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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Shafoo

tht was soooooooooooo awesomeeeeeeeeee

thnks alot shafia....😛
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: hiiiiiiiiiii

ria that was an awsommmee update

really loved it
and yes sajan are friends again
i loved there convo was amazing
and now waiting for precap sceens
luv tanzeel

thnks alot tanzeel...
i'll continue shortly...😛
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mohit_rockstar

awesum yaa..lovd the song and sajan confrontation...yaa plz add me 2 ur pm list..i guess u forgot 2 ad me 2 ur pm list

oh sorry i guess i really forgot....sorry...
i've added u now...n i'll pm u regularly whenevr i updt..😛
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sajanfan004

heyyy ria

sry for the late comment
kya hai na ki mere paas bohot kaam tha, aur itneeee sare updates padne the ki kya boloon......im rllly sry!
dont get angry k?
but anyway i luved the update.....i liked their convo...but i found it too senti-type!!
but sajan ke upar alll sorts of things look gud!!

thnks vidhi....
n m nt at all angry......bt next time se i want u 2comment early..
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Posted: 14 years ago
guys i've seen many of my frnds upset becoz mjht is finished.....n i cant c them upset...so heres a small attempt 4m me 2make all of dem smile...

CHAPTER-8 part-A

BASKETBALL MATCH

Everything is fine now….this ws a bit difficult for gunjan to accept, coz she still felt guilty to b rude with samrat in past days. But samrat ws extremely happy tht finally gunjan is his special frnd.

Next day, samrat ws practicing bb in bb court, while dia, gunjan, benji n uday were sitting win canteen alongwith nupur.

B- waise kal sheena ka chehre dekhne laayak tha…kaise shocked ho gayi thi wo!!

D- haan…use lagta tha ki wo kuchh bhi karegi aur sammy ko pata bhi nahi chalega…silly girl!

G- lekin nupur di, aapko…in sab k baare mein kaise pata chala?

N- actually, jis din tum dono ki ladai hui thi, us din se samrat kaafi udaas rehne laga tha…main kal college sirf uski udaasi ki vajah jaanne aayi thi, fir mujhe uday mila aur usne mujhe sab bata dia..

U- aur fir hum dono ne milke ye plan banaya.

Gunjan smiles a bit n looks away.

B- kya hua gunjan?

G- wo…benji….m sorry..

B- sorry?? Kyun?

G- maine…tumse bhi bahut rudely behave kia tha…..tum mujhe sach batana chahte the…lekin maine tumhari baat nahi suni..

B- come-on gunjan, isme sorry kehne ki kya baat hai? Tumhe kya pata tha ki sheena aisa karegi?

G- par fir bhi benji, kahin na kahin maine tumhe bhi hurt…

B- no gunjan…tum itni sweet ho, tum kaise kisi ko hurt kar sakti ho bhala?

Gunjan smiles slightly.

B- aur waise bhi, main bhi to tumhara dost hi hun na? aur doston k beech, no sorry, no thank u!

N- haan gunjan, ab beeti baaton ko yaad karke kya fayeda?? Use ek bura sapna samjhkar bhool jao…

Gunjan smiles broadly. Seeing her, evry1 ws happy.

U- thts like my sweet sis!!!

Meanwhile, samrat came there hurridly.

S- uday, benji, tum dono ko practice nahi karna hai kya? Kal match hai aur tum dono to aise baithe ho jaise hum match jeet chuke hain!

U- don't worry sam, hum ye match zarur jeetenge….aftr all tum jo ho is match mein!

S- (grabbing both of them) apna moonh band rakho aur chalo!

They go 4m dere, while dia n nupur were smiling.

G- (thinks) samrat is mtach k liye kitni mehnat kar raha hai…..plz bhagwaan ye match use jeeta dena!!

D- tum kya soch rahi ho gunjan?

G- a…kuchh nahi!

D- so nupur di, aapki shaadi ki date kab ki fix hui hai?

N- (smiles) shaadi to isi month mein honi thi, lekin fir tumlogon k exams bhi to isi mahine mein hain na…..isliye shaadi around next month mein hogi.

D- thts gr8!

Samrat, benji, uday n other boys were playing bb, when sheena came there. Seeing her, samrat made an angry face n tried 2avoid her. He continued 2play bb, while sheena tried 2talk 2him.

SH- samrat….plz ek baar meri baat sunlo..

S-…….

SH- samrat main tumse kuchh kehna chahti hun..

B- sheena tumhe ek baar mein koi baat samjh nahi aati hai kya? Samrat ko tumse koi baat nahi karni hai.

SH- main tumse baat nahi kar rahi hun benji. (to samrat) plz sam ek baar mujhe explanation dene ka mauka to do…

U- explanation mein fir koi naya drama hoga na? u kno wat sheena, tumhe drama karne k alawa aur kuchh nahi aata hai…

SH- shut-up uday!

S- (angrily) STOP IT SHEENA!!!

She looked at him in surprise. While uday n benji were happy ki atleast sam knows sheena's truth.

SH- samrat tum…

S- dekho, isse pehle ki main tumse kuchh aisa keh dun jo achha nahi hai, chali jao yahan se.

SH- par samrat….

S- just.go.away.

SH- main…

S- (angrily) I SAID JUST GO AWAY!!!!!

Sheena looks at him again in shock n goes away. Samrat stares at her angrily for a while n then again goes 2play bb, unknown of d fact tht gunjan saw n heard everything.

Aftr d history classes, gunjan ws sitting on stairs n writing notes for herself, when samrat came to her.

S- heyy chashmish!

Gunjan looked up at him happily.

G- to time mil gaya tumhe?

S- matlab??

G- savere se bb court mein hi ho….mujhse theek se baat tak nahi ki tumne….isliye ab khush hun ki atleast mujhse milne ka time to mila!

S- kyun tum meri girlfrnd ho kya??

Gunjan looks at him in confusion n blushes a bit.

G- ….aisa…kyun kaha tumne?

S- wo isliye, kyunki is type ki complaints girlfrnds hi karti hain na!

Gunjan smiles.

G- aree nahi baba, main bas mazak kar rahi thi…main jaanti hun ki ye match jeetna tumhare liye bahut zaruri hai…isliye tum itni practice kar rahe ho…

S- tum…naraaz to nahi ho na ki…maine tumse theek se baat nahi ki?

G- bilkul nahi samrat! Isme bhala kaisi naraazgi?? Dekhna, tum ye match zarur jeetoge…kyunki tum itni mehnat jo kar rahe ho!

S- ab tumne keh dia hai, to match to jeetunga hi! Lekin badle mein mujhe kya milega??

G- obviously, trophy!

S- (smiles) wo to mujhe princy denge…lekin tum mujhe kya dogi??

G- main?? Mujhse kya chahiye tumhe??

S- promise!

G- kaisa promise??

S- yehi, ki aaj k baad se tum kabhi bhi mujhse naraaz nahi hogi….agr mujhpar gussa aaye, to mujhe daant dena, chaho to maar bhi dena, lekin mujhse baat karna mat chhodna…kyunki tumhari daant ya maar se mujhe utna hurt nahi hoga, jitna tumhari naraazgi se hota hai…

G- samrat, main ek baar ye galti kar chuki hun….ab dobara kabhi nahi karungi…promise! Haan, lekin jab daantungi tab fir ye mat kehna ki daant ti ho!

Samrat laughs.

S- sorry chashmish, mujhe practice k liye fir jaana hoga….sirf tumse baat karne k liye main break leke aaya tha..nw I've to go..

G- koi baat nahi samrat, tum practice karo. Mera kya hai, main to hamesha tumhare saath hun…to hum kabhi bhi baat kar sakte hain!

S- (smiles) tum kitni understanding ho…….(thinks of sheena) kaash kuchh log tumhari tarah hote!

Samrat stopped smiling, when he thought of sheena.

G- kuchh log??

S- a…..w….wo…haan…I mean….benji aur…uday!

G- benji aur uday bhaiyya?

S- haan! Jab dekho dono practice chhodkar bhaag jaate hain……ek ko araam chahiye, aur dusre ko khana!😆

G- (laughs) achha ab tum practice k liye jao….hum baad mein baat karenge.

S- okie…cyaa!!

He leaves. While gunjan thinks of what samrat said to her.

G- (thinks) main jaanti hun samrat, ki kuchh logon se tumhara matlab sheena thi….lekin tum uske baare mein baat nahi karna chahte the…isliye benji aur uday bhaiyya ka naam le liya…

It ws late evening now. Samrat had gone home early coz of some work for nupur's wedding.

While gunjan ws waiting for dia n uday at college gate to go home. She looked for them, bt she saw sheena coming towards her sadly.

G- sheena…

SH- im sorry gunjan! plz mujhe maaf kardo….maine najaane mein itni badi galti kar di…bt believe me gunjan, mera irada tumhe hurt karne ka bilkul bhi nahi tha…

G- mujhe tumhari koi baat nahi sunni sheena….(walks 4m dere.)

SH- plz gunjan atleast tum to meri baat suno!

Gunjan stops there. She felt tht somehow sheena ws very sad, n it ws gunjan's habit…she cant see any1 upset.

So she stopped back 2listen to sheena.

SH- gunjan plz…koi bhi meri baat nahi sun raha hai….samrat bhi nahi…gunjan plz mera yakeen karo..

G- kya fayeda sheena….agar main tumhari baat sun bhi lun to kya hoga? Samrat to tumse naraaz hi rahega na? tumhe is baat ka andaaza bhi hai, ki samrat tumhari is harkat ki vajah se kitna hurt hua hai?? wo to ab tumhara naam bhi nahi leta hai…wo tumhe apna best frnd maanta tha sheena…..aur tumne? Tumne kya kia?? Uske bharosa ko tod dia??

Sheena had tears in her eyes.

G- samrat jaisa dost bahut kam logon ko milta hai sheena, aur jinko milta hai na, wo bahut khushnaseeb hote hain….tum un logon mein se ek thi sheena….

SH- gunjan plz aisa mat kaho….main samrat ki frndship khona nahi chahti hun…main uska gussa nahi dekh sakti hun…

G- ye to tumhe wo file churaane se pehle sochna chahiye tha sheena!

Sheena looks at her.

G- samrat kya, maine bhi kabhi ye nahi socha ki tum aisa karogi…agar tumhe lag raha tha, ki main tumhare aur samrat k dosti k beech aa rahi hun, to saaf saaf keh dia hota….main tum dono k beech nahi aati……lekin ye sab karne ki kya zarurat thi?

Sheena still cried. While gunjan ws feeling a bit pity on her.

SH- plz gunjan…..main jaanti hun ki ab ek tum hi ho jo samrat ko firse mana sakti ho….ek tum hi ho jo firse meri dosti samrat se karva sakti ho..plz gunjan…mere liye…plz ek baar……usse baat karo..

G- mere baat karne se kya hoga? Tum khud kyun nahi usse baat karti ho?

SH- kyunki is wakt wo meri baat nahi samjhega…aur ab sirf ek tum hi ho, jo meri dosti firse samrat se karva sakti ho….plz gunjan….i swear, main fir kabhi aisa nahi karungi…bt tum bas ek baar samrat se baat karlo…plz..

Gunjan ws thinking abt.it, when dia n uday came there n saw gunjan with sheena.

D- gunjan, tum yahan kya kar rahi ho? Wo bhi iske saath?

G- a…kuchh nahi dia, chalo, hum ghar chalte hain….

D- chalo.

They 3 go.

Aftr they leave, sheena wipes off her tears n gives an evil smile.

SH- (thinks) bevakoof gunjan! use kya lagta hai, ki main sach mein guilty hun….mujhe uski help ki zarurat hai…..NO WAYS!! Samrat sirf aur sirf mera hai….aur main use kisi aur k saath share nahi karungi….bas ek baar samrat mujhse firse dosti karle…fir dheere dheere gunjan ko uski zindagi se hamesha k liye door kar dungi!!😈

PRECAP- basketball match b/w greenfield n sunshine

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Gunjan sees samrat in bb uniform for d first time!😳😉

plz do comment n press like tab......😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
heyyyyyyyyy ria
yay ya me d first one 2 commnt 4 d first tym...🥳thnxx yaar
but sorry 4 unresrving late...
coming 2 d update...it was awesomeeeeee
benjy gunajn secen was sweet...
sam shouted at sheena..lovd dat part😆
loved it...😊..sajan were sooooooo cuteeeeeee
i luvd dat dialouge..kya tum meri gf ho?😲😆..hayeeee gunjan blushed...😳
HATEEEEEEEEE dat sheena 2 d core..😡..she is just sooooo😡
hate her..poor gunjan believes everyone easily😲..
i hope she gets 2 knw abt her soon....
but enede ona very bad part..wantd 2 read more😊
n d precap is amazingggg..
waiting 4 d bb match kuch cute n romantic sg scnes daaldena😉..😍 do cont soon..
Edited by SM_317 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
very niceee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thnankf for the pm!!!!! do continuee sooonnn!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
RES! Im Third!
**edited**
Hii Ria🤗🤗🤗
Lovveedd Your Update!!
Par Kyun End Kar Diya! Mujhe Aur Padhna Tha!
Haaaayyyyeeee...!! Loved Starting ka scene...
Par what was nupur doing in college???
Nd Unki Shaadi!! Yay! i wanna see!! Sajan Ko geet main dance karvana!! mazzaaa ayega!!😍😍
Ab Plz Jaldi Se Confess karva De..!! nahi saha jaata !!
I was SoOO happy when Samrat Screamed at Sheena!! LOL!😃😃
I was like finally brains mill gaye!
Par ye end main phir sheena ne gunjan ko phasaliya!!😡😡😡😡
Abhi turant agar kuchh garbar kiya toh maar khaogii!!
joote padenge!!
Samrat came to meet gunjan specially!! Gunjan complaining like his GF!
LOL!☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
Haaaaayyyyyyeeeeeeeeee Samrat Always makes me blushh!!!
Well done !!! You wrote the entire thing reallyyy Well!!!
Love Youu!!!!
Mwah!
Edited by SajanRox11 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey dear superb update loved it that sheena want to kick her out 😈🤣gunjan nahi toh ham hi sahi 🤣i hope sajan will see her real face ,cant' wait for BB match n thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part
loved it
hate dat sheena😡
continue soon

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