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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ammykhan

awesome update

really nice
loved it
continue soon
thx 4 the pm

thnks dear.........will continue soon.........😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: monaya_sajan

.lovely superb update.........simply awesome......fantabulous...........do continue soon...........

yeah i'll continue soon.........btw thanks commenting.......😊
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CHAPTER 4 part-C

Sajan were standing near d bike.

S- gunjan, meri bike achhi nahi hai kya?

G- tumhe aisa kyun laga?

S- kyunki tum pichhle dus minutes se meri bike ko ghoor rahi ho…….

G- nahi samrat, aisi baat nahi hai…….

S- toh??

G- w…wo….actually……main kabhi bikes par nahi baithi hun..mujhe…..bike par baithne se darr lagta hai……

S- bas itni si baat???

G- ye itni si baat hai?? Agar main bike se gir gayi to??

S- to main hoon na!

Gunjan looks at him.

S- I mean k tum mujhe pakad lena, tum nahi girogi………

G- par……

S- ab par-var mat karo…….sochlo, tum hi late ho rahi ho! Mera kya hai………..lekin ek baat bol deta hun, main auto mein tumhe nahi chhodunga………

Gunjan thinks 4a while.

G- a…theek hai….bike pe hi chalte hain.

S- that's like a gud girl!

G- lekin plz samrat dheere dheere chalaana……

S- (grins) samrat shergill k saath bike pe jaa rahi ho, aur ye bhi expect karti ho ki speed slow rahega??😉

G- samrat plz na mujhe darr lagta hai……..

S- achha baba promise………..kam speed rakhunga……ab baitho to sahi!

She settles herself on d bike.

S- mujhe pakad lo, darr nahi lagega……..

Gunjan hesitates at first, bt then she slightly places her one hand on his shoulder.

S- gunjan, agr tumhe girna hi hai, to no prob! Lekin itna dheere kyun pakdi ho?? tum ek

Kaam karo, mujhe pakdo hi mat!!

Gunjan felt uncomfortable 2hold samrat properly. Samrat saw this thru d rear mirror.

S- itna uncomfortable feel mat karo gunjan…..mujhe theek se pakad lo, warna agr gir gayi to ilzaam mujhpar hi aayega!

Gunjan tightens her grip a little. Samrat smiles n drives wards her home.

At first he kept d speed slow, bt after sometime, he increased speed..gunjan ws scared.

G- samrat kya kar rahe ho?😲

S- drive kar raha hun…..aur kya?

G- lekin tumne to promise kia tha ki tum kam speed par drive karoge….

S- sorry gunjan, jab main bike par hota hun na, to speed apne aap hi badh jaati hai……

G- lekin samrat………..

S-(loudly) enjoyyyyyy gunjannn…………….!!!!!!!

Samrat increased his speed evn more, due 2which gunjan fell on his shoulders……..both had a sweet eyelock😳….bt gunjan broke d eyelock coz of anger.

Sajan reached gunjan's home.

S- aa gaya tumhara home sweet home…..

Gunjan quietly stepped down of d bike.

G- thanks. Bye…

She walked 4ward leaving samrat in confusion behind…

S- ye kya gunjan?? Itna rude thnks aur bye…..wo bhi tumhare moonh se??

G-……….

S- tum…..tum naraaz ho kya??

G- mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni hai. Tum jao na!

S- hey 1sec. maine aisa kya kia hai??

G- bano mat, tum achhe se jaante ho ki vajah kya hai.

S- oohhhh…to tum isliye naraaz ho kyunki maine bike ki speed badha di thi?

G-…………….

S- sorry gunjan, wo to maine bas mazak mein kia tha!

G- aur agar main gir jaati to?? Samrat tum bhi na……sach mein bilkul bachcha jaise ho!

S- are par…….

G- main jaa rahi hun, bye…..

S- gunjan meri baat to……

Gunjan went inside.

S- ye tune kya kia dude? Abhi to gunjan se itni strong frndship hui hai, aur abhi maine use naraaz kar dia?? Use manaana padega….!!

He drives 2his home.

Gunjan found evry1 sleeping in their respective rooms. She silently goes in her room, changes into her night-dress n lays on bed. She thought abt. d dinner n samrat's family.

G- samrat ki family kitni achhi hai…..sab ek dusre se kitna pyaar karte hain……nupur di aur mayank saath mein bahut achhe lagte hain…aur samrat……

Suddenly, she stopped smiling when she remembered abt. d bike ride of samrat.

G- samrat se to ab main bolungi nahi…..kitni speed par drive kar raha tha…..agar main gir jaati to?? Use meri bilkul bhi chinta nahi hai!

Gunjan stopped 4a while aftr speaking d last sentence.

G- chinta?? Mujhe kya ho gaya hai, samrat jaisa ladka bhala mujh jaisi ladki ki chinta kyun karega?? Kahan wo college ka rockstar…..aur kahan main din-raat kitaabon k peechhe chhipi rehne waali……….lekin main usse bahut naraaz hun!!

She sleeps, thinking abt.samrat.

There, samrat had changed into his night trousers n ws standing on terrace, when nupur came 2him.

N- tum abhi tak jag rahe ho?? Kal college nahi jaana hai kya??

S- kal to college jaana bahut zaruri hai……

N- achha?? College jaana zaruri hai, ye tum keh rahe ho?? Waah, manna padega gunjan ko….kitna badal gaye ho tum uski company mein…….btw college jaane ka reason kya hai?

S- gunjan…..mujhse naraaz ho gayi hai.

N- kya?? Tumne usse kuchh kaha hai kya?

S- di….main bhala usse kya kahunga??

N- toh fir??

S- wo chahti thi ki main kam speed par drive karun, lekin….

N- tum roller-coaster ki tarah drive karne lage hoge, rite?? Main tumhe achhe se jaanti hun…..

S- lekin abhi wo mujhse naraaz hai…..use sorry bolna padega…..pata nahi kitni naraaz hogi….

N- waise samrat, ek baat puchhun??

S- haan.

N- aajtak har ladki tumse kisi na kisi baat par naraaz hui hai, lekin tumne kabhi kisi ko sorry bolne k liye itna nahi socha, jitna tum gunjan k liye soch rahe ho…..yahan tak ki sheena bhi tumse kitni baar naraaz hui, lekin tumne kabhi usse seriously sorry nahi kaha….to fir gunjan hi kyun??

S- tum kehna kya chahti ho di?

N- tumhe nahi lagta hai ki tum gunjan k liye ek frnd se zyada sochte ho?? Like, tum use frnd se thoda zyada maante ho?

S- main samjha nahi….

N- tum jis daur se guzar rahe ho, main pehle us daur se guzar chuki hun……isliye jaanti hun, ki abhi tumhe kuchh samajh nahi aayega…main samajh sakti hun ki tum gunjan k liye kya feel karte ho…

Samrat tried 2ignore her.

S- tum….kya keh rai ho di main samajh nahi paa raha hun…

N- samajh nahi paa rahe ho yaa fir samjhna nahi chahte??

Samrat looked at nupur blankly.

N- main jaanti hun samrat ki abhi tumhe meri baatein samajh nahi aayengi…..lekin bahut jaldi tumhe ehsaas ho jaayega ki tum gunjan se………

S- gunjan se??

N- gunjan se pyaar karte ho….

Samrat ws a bit surprised, although he himself knew tht wat nupur said ws somewhere right.

S- k….kya??

N- haan samrat! Tum gunjan se pyaar karne lage ho….

S- di pls…….kahaniyaan mat banao…

N- kahaniyaan? Samrat tumhe lagta hai ki main kahaniyaan bana rahi hun??

S- haan. Kyunki tum mujhe tease karna chahti ho….

N- (grins) to fir ek baat batao samrat, tum wahi ho na jo kitaabon se, padhai se door bhaagte the??? Fir achanak kaise tumhe ye sab pasand aane laga?? Batao…..

S-……….

N- main batati hun……gunjan ki vajah se…

S-………..

N- poore Greenfield college mein tum pranks khelne k liye famous ho…..har student ko tumne tang kia hai…..fir gunjan ko kyun tumne ek baar bhi pareshaan nahi kiya?? Jawaab do samrat?..........main batati hun……kyunki gunjan tumhe achhi lagti hai…..ek dost se zyada….

S-…….

N- college ki har ladki ko tum ek jaisa treat karte ho…..saari ladkiyon se flirt karte ho…..lekin gunjan se ek baar bhi flirt nahi kia???? Kyun samrat jawaab do…….bolo….

S- KYUNKI MAIN GUNJAN KO BEHAD PASAND KARTA HUN NUPUR!!!!!

Nupur smiles……this is wat she wanted 2hear 4m samrat…..she knew it, bt still she wanted him 2speak up….

S- main…….main use bahut pasand karta hun di…..i really like her………wo….har ladki se alag hai…..sabse juda hai…..main pehli nazar se hi use is kadar pasand karne laga hun ki mujhe har wakt, har jagah sirf gunjan hi gunjan dikhai deti hai…….use aaye hue zyada din nahi hue hain, fir bhi wo meri bahut achhi dost ban gayi hai……..sirf isliye kyunki main use pasand karta hun……..

Nupur was happy….atleast sam expressed his feelings 4gunjan.

N- jaanti thi samrat……bas…..ek baar tumhare moonh se suna chahti thi……

There was a silence for a moment.

S- main….sone jaa raha hun……gudnite…..

N- ek min. samrat!

Samrat stopped n turned back.

N- ek baar samrat……..bas…..ek baar tum meri baton par dhyaan dena….shayad mere samjhane ka tareeka galat hai…….lekin jo main samjhana chahti hun, wo galat nahi hai…….

S- main…..jaa raha hun……

He goes.

N- (2herself) kabhi na kabhi to tumhe samajhna hi hoga samrat……..aakhir kabtak apni feelings se door bhaagoge?? Aaj nahi to kal, tumhe apne pyaar ka ehsaas ho hi jaayega….bas, darr is baat ka hai ki…….kahin tum apne pyaar ko samajhne mein der na kardo………

She goes in her room.

Samrat ws in his room, lied on bed n thinking abt.wat nupur said 2him.

S- kya jo di ne kaha wo sach hai? Kya sach mein main gunjan….se….pyaar karne laga hun? Lekin….agar aisa hai, to kyun mujhe meri dreamgirl mein gunjan ka chehre nahi dikhta hai? Kyun?? Kya gunjan bhi mere baare mein…….aisa feel karti hogi?? Oh god…….kyun soch raha hun main ye sab…..kya ho raha hai mujhe??

He closes his eyes n tries 2sleep, bt in vain. He feels a bit irritated n thinks abt.gunjan

S- kyun main baar baar gunjan k baare mein sochne lagta hun……aakhir kyun main uski taraf kheencha chala jata hun?? Kyun uske aage mujhe koi ladki achhi nahi lagti hai?? Kyun???

Lost in thoughts, samrat goes in a deep sleep…..

PRECAP—samrat realizes his love + sheena's evil plan!!

hope u guys liked it......do comment n press like tab......i'll b back wid next part very soon.....till then plz dont 4get 2comment....
love😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMGG...
I Read IT Before The PM...
Hayyee <3...
The Story Is Going Brilliant Yaar
Aise Ideas Toh Mast Hain!!
Pllzz Cont Soon!!
Cant WAIT <3 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
tht was sooo cool mujhay laghta hai ka sheenaaaa ka evil plan flop ho jay gaya qq ka dia heard everything she said in locker room hope fully sheenaaaaaaaaaaaa ka plan flop ho jaya aur sajan will together
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Posted: 14 years ago
res *edited*
hey
awesome ff
its a very different story
every part is so good, well written
keep writing n cont soon
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Edited by saduf - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey awsm yaar fabolous.it ws rocking part swty.
plz
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plz cnt wid nxt part soon.
luv u
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Posted: 14 years ago
👍🏼Great update..Loved SaJan bike ride..Can't wait to see Sammy's realization..Please continue soon ASAP....❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
Res! Love youu!! finally u updtd! waise maine aadha padha baaki padhkar comment karungi!
Yay!
*edited*
Sorry Ria!! bohot hi late hoon main.,.!!
Pata hai maine tera aadha ff padha tha n abhi tera om mila toh when i started reading yeh waala update tab yaad aaya ki pichhla waala toh padha hi nahi tha.. LOL!
N now coming to your update
Firstly It was just AWESOMEE!! love the way nupur tried to amke sam realise his love.. these lines where my fav..:

N- (grins) to fir ek baat batao samrat, tum wahi ho na jo kitaabon se, padhai se door bhaagte the??? Fir achanak kaise tumhe ye sab pasand aane laga?? Batao…..

S-……….

N- main batati hun……gunjan ki vajah se…

S-………..

N- poore Greenfield college mein tum pranks khelne k liye famous ho…..har student ko tumne tang kia hai…..fir gunjan ko kyun tumne ek baar bhi pareshaan nahi kiya?? Jawaab do samrat?..........main batati hun……kyunki gunjan tumhe achhi lagti hai…..ek dost se zyada….

S-…….

N- college ki har ladki ko tum ek jaisa treat karte ho…..saari ladkiyon se flirt karte ho…..lekin gunjan se ek baar bhi flirt nahi kia???? Kyun samrat jawaab do…….bolo….

S- KYUNKI MAIN GUNJAN KO BEHAD PASAND KARTA HUN NUPUR!!!!!

Nupur smiles……this is wat she wanted 2hear 4m samrat…..she knew it, bt still she wanted him 2speak up….

Reallyy..!! This update was fantastic!! Ab finally samrat ko apna pyaar milega!
N what yaar! khushiyan shuru hone se pehle hi sheena ka plan!!!!
Nahiii..!! tu sheena ke side pe hai ki sajan ke??
Unhe milne toh de! par sheena ki tension nahi hai! dia haina uspe nazar rakhne ke liye!!
(read that part in ur next update😉)
Abhi main doosra update padhne ja rahi hoon!!!
Love you!
Manjari
Edited by SajanRox11 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome superb part.....luvd sajan bike scene..samrat kabhi nahin sudhrega...😉...n gunjan angry on sam hope samrat usse jaldi mana de....sanu scene was cute.....😊...n d precap is very nyc....waiting 2 see samrats realistion...😃...thnxx 4 d pm....
Edited by SM_317 - 14 years ago

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