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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mayadika11

awesooooome..

superb...
wonderful........
loved the upd.
thanx for the pm..........


Thanks Pritz di!!🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

fantastic update

great job

sajan first meet was absolutely perfect

mayur first clash was magical

i have fallen head over heels for your story



update soon

love mahima


Thanks so much Mahi!!🤗
will updt today!!:)
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Posted: 15 years ago
tu agla waal updt kar phir dono pe comment kardungi.............
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Sherryforkash

tu agla waal updt kar phir dono pe comment kardungi.............


aarrg! kamini jaa I wont pm u!😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: AttractiveAdya


Thanks so much Mahi!!🤗
will updt today!!:)



wow

i'll be waiting for the update
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima



wow

i'll be waiting for the update


thats sweet! nd I'm writing the prt....it'll b up in a while!
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Posted: 15 years ago

PART 4!!!!


*FLSHBACK CONTINUES*


Nupur was smiling to herself when suddenly Gunjan shouted in her ears "Di main kabse tumse baat kar rahi hoon aur tum pata nahi kahan kho gayyi thi"

While Nupur who was lost came back to the "real world" and immediately answered back "arey nahi gunjan main khoyi nahi thi bass kuch sunai nahi de raha tha"

Gunjan who by now was completely irritated said


" Di! Tumhe kuch sunnai nahi de raha tha''.lagtaa hai kaano main wax hai''''kaha tha naa ki saaf kar den, par nahi ! tum toh sunn ti hi nahi ho!"

While she was saying all this she noticed that Nupur had a very amused smile on her face and kept a finger on her lips and eventually she also smiled and said


"Kya Di tum bhi''' Humesha aisa hi karti ho! Ab yeh sab chodo aur forms toh do" she said and put her hand out.


Nupur just stared at her hand and gave her a sheepish look and said "Ah! Gunjan who toh main laana hi bhul gayyi"


Gunjan was now confused "Di tum phir kya kar rahi thi??? Acha woh sab chodo aur chalo maine Principal sir se baat ki thi who keh rahe the ke do ladke humein''.kya naam th? Haan Samrat aur Mayank college ke Canteen main millenge aur who hum dono ko college dikhayenge" She said grabbing Nupur's hand and taking her to the canteen.


Gunjan and Nupur entered the canteen and saw that it was empty except the Canteen person and then they noticed that there was also a boy there sitting with his back towards them.


They walked forward and Nupur patted on the boys shoulder and asked him


"Arey bhai sahaab aap kissi Samrat aur Mayank ko jaante ho?"


As the boy turned back Gunjan got shocked and quickly turned to the other side while the boy looked amused and said " Hey babes pehli baat main hi Samrat hoon aur secondly please mujhe BHAI ' SAHAAB mat bolo '''..meri image ko suit nahi karta hai, you see!"


While Nupur said "babes! Dekho main Nupur hoon , Nupur Bhushan! Koi babes nahi samjhe aur agar nahi samjhe toh " she shows him a punch and he backs off immediately .

All this while Gunjan who had her back to them started laughing only to be surprised to here another hearty laugh joining hers so she turned around to see who was it, with her Samrat and Nupur


also looked at the direction from which the laughter came.



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As Mayank stepped inside the canteen , he saw three faces looking at him with three different expressions . Samrat 's face showed confusion while the girl next to him had a dreamy look''' he had seen her somewhere , but where? Anyways he moved his gaze from her to another girl who also looked equally amused as him and well she did look kind of the

serious types just like him. Samrat ended his thinking processes and asked him


"Dude what happened? tum itna hass kyun rahe ho? " said Samrat while Mayank simply shrugged and said


"Kuch nahi'''anyways girls hi, I'm Mayank!" looking at them while Nupur smiled and said "main Nup'" her sentence was left incomplete as Mayank said


"I know! You are Nupur , Nupur Bhushan and what about you?" pointing towards Gunjan who know had become the focus.


Samrat turned too and looked at Gunjan and realized it was the same girl who hadn't noticed him this morning! He thought "arrg! Arey yeh toh wohi ladki hai" while Gunjan stood there and told Mayank "Hi, I'm Gunjan and me and my sister have--- " She couldn't complete as Samrat shouted "TUM!!"


Gunjan was completely surprised at his sudden interruption while Nupur and Mayank were now confused.


Samrat continued further "Tum! Yahan ? Arey Mayank tum nahi jaaante issko she dashed into me purposely and then keh rahi thi ke ussne mujhe, Samrat Shergill ko nahi dekha" .


As he said this Mayank gave him a weird look and said "Samrat tum please U.D.A.Y so durr raho'''..tum bhi usske jaise--" He was also not able to complete his sentence as all the three gave him glares . He thought "Samrat ka toh samajh main aata hai par why are these two glaring at me?" Mayank was about to ask this question aloud when Uday entered the Canteen and said "Meri behenaas tum dono aagayyi!!!" Giving a tight hug to both of them. While Mayank's doubts were now solved and he smiled sweetly at the whole family Milan, While Samrat looked shocked and thought "matlab yeh dodo iss Chashmish ka bhai hai! Ab toh isse patta ke rakhna pardega'''.naa jaane kab kaam pardjayye!"


Uday smiled widely and told Samrat and Mayank "Guys! Tum dono jaao ok! Main inn dono serr karwa dunga"


Samrat and Mayank said together "Serr nahi karani bass college dikhaana hai"


After the three went Samrat told Mayank that he was going to play BB , while Mayank went to the Library.


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In the BB court Samrat was playing with Benji and told him about the girl and now Benji was restless to meet her because Samrat who never talked about others usually , kept ranting the whole day about how she never "noticed " him.

At that moment Princy came to and announced " aaj meri beti ki Birthday party''''sab ko anna hi hoga"

All the four had different expressions


Samrat -- Smiling widely

Mayank -- "where am I stuck" look

Gunjan -- uncomfortable

Nupur -- Excitement


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The party was surely something to await!!

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A/N enjoy d part!!:)


and do press d LIKE tab!

Edited by AttractiveAdya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesoooooome.
superb.........
wonderful.....
fab.upd.
loved it.
thanx for the pm.........
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey superb part yar especialy samrat ka tum lolz plz do cont asap.
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Posted: 15 years ago
amazing part...sam...omg😆...luvd it..plz cont soon

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