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Beet

@Beet

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Posted: 14 years ago

#411

Gosh, Meahk this was just beyond adorable 🤗

The whole scene was just beyond cute and precious! Loved it <3

And the title was so apt, The Perfect Sharma Family <3

Beautifully written =D

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Posted: 14 years ago

#412

Mehak this was just ....i have no words.

its been always my wish to see MN as parents because i know they do a Awsome job at it. Nupur seems mother type material and Mayank well he doesn't seem like it but i'm sure when the responsibility is put on his shoulders he'd be great at it. :D

Neha is sooo adorable...and Mayank as a father was aptly januable, there's just no other word i can use. He is just too cute.

The perfect Sharma Family .....Aww i really wish we get to see some sharma family scnes before the end.

Sajjal

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Payal-15

@Payal-15

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Posted: 14 years ago

#413

Cute Mehak..............now all this we may only see through your n others OS............so all those scenes will always be awaited by us😃

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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#414

aww.. mahek..
* the perfect sharma family* ws shooo cute!!
chota tha... but ws really adorable...
i wish.. dey wud hav shown sumthing lyk dis..but.. never mind.. i can always imagine dem thru ur writings!
do keep writin more MN os!

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Ansha

@lovelycactus

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Posted: 14 years ago

#415

dat was soooc ute...

wished that it was shown but it will remain a wish...

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Anjali-K

@Anjali-K

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Posted: 14 years ago

#416

Lovely One shots! Great writing!

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#417

thank u so much guys...now here is a GUNUR OS..i know i always write romantic stories but love is not the only emotion in the world..right sweeties?..

and i know i have done grammatical error in ur PMs..so sorry for that..😳

GUNUR OS:

meeting the angel..

Nupur and gunjan, two sisters, not related by blood, not by religion, not by color,caste or creed, not by the same country, not by the same intrests...but connected by heart.

It was about 3 months before when nupur was randomly searching forum when she came across a beautiful story,a heart wrentching story, story of a girl who lost everything in life..she was completely stunned at the writing skills..she was amazed that how on earth can someone write pain at its utmost level.she left an appreciation comment on the story

a day later she recieved a thank you message from the girl, her name was gunjan,and nupur was surprised when gunjan told her that it was her own story.....her real life story..something pierced nupur's heart,although it was the first time she was interacting with her, but it seemed as if one of her most precious relations was left alone...that night nupur cried..how much she didnt even realize...placing her head down on the keyboard, she cried and cried.

thier age difference was only one year..gunjan being 18 and nupur 19, but nupur felt that gunjan was just like her child,from that day it became their daily routine, everyday they used to talk, sharing their life, their small problems, this interaction was the thing they both looked forward everyday...it was a lovely relation they shared..

nupur at the age of 19 felt the most beautiful emotion of
the world..the emotion of mother hood, the emotion of love for ur child, and gunjan, what to say about her, a girl all alone found support, a sister,a mother...

Life went on and thier relation grew very very strong

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one day nupur asked for gunjan's address..

G..di address kia karna hai?..

N..ku gunjan tujhe mujh pe bhorasa nahi hai?..

G..di kitni baar kaha hai aisi batien mat kiya karo..main naraz ho jaon gi aur kabhi baat nahi karon gi.

N..oh ho.mera baby itna ghusa kar raha hai..ach baba sorry..wasie hi main tumhain kuch gift bhejna chahti hon..plzz.

G..di kia tum formalities..

N..gunjan address de rahi hai ya nahi?..

G..acha g..de rahi hon..

Gunajn gave nupur her adress,..

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Gunjan used to live on rent, working part time and completing her studies through correspondence, her landlady diya lived with her, she was a 26 year old, music teacher in a school.

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One sunday morning, gunjan was sleeping , when diya came to wake her up...

D..gunjan get up..utho..

G...*turning her side*..umm..diya what is it?..itni subha kia hai?..

D..utho..someone has come to meet u..

Gunjan opened her eyes..

G..mujh se milne?..kaun?.

D..u see ur self..i dont know..

She got out of the bed and quickly changed her night suit and came out of her room.

A 5'4'' tall girl, wearing a dark green shalwar suit, hair till her shoulders,duppata flowing from her shoulders, half tied hiar, complexion a bit dusky and a smile on her face...

Gunjan was stunned, it seemed as if she had seen this girl, she had known this girl, it seemed as if everyday she used to talk to her, but she was seeing her face for the first time, she wasn't able to understand the reason for this familarity..but somewhere her heart told her mind..

G...di.?.

The smile on the girl's face widened...she was delighted to see that her baby had recognized her, nupur was delighted, tiny tears formed in her eyes

Nupur was so much in awe of gunajn's apperance, she was beautiful, wearing a blue sundress, hair tied in a pony tail, white wheaty complexion and the innocence in on her face..and her beautiful eyes..

Nupur moved forward and gently placed her hands on her cheeks..

N..mujhe pata tha tum pehchan lo gi..

Gunjan was speechless, never in her life she expected that she would recieve such a surprise, never in her life
she thought that one day the girl she used to talk would come and stand in front of her, gunjan held her hands..

N..main ne kaha tha na., tumhari ankhain is duiya k sab se khobsorat ankhain hain..gunjan ..i am just so speechless baby...u are.... beautiful...

G...hmm..per tum se thori kam.

Tears from gunjan's eyes also started flowing..

and they both hugged...although for the first time, but felt as if they had been knowing each other for so long..

Diya who was standing there seeing all this also had tears in her eyes..

D..uhm..hi nupur..i am diya..

Thye broke from the hug..and nupur shook hands with diya..

N..hi diya..i am sure gunjan would have told u that i am ur fan.i just adore the way u take care of my baby..

D..of course she has...i must tell u that she is very jealous of u being my fan.

G..diya wil u stop it..

D..see i told u..

Nupur and diya broke into a laugh

G..di isey choro..tum yahan ayi kaise..mtlb?..

N..well main yahan clg ki taraf se ayi hon..yahan seminar hai..tu attend karne ayi thi..kal sham ko tha..per raat ko teachers ne bahir niklne nahi diya hotel se....aj hamara sara group wapis ja raha hai..flight main do ghante they... main airprt se chup kar ayi hon..

G..OH..wow..

She hugged her again..

G..acha chalo main tumhain apna kamra dekhti hon..

D..of course and i will arrange tea...

N..thank u..waise gunjan ne mujhe bataya k ap khana bht acha banati ho..

G..di acha nahi..bht bht acha..

Diya smiled and went in the kitchen and nupur and gunjan came inside the room..

N..wow gunjan..beautiful room.simple and so elegant..

G..thank u di..aur ye dekho..tumahre kehne k mutabiq main ne God ko apne kamre main rakh liya hia..

She pointed towards the rack with idols of God..

N..hmm..good..pata hi tujhe dant par jati agr nahi rakhe hotey tu..

G..di betho na..

N..beth rahin hon gunajn.relax..

she sat on the bed and gunjan sat beside her..

G..de wo mera laptop hai jis pe main tum se baat karti hon..

N...hmm..

Nupur was busy admiring the room

G..di..

N..haan?..

G..tumhari goodh main sar rakh lon plz..

Nupur turned her face towards her and she saw in her eyes..a small child, which was so alone..nupur coudlnt help that she could suck all her pains out..

she nodded..and gunjan lied down in her lap..and closed her eyes..nupur gently started brushing her hand over her hair..

N..kaisi ho gunjan?..

G..di roz tu pochti ho?..

N..nahi aj tumhari awaz main suna hai mujhe..batao kaisi ho?..

G..thek hon..aur aj bht ziada thek hon..

N...apni pichli life yaad ati hai..

G..haan..bht ziyada..

N..baby i told u too move on..

G..di.. main ne tum wada kiya hai na..i will try..

She opened her eyes and looked at nupur.

G..tumhari kasam..i will try my best...

Nupur smiled and her tears fell on gunjan's cheek..

G..di tum..

she rasied her hand and wiped her tears..

G..plz ro mat..

N..ok..ab tu tum ne meri kasam khai hai tu i am very much satisfied...acha parhai kaisi ja rahi hai?..

G..achi ja rahi hai..

N..wasie baby kitna time ho gaya hai tumhain apne baloon ki oiling nahi ki?..

Teen mahine..

Diya enerted and gunjan rasied her head and again lied down in nupur's lap..

D..teen mahine ho gaye hain..main tu zabrdasti lagati hon..otherwise ye sunti kahan hai..

N..GUNJAN?...kitne kharab baal lag rahen hain..

G..kia di tum is ki baton main.,.diya stop complaining to di..di tum is pe dehan mat do

N..kaise nahi don..u care about uself..kitne kharb baal lag rahen hain..

G..ok di..

D..aur ye kia,.tantrums shor ho gaye hain tumhare..sedha good main hi lait gayi ho?..

G..so?..meri di hai..main kuch bhi karon..right di..

Nupur softly placed her hand on her haed..

N..of course..

D..oh God..u both are almost of the same age aur asia lagta hai k gujan 8 saal ki bachi aur nupur 80 sala ki dadi ama hai..

N..its not abt the age..its just abt the feeling..

G..exactly..per choro di..isy samajh nahi aye ga..

Diya made a face to gunjan and gunajn also replied her back making a face..

N..acha ab main chalti hon..

Suddenly gunjan sat straight..

G..inti jaldi..

N..gunajn main ne kaha tha na do ghante hain bus..

G..di per..

N..gunjan..plz..no childish behaviour..

Gunjan swolloed a lump in her thorta

G..hmm..ok..

Nupur smiled and all of them stood up and walkd towrds the main exit door..

Nupur hugged guanjn and gunjan 's tears started flowing but she wiped them off...

N..bye baby..

gunjan kissed nupur on her cheek

G..bye di..

Nupru smiled and kissed her forehead..then turned towards diya

N..bye diya.,..

D..bye nupur..thank u so much for coming..

N..thank u so much for taking such good care of my baby..just always stay like this with her..

D..of course she is very special to me also..

Nupur lookwd at gunjan and went away...and the moment the door closed, gunjan's tears started flwoing, diya hugged her,and gunjan cired with tears flowin and diya constantly trying to console her..

nupur on the otherhand hurriedly moved out of the building, sat in the taxi, and her tears were also not stopping..

It was indeed a very specail day in their lives, nupur gunjan both thanked God..

N & G..THANK U GOD...JUST TAKE CARE OF HER..

Edited by -Mehak - 14 years ago

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#418

really nice Mehak... beautifully written.. waiting for ur new FF to begin..

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sriravali

@lovely.ravs

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Posted: 14 years ago

#419

hey it's really nice loved it.....

thanks for the PM

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amrita vasireddy

@AmritaReddy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#420

awww........... such an amazing bonding 😊
its looks such a real
n the emotion n pain in gunjun was soo real
i dont feel like its an imaginary peace of story ......
n nupur she is awesome
yup......ur rite luv story is not only emotion in the world
they r so many others n one of it is sisters bonding
bt frankly speaking mehak u hv a magic at ur fingers
u write every emotion such beautifully that they seem so real 😍
all n all this was awesome os🤗

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