - 14 years ago

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