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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ria Please update next part soon...................😍
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Originally posted by: SM_317

awesome wonderful part.... luvd d sajan phn convo n sanu scene was cute.....plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do continue soon eagerly waiting 2 read d dinner part.....n ya me n manjari r waiting 4 that super scene....i knw abhi tym hai but still....😳....n ya gunjan is very simple n ------- bhi hojayegi samaj gayi na....😉......do continue soon.....plzzzzzzz

heyyy shreya.......thnks dear.........i'll updt shortly.....
n yes gunji is too sweet 4tht super scene.....bt dont worry, wo jaldi -------- bhi ho jaayegi....main samajh gayi yaar............i'll try putting up tht scene as early as possible!😉
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okay.....dis updt is 4them who wanted 2kill me for nt updating fast......manjaree is d leading 1in dis list.....

CHAPTER 4 part-B

Gunjan ws standing with dia after ringing d doorbell. She ws really very nervous.

D- gunjan dear, tum itni nervous kyun ho rahi ho? Sammy ki family tumhara interview thodi lene waale hain?

G- pata nahi kyun dia mujhe darr lag raha hai.......agr mujhse koi galti ho gayi, to sab kya sochenge.....samrat kya sochega?

D- just relax gunjan...dekhna, sabkuchh perfect hoga....

Nupur opens d door.

D- hey nupur di!

N- hii dia....

D- di, ye hai...

N- tumhari cousin gunjan rite??

D- u guessed rite.....

N- hiii gunjan! Main samrat ki badi behen hun.......

G- hiii di.........

N- andar aao na tumlog....

D- nahi di actually mujhe kisi kaam se mall jaana hai.........n waise bhi, sammy ne to especially gunjan ko invite kia tha....

Dia passes a smile to gunjan.

D- main fir kabhi aaungi.......abhi mujhe der ho rahi hai, so bye di........

N- theek hai, bye.....

Dia goes.

N- tum andar aao na gunjan.

They come in hall n settle on sofa. Samrat's mom also comes there, gunjan stands up on seeing her.

G- namaste aunty....

SM- namaste beta.....kaisi ho?

G- main theek hun aunty....

SM- baitho na, khadi kyun ho?

They sit. Nupur saw tht gunjan ws feeling a bit uncomfortable.

N- gunjan, ise apna hi ghar samjho......itna uncomfortable feel mat karo..

Gunjan smiles.

SM- aane mein koi takleef to nahi hui na beta?

G- n..nahi aunty.....wo....dia mujhe yahan drop karke gayi hai....

SM- waise, samrat to tumhari taareef karte nahi thakta hai......jabse tum college aayi ho na, din raat kehta rehta hai ki gunjan bahut sweet hai, bahut helpful hai, padhne mein tez hai.........aisa lagta hai ki tumhari tareefon ki potli uske paas rehti hai!

Gunjan smiles.

G- samrat bhi to achha hai na.........wo jaanta hai ki wo padhai mein achha perform kar sakta hai........

Nupur 's POV-

Gunjan is really a very sweet girl.......soft-spoken.....just as samrat described her........i noticed her face brightly glowed up on hearing samrat's name........she ws really happy 2kno tht samrat thinks gud abt. Her.........she seems 2b d perfect life-partner for samrat...........😊

SM- nupur, jaake dekh to samrat kar kya raha hai....kabse apne kamre mein hai......usko bell ki awaaz sunai nahi di kya?? Usko bolo ki gunjan aa gayi hai.

N- main jaati hun...

Nupur comes in samrat's room.

N- by-god kitna time lagaoge ready hone mein??? Aaj itna time le rahe ho, to shaadi k din to dulhan tumhara intezaar karte karte boodhhi ho jaayegi!!😆

S- di plz....gunjan aa gayi??

N- mere pyaare bhai, wo pichhle aadhe ghante se tumhara wait kar rahi hai.......chalo neeche....

S- theek hai.

They both come down in hall. But d moment samrat looks at gunjan, he cud not evn take a step forward. Gunjan looked at him n blushed.

Nupur saw both of them looking at each other....she smiled.

N- a.....ahem ahem ahem!!

Sajan broke their eyelock......samrat blushed a bit when he realized tht he ws staring gunjan in front of nupur n his mom.

S- hii gunjan......

G- hiii samrat........

Nupur n mom looked at them......as they behaved so formally.

SM- lagta hai mere aur nupur k yahan rehne se tum dono ko uncomfortable feel ho raha hai...

G- n....nahi aunty, aisi koi baat nahi hai.....wo...

N- to fir tum dono itna formally kyun behave kar rahe ho??? Aisa lag raha hai jaise pehli baar mil rahe ho.

SM- tumdono Baatein karo....aur nupur, chal to, kitchen mein meri help karne...

G- aunty, main aapki help kar doon?

SM- tum??? Tumhe.....kitchen k kaam aate hain??

G- kar to leti hun aunty.....par agar aap chahein to main aapki help....

SM- are nahi beta iski koi zarurat nahi hai....main to bas ye soch rahi thi ki aajkal ki ladkiyaan kitchen k kaam jaanti bhi hain ya nahi.............tum samrat k saath project poora karo, nupur meri madad kar degi....

S- haan haan gunjan lets go.......

Evry1 look at samrat. Nupur again smiled at this.

S- a......mera matlab hai ki project jaldi se poora kar lete hain...fir dinner karenge.......

Nupur n mom go in kitchen, while sajan completed their project in hall. Although it ws very difficult for both of them because samrat ws completely mesmerized by her beauty, while gunjan cud hardly resist his charm😳.....bt still they tried 2pay attention 2wards project.

Nearly half an hour passed, when nupur came wid mayank 2sajan.

N- gunjan, mujhe tumhe kisi se milaana hai.

G- kisse?

N- mayank......mera fiance......aur mayank, ye hai gunjan.....samrat ki frnd aur project partner.

M- hey gunjan....nice 2meet u...

G- hiii mayank.....

M- waise, main tumhe best of luck wish karna chahta hun.

G- wo kyun??

M- taaki samrat k saath tumhara project ka safar suffer na ban jaaye.😆

G- samrat itna bura bhi nahi hai.....

Samrat loved 2see tht gunjan defended him.......he unknowingly smiled shyly😳. Nupur looked at him

N- (slowly) itna sharma kyun rahe ho??

S- (slowly) main?? Main kab sharmaya??

Samrat's mom came there.

SM- khana lag gaya hai......chalo sab aa jao...

They all proceed 2wards dining table n settle themselves..........servants serve d dinner n evry1 r eating n chatting.

S- pata hai gunjan, mom kitna tasty khana banati hain.....unke jaisa khana koi nahi bana sakta hai....

G- sach mein, aunty, aap bahut achha khana banati hain.

SM- thnk u beta, par ye samrat ki makhkhanbaazi hai......

S- gunjan, wo sabzi pass karna plz.

Gunjan hands over a bowl to samrat, n while taking it, his hands slightly touched gunjan's hands, 2which she felt something strange.....evn samrat felt d same way.......they both were lost in each other's eyes😍........

M- samrat??

S-.....................

N- samrat?? gunjan?????

G-..........

M- SAMRAAAAATTTTTT!!!!!

They both came back in their senses...

S- kya hua, chilla kyun rahe ho??

M- tum sunoge to nahi chillaunga.....

N- kahan khoye hue the bhai??

SM- nupur, samrat ko chidhaana band kar aur chupchaap khana khao....

They continue 2hav their dinner wid lots of masti n mayur pulling sajan's leg bt especially nupur teased samrat...

After dinner, sajan again worked on their project, while mayank looked at him in surprise.

M- waise samrat, projects mein tumhara interest kabse paida hua??

S- jabse gunjan meri partner hai........

M- kya??

Samrat realized tht wat he spoke, luckily, gunjan didn't heard him clearly as he spoke a bit slowly.

S- a....w.....wo....mera matlab....hai ki....gunjan padhne mein bahut achhi hai na, to wo meri help karti hai, isliye main projects par dhyaan dene laga hun......

M- oohhhhh.......mujhe laga ki kuchh aur baat hai.

S- kya baat hogi??

M- chhodo rehne do, gunjan yahan hai isliye main chup hun...

Gunjan looks at both of them in confusion.

S- mayank pls atleast tum to mujhe mat chidhaao...

Nupur comes there wid a tray of 4cups coffee.

N- haan mayank, wo haq sirf aur sirf mera hai.......

Mayank n gunjan smile. Samrat was happy 2 see d coffee.

S- wow coffee.....

N- haan.....socha ki gunjan mere haath ki coffee taste kare..

S- gunjan tum ekbaar meri di k haath ki bani coffee peekar dekho, im sure tumhe pasand aayega.

Gunjan smiles.

M- haan....isi coffee k wajah se main nupur ko aur bhi pasand karne laga.....

Nupur n mayank look at each other lovingly....samrat smiled.

S- ab ye kya ho raha hai.........hum bhi hain yahan!!

Mayur break their eyelock, gunjan smiles n evry1 drink coffee.

N- to batao gunjan, kaisi lagi coffee??

G- bahut achhi....sach di.......aap bahut achhi coffee banati hain?.

N- thnks gunjan??tumhe pata hai, samrat ko coffee itna pasand hai ki agr use raat mein dinner miley ya na miley, par coffee to use zarur milna chahiye??

They drink coffee together??.sajan sometimes looked at each other n blushed slightly??they didn't knew tht wht was happening 2them, bt mayur understood it. They liked 2see samrat falling 4gunjan?..infact, they loved 2c sajan 2gether??

After drinking the coffee, gunjan looked at her watch.

G- are, 10:30 baj raha hai?.mujhe time ka dhyaan hi nahi raha??

M- gunjan, agar humari company mein rahogi na, to time ka kabhi pata nahi chalta hai??.

N- haan gunjan?.baatein karte karte kaise time pass ho jaaye pata hi nahi chalta hai!

G- lekin sach mein bahut der ho gayi hai di??.main kabhi itni der tak ghar se door nahi rehti hun?.

Samrat's mother came to them.

SM- kya Baatein ho rahi hain?

N- dekho na maan, gunjan jaana chahti hai?.itni jaldi?

G- sach aunty, mujhe ghar se itni der tak door rehne ki aadat nahi hai?.uday bhaiyya, dia chachaji aur dadi meri chinta kar rahe honge?..

SM- ye to achhi baat hai beta ki tumhe apne ghar se zyada der tak door rehne ki aadat nahi hai??

G- mujhe chalna chahiye aunty?..project ka thoda sa kaam hai, samrat ne kaha hai ki wo use poora karne ki koshish karega??..

SM- wo to theek hai beta, lekin tum kya akeli jaogi?? Tumhe to yahan se jaane ka raasta bhi nahi maaloom hoga?.

Gunjan ws silent 4a moment.

M- kyun, samrat hai na?..wo gunjan ko ghar tak chhod dega???kyun samrat?

SM- waise ye achha idea hai??samrat, tum gunjan ko ghar tak chhod doge na?

Samrat was really very happy 2know tht he wud get some time 2spend wid gunjan alone.

S- haan haan mom kyun nahi? Gunjan meri hi to dost hai?.

N- (slowly) dost hai ya phir?.dost se badhkar?..

Samrat looked at nupur.

N- (slowly) a?..mera matlab hai ki??best friend!!

Gunjan smiled.

SM- gunjan, tumhe samrat k saath jaane mein koi pareshaani nahi hai na?

G- nahi aunty, pareshaani kyun hogi?

S- gr8! Main apni bike ki keys lekar aata hun.

He goes n brings d keys.

S- chalein gunjan?

G- hmmmmm??.

M- bye gunjan?.gudnyte?.

G- gudnite mayank?..

N- bye gunjan?.fir kabhi aana?.bahut saari baatein karenge?

G- theek hai nupur di?..bye..

Gunjan comes 2samrat's mom.

G- namaste aunty?.

SM- namaste beta?.hamesha khush raho?..tumse milkar bahut achha laga?..aise hi aati rehna beta?..

G- jee aunty?.

Sajan went out of d house.

N- mumma, gunjan samrat k baaki doston se bahut alag hai na??

SM- haan nupur, maine bhi yehi notice kia?..bahut hi pyaari ladki hai?..iske maan-baap nahi hain, fir bhi kitni sanskaari hai??aisi ladkiyaan aajkal bahut kam hi milti hain??

She goes in kitchen. Mayur talk abt. Sajan.

M- waise nupur, tumhe nahi lagta hai ki ye gunjan bilkul samrat ki dreamgirl jaisi hai?

N- mujhe aisa lagta nahi hai, balki mujhe poora yakeen hai ki gunjan samrat ki dreamgirl hi hai??wo bilkul waisi hi hai jaisa samrat sochta hai??

M- gunjan bahut alag ladki hai??but uski maturity dekhkar mujhe nahi lagta hai ki wo samrat ko jhel paayegi?..

N- are, agar wo itni mature hai to samrat ka achhe se khayal rakhegi??.tum jaante nahi ho kya-opposites attract? Humare case mein bhi to yehi hua hai!!

M- oh haan!

They smile.

PRECAP- sajan bike ride + sam love realisation starts!😉

here ends d chap4 part-B.....hope u guysss liked......plz dont forget 2press like tab if u liked it n do comment........i'll try updting d part-C by tomorrow..........bt till den i'll b waiting 4ur comments........😊

love, ria
Edited by ria_lovesajan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Great part Ria ..Loved it..Can't wait to read about sajan bike ride..Please continue soon..Thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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..lovely superb update....luvd sajan feelings 4 each othr..sajan cute eye locks😳...n d way mayur teased sajan n sams mom also lyked gunjan...n d precap is damn awesome ....thnxx 4 d pm...n do continue soon.. warna main baat nahin karungi..😆.
Edited by SM_317 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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fantastic ff.....plsssss add me to ur pm list.....cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Omg awsm yaar .realy very very nice.waoo yaar awsm,fabolous too gud yaar.
ab baas jldi sai nxt updt krdo plz plz plz plz realy cant w8.
luv u
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesum Yaar...👏
Me Addicted To Your FF...
Its So SWEET...
Totally SaJanlicoius Part....
Gunjan Shy...=)☺️
But Imagine Samrat Being Shy!!🤣☺️
Kya Scene Hoga Naa?!!
Pllzz Cont Soon...
Cant WAIT For Their Bike Ride Date..😍Aheem Aheem😆
And I Want The Part To Tomorrow...
Jaldi Se Cont Karna Apne Januable Parts!!
Intezaar Nahi Hota!!😳
Edited by SaJan_Sana4ever - 14 years ago
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Hii Ria!
Before I forget thanxx 4 dedicating this update to me!!
I just love this ff! this takes me back to those nice old sajan times..!!
I can never forget them! and this is very different from them!!
I am reallyyy enjoying this ff!!
Ok now coming to your update.. Wah yaar! loved sam today!
He is just like a kid..!! n nupur pulling his leg! LOL! love ur idea!
N the dinner scene was superb! Yay everyone liked gunjan! bas ab jaldi se inki prem kahani shuru ho aur maza aye!! humphh..
Ab aur kya boloo.. ur update was fantabulous.. mind blowing.. n very entertaing!
You add romance masti and funny scenes all in 1!!
Love ur way of writing! plz update sooooooooooooooooooooon!!!
Ab toh aur bhi i cant wait!! sajan bike ride and samrat love realisation!
hayyyeee main mar jaawaan! ab kal hi update karna na plz plz !!!
Im Lovin it!
Love youu..
Manjari
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey ria....i hope ur still not crying.......cheer up yaar!!!!!.....show mein aisa hota hi rehta hai!!!!

awesome part!!!!!!
totally loved it!!!!!!
loved mayur n sajan scenes........
missing sajan of s1 yaar........
ur made me remember all those days of frdship of sajan!!!!!!
do continue soon!!!!!
n thanx for the pm!!!!!!

luv ya
deepti🤗

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