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Edited by jannat4ever - 14 years ago
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NOW RIDDHIMA IS FULL OF ANGER FIRST D GUY STANDING IN FRONT OF HER KISSED HER WITHOUT HER PERMISSION AND NOW DIS NOT SO GOOD GIRL SHOUTING ON HER.....WHERE AS ARMAANLOST HIS ALL SENSES.......AND JUST STARING AT HER CONTINOUSLY

NA - BOLTI KYU NAHI?????ZUBAN NHI HAI KYA TUMHARE MUH MEIN......AUR TUM JAISI GAVAR KO COLLEGE KE NADAR KISNE AANE DIA.?????

"DATS IT" RIDDHIMA TOLD HERSELF

RI (screamed with full power) - SHUT UPPPPPPPPPPPP





RI (looked at naina nd give her a dirty glare) - tum apna muh chalana band karo I m not ur servent''(naina opened her mouth to say sumthing but RIDDHIMA cut her in b/w) DNT U DARE TO OPEN UR MOUTH AGAIN........i m not interested......tumhe thoda mauka kya dia maine........tum toh shuru hi hogai..........bak bak bak..........aur by d way thapad maine inhe (pointed at armaan ) maara hai...........aur lecture tum de rahi ho..........dnt tell me u r his lawyer?????POOR GUY........😆

(WHERE RIDDHIMA IS GIVING TO NAINA SUM PIECE OF MIND ON THE OTHER HAND SUM R HAPPY WID HER SUDDEND OUT BURST ND SUM R SHOCKED TO OUT OF THEIR WITS......ND ARMAAN IS LOOKING AT HER WITH DAZY EYES


but after hearing her last words he came back to earth )

AR (angry) - OH HOLD ON 😡

RI (annoyed) - OH TOH TUMHE BOLNA ATA H???? I THOUGHT KI TUMHE BOLNA NHI ATA AUR TUMHARI YE GOOD FOR NOTHING UGLY LAWYER TUMHARE SUPPORT MEI LECTURE DE RHI H........😆

(ARMAAN REMINDED HIMSELF ya I m happy by the way she shuting naina's mouth but i HATE D WAY SHE IS TALKING TO ME ND NOT TO FORGET SHE JUST SLAPPED ME MAN)

AR - TUMHE NHI LAGTA TUM LIMIT SE JYADA BOL RAHI HO????

RI - DATS MY POINT MISTER TUMHE NHI LGTA JO TUMNE KIA WO OUT OFF LIMIT THA.....ND I THINK U NEED 2 - 3 MORE SLAPS

(NOW BOTH ARE FACE TO FACE ND FIGHTING LIKE HELL)

AR- WATT?????R U MAD????LISTEN WE WERE JST PLAYING D GAME ND I GOT D DARE ND

RI (cutting him b/w) - now dnt tell me ye behuda dare tumhe tumhari isse so called lawyer ne dia tha???

"ISSE KAISE PTA CHALA"ARMAAN mumbled but coming back to senses

AR - SO WATT

RI (SHOUTED) - SO WATT????? HOW DARE U???? U KISSED ME???? WIDOUT MY PERMISSION

AR (angry) - LISTEN DNT MAKE IT A ISSUE

RI (angry) - EXCUSE ME FOR KISSING SUMONE MAY IS NOT A ISSUE FOR U....BUT IT'S A BIG ISSUE WHEN IT COMES TO ME'.MAY BE U HAVE KISSED THOUSAND OF GIRLS BUT U IDIOT IS D FIRST ONE WHO KISSED ME DAMN IT...😡

AR (furstated) - shut uppppppppppppppp I NEVER KISSED ANYONE BY MISTAKE U R D FIRST GIRL WHOM I KISSED GOT DAMN IT

AS SOON AS ARMAAN COMPLETED HIS SENTENCE BOTH REALIZE WAT THEY HAD JST SAID......... ND ARMAAN RIDDHIMA BOTH LOST IN EACH OTHERS EYES



While riddhima nd armaan were fighting others were looking at their weird fight wid BOTH-R-MAD look nd doing chit chat in their minds bcoz they r hell confused.........

firstly ARMAAN MALLIK KISSED A GIRL

2ND A GIRL SLAPPED ARMAAN MALLIK

3RD THEY R FIGHTING IN VERY ODD STYLE

4TH SUMTIMES DIS GIRL SHOWS PITY ON ARMAAN

5TH SUMTIMES SHE SHOWS HER ANGER ON ARMAAN

6TH SUMTIMES SHE SHUT NAINA'S MOUTH NOT TO FORGET WHICH IS A MIRACLE

7TH SUMTIMES ARMAAN SAW HER WID DREAMY EYES WHICH IS ALSO A MIRACLE


8TH SUMTIMES HE CAME BACK TO EARTH WITH AMGER IN HIS EYES BCOZ OF D SLAP HE GOT.....

9TH NOW THEY ARE SHARING THEIR FIRST KISS EVEN TELLING EACH OTHER DAT U R D ONE WHOM I KISSED

10TH SUMTIMES WHEN SHE NOTICE ARMAAN'S INTENSE GAZE ON HER SHE BLUSHED ND LOWERED HRE GAZE


ND EYERYBODY SCREMING IN THEIR MINDS "WATT D HELL IS GOING ON"

SUNDENLY SID CAME FORWARD FOR HIS DEAR FRND ARMAAN'S RESCUE

BUT ONLY GOD KNOWS HE WILL SAVE HIM OR MAKE D SITUATION WORSE

SI (calmly to riddhima) - listen we r very sorry we know watt jst happened was not rite plz forget abt dat'we r sorry

" THNK GOD YAHA KISI KE PASS TOH MIND HAI " riddhima mumbled but to loud dat all heard her




NA - OH SHUT UP U BI**

AR (but before she could complete her word armaan cutting her b/w shouted in anger) - SHUT UP NAINA.....WATT D HELL IS HAPPENING????WAT KIND OF LANGUAGE YOU R USING????

NOW ITS TIME FOR RIDDHIMA TO BE SHOCKED



RIDDHIMA THOUGHT " HE SUPPORTED ME RATHER THEN HIS ADVOCATE?????I SLAPPED HIM THEN ALSO YA HIS MISTAKE HE KISSED ME BUT WATT I FELT AT DAT TIME WAS?????

BUT A VOICE BROKE HER TRAILS OF THOUGHT

NA - COME ON AMMI U JST RELAX MAIN JANTI HU AISI LADKIO KO

Now again riddhima wants to kill dis so called naina

RI (cutting her b/w) - ha khud jo tum aisi ho toh jaanne mei kafi aasani hoti hogi na.....😡


Now after her heart attacking comment on naina all mouth dropped upto their knees

Nd all turned to a weird laughing voice all knws who it cud be accept riddhima

MU - HA HA HA H H H H HA HA

RA (who didn't liked her disturbance in dis situation said ) - stop muskan

Muskan pushed him to other side nd hugged riddhima tightly.....so tightly dat riddhima felt difficult to breath

Now atul,anjali,holded muskan from hr waist
rahul,ammi holded her wist
sid shipla holded muskan from her shoulders nd all dragged her towards themselves


RIDDHIMA TOOK A LONG BREATH

MU (SHOUTED) - LEAVE ME GUYZ I M NOT GONNA EAT HER. I JUST WNT TO HUG HER SHE DID A GREAT JOB

NOW ALL ARE HELL SHOCKED INCLUDING RIDDHIMA

AN (angry) - MUSKI U THINK SHE DID A GREAT JOB IN INSULTING AMMI???

AR (shocked) - WATTT

AT (calmly ) - MUSKI TUJHE AISA NHI KEHNA CHAHIYE THA

MU (shouted) - OYE CHUP KHOTTE ISSNE JAISE NAINA KI BOLTI BAND KI HAI.......MAIN TOH ISLIYE ITNI KHUSH HU.GADHA

RA (holded muskan's hand) - MUSKI CHAL U NEED A DOCTOR

MU (waning tone) - CHOD MUJHE OTHERWISE U WILL NEED A DOCTOR

Rahul quickly left muskan.......

SHILPA WHO IS HELL CONFUSED DIDN'T UTTER A WORD ND TRYING HER LEVEL BEST TO UNDERSTAND THE SCENE WITH "WATS HAPPENING" LOOK

AR (whispered in shilpa's ear) - dnt try shonna we will explain u later so for now relax

SI - STOP YAR MUSKI

AR - STOP U ALL IDIOTS ND U MUSKI PRAISING HER?????GREAT

MU - oh ammi relax yar nd u both (pointed to armaan nd ridhima) stop fighting like daily soaps husband wife ' I was jst saying dis girl is fantastic true fighter like me HA HA HA H H H H HA

SI (calmly) -plz we are sorry ammi is little mad so forgive him he

AR (irritated) - SHUT UP SID TU MERA DOST HAI YA ISKA???

SI (excited) - AMMI I M HELPING U DUDE

AR (sarcastically) - REALLY ???? CHAL TOH TUNE MERI ITNI HELP KI HAI AB MERI BAARI PAY BACK TIME DUDE

SI (scared) - NOOOOOOO

AR (mischeifly ) - YES 30 MINS ARE OVER DUDE TIME TO SAY THOSE 3 MIRACLE WORDS



SI - I M SORRY

AR - WRONG DUDE TURN UR FACE TO 45 DEGREE ANGLE U WILL GET U KNW WAT U HAVE TO SAY..

SI (turned as ammi said) - shilpa

AR - JOR SE BOL

AT - JAI MATA DI

ALL - WATT???

AT - AREE AMMI NE KAHA JOR SR BOL TOH MAINE BOLA JAI MATA DI......TUMNE KABHI SUNA NHI KYA???????

AR - ATULLLLLLL DNT STRESS UR MIND ND U SID U BETTER SAY D CORRECT WORDS OR I WONT MIND KILLIG AS U HELPED ME A LOT TODAY...

SI (slowly) - I love you

AR (glared at him) - ABBE KHUD KO BOL RAHA HAI KYA ???? winked at him

SI (facing shilpa) - I LOVE YOU

SHILPA BLUSHED 😳 ARMAAN WINKED AT SID ND SID GLARED AT HIM

RIDDHIMA THOUGHT "they all are mad riddhima run from here before they kill you by their stupid acts these all are crazy save me god"


RIDDHIMA TURNED TO LEAVE BUT SUDDENLY SHE REALIZED SOMEONED GRABBED HER ARM ND TURNED HER WITH FULL STRENGHT OFCOURSE HOW CAN SHE FORGET DIS NAINA ND SHE LOST HER BALANCE ND FALL ON ARMAAN WHO WAS JUST IN FRONT OF HER FEW INCHES AWAY ND SOON BOTH HIT D FLOOR RIDDHIMA WAS LYING ON HIM

RIDDHIMA LOST HERSELF IN HIS DEEP BLUE OCEAN EYES ND ARMAAN OHHHH HE EVEN DNT REMEMBER D PAIN HE GOT WHEN HIS BACK HITTED ROUGH FLOOR BCOZ HE WAS DEEPLY ENGROSSED IN PAIR OF ALMOND EYES.......


THEY CAME BACK FROM THEIR LALA LAND BY SID VOICE

SI - U KNOW WAT NAINA U R JUST DISGUSTING (turned to AR) u both are ok na?????

BOTH TOGETHER MUMBLED - YA

Riddhima and armaan stood up on their feets

But before anyone could say something riddhima grabbed her purse from floor nd ran out of canteen on the other hand armaan is just stared at her nd saw her running out of canteen nd felt bad but confused

AR (uncoinciously mumbled) - why I m feeling bad why it feels like she is going away from me ???

(but his bad luck to loud all heard him)

ALL - WATT

AR (realized soon she slapped him) - DUDE SHE JUST SLAPPED U GET A GRIP MAN YA I DID WAS ALSO WRONG BUT SLAP WO BHI ARMAAN MALLIK KO????

ALL (again shouted) - WATT

AR (angry) - WATT GUYZ ???? STOP GIVING ME THOSE SAME EXPRESSIONS ....... I M NOT IN MOOD SHE SLAPPED ME ND I WON'T FORGET DAT

SI (knws better to cool him down) - relax dude mistake toh hamari bhi thi na toh

AR (glared at sid) - nooooooooooo

Now sid give a dirty look to armaan

AR - FINE hamari mistake thi but she slapped me infront of everyone

SI - matlab akele mein marti toh chalta ????? rite 😆

AR - SHUT UP I WNT LEAVE HER SHE HAVE TO PAY FOR DIS SLAP 😡

MU - chill hero lets go yeh angry man looks dena band kar I liked her

AT - ha ammi she was so beautiful

AR - REALLY??????


A MAN COVERING HIS FACE WITH HIS LEFT HAND STANDING BEHIND CANTEEN GATE TALKING ON PHONE

MAN - YA ONE GIRL SLAPPED HIM ya ya dat girl ????? she ran from canteen towards corridor.........yes they are going out.........I think in audi........ok fine I will do it bye..........



RIDDHIMA STANDING IN CORRIDOR BREATHING HEAVLY


TALKING TO HERSELF- OMG WATT WAS DAT ???? WHY I FELT LIKE HE IS THE ONE FOR ME?????WHEN HE KISSSED ME EVEN FOR SOME SECONDS I FORGOT TO BREATH????THIS IS WRONG.......HE IS WRONG HE IS STUPID,IDIOT,GADHA......HE CAN NEVER BE UR SOULMATE GOT IT

She cursed him under her breath

and after a min - I THINK I SHOULD LEAVE FROM HERE BETTER TO GO IN HOSTEL........KUCH AUR ADVENTUROUS HO USSE PEHLE BHAGO RIDDHIMA ......WAISE BHI JITNA PICHLE 30 MIN. MEI TUM BOLI HO UTNA EK WEEK MEI NHI BOLI HOGI

RIDDHIMA LEFT FOR HER HOSTEL 😉

AND RAINBOW GANG WENT IN AUDI

WHERE ALL WERE THINKING ABT TOMMORROW THEIR FIRST DAY OF 2ND SEMESTER ARMAAN WAS THINKING ABT D GIRL HE MET HER EYES HER LIPS HER HAIR AND YA HER SLAP


ARMAAN TALKING TO HIMSELF - U R LOSING IT ARMAAN TU USS LADKI K BAARE ME SOCH RAHA HAI JISNE TUJHE THAPAD MARA?????I THINK I SHOULD GO HOME MY MIND NO NO........MY HEART NEED REST SHE IS NOT D ONE ARMAAN WITH WHOM U CAN FALL IN LOVE.....USKA ATTITUDE DEKHA THA?????NAKHRE.....UFFF.....YA SHE CAN NEVER BE UR SOULMATE GOT IT

"HEY GUYZ I GOING HOME I HV SOME WORK" ARMAAN ANNOUNCED TO OTHERS

ND SOON ALL WENT TO THEIR HOMES FIRST TIME WITHOUT ANY HUNGAMA



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PRECAP :- ARMAAN RIDDHIMA NEXT MEETING

WILL THEY FALL IN LOVE SO SOON???

OR ITS MORE TO COME IN THEIR WAY'.

WILL NAINA DO ANYTHING TO TAKE AWAY ARMAAN FROM RIDDHIMA??????????????




TO KNOW STAY TUNED.............

"RHYTHM OF LOVE IN TRUE SOULMATES"



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Edited by jannat4ever - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey jannat ❤️
u r really really very awesum writer dude 🤗
itz make me feel k im watching it instaed of reading 😉
n im super excited 4r ur next part 😳
Plz update soon ☺️
Loving it a lot 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Dear,
I read all the parts from 1 till 6,
Its just mindblowing!
The way you describe things wow amazing.
And Armaan is so funny hehe.
Love Shilpa's character=)
Finally AR meet but wo bhi aise..
I must say ur a very good writer,
Keep up the gr8 work!
Thanks for PM

Update Soon, PM me next time also=)

LoveSurat.
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey......i m so sorry for not commenting on ur earlier parts....😊 but all the parts were awesome........hehehe😆 😆 ridzi slaped ARMAAN....... waiting for next part what will happen.......OMG wow muski was amazing thanx for pm...continue soon......😍 😍


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