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Posted: 14 years ago
OMGGG! Mehak 🤗
This is such a beautiful story <3
I could feel every emotion, every feeling! It was so sweet and innocent!
And such a different story and concept! It's absolutely heart warming!
Bravo!!! Please do write more such stories!
I loved it <3<3
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Posted: 14 years ago
Mehakkkkk....how mean of you....you did not pm me about this OS😭😭 What if i could have missed reading such a sweet story?? It brought tears to my eyes...it was beautiful...and somehow i feel this story is really close to your heart...more than any other😃😃 right?? 😊

It shows that two people may have the world's distance between them but the distance between their hearts is always what matters😃😃 two ppl may be very different from each other...but they may end up finding the one person who makes a huge difference to their lives😃😃😃😃 makes me wish i had a sister too😃😃

Beautiful Mehak🤗 and please next time PM karna mat bhoolna...thik hai?? even the ArTi OS you wrote, you did not pm me😭😭



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Posted: 14 years ago

Cinderella...whiz whiz...I'm here😆

Sorry it took me so long, Anyway coming to the OS Its beautiful, the sisterly bond you have managed to portray here reminded me of my 3 little devil sisters.

...The affections and motherly feelings of nupur..her fear...and than that one moment where everything stopped and Gunjan saying "di" ...brought nupur back...

Their connection was from the heart...and it is for a lifetime.

Beautiful ....OS...Just Magical like all your writings...

Thank You for sharing.

PS: Amina...I'm your sister na! Don't say you don't have a sister.🤗

Edited by -Sajjal- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
thank u so much guys...🤗

here is a MAYUR OS...and i should tell u all before hand that it is sad..

MAYUR OS

we miss u

You are not with us, even not with ur nupur.
You never thought na k what will happen
to her,
how would she survive?,
where would she go? NO!.
.u just went away, leaving her alone!..


Why MAYANK?..she misses u so much!...she loves u so much!..

But u went...regardless of everything..U LEFT HER!..alone in this world.

U know whenever i talk to her, my heart cries
, i always try to be strong in front of her

but today i have lost my courage,

WHAT IF U WOULD HAVE BEEN ALIVE?...

her life would have been full of life, full of colors, full of love.

I wish i could bring u back..but ALAS!.
.i cant help...i just cant help..
*damn it*


Alright, i think is should recall what i have learnt since childhood
..that LET GO!..
so i guess
i should apply it here also.
.ok so u left her..


OK..God's will..ok..i accept!, but now YOU will have to pray to God to
bring colors back to her life. She has been suffering very much, very very much, too much at such a young age.

u ask God to bring back her LIFE AGAIN..PLZZZZ..
U left her, so now it is ur responsibility.
..u cant just leave her like this crying..


*hmph*..

ok now enough of harsh words...I am sorry i was rude, but i love nupur too, not as much as u do, but she is very special to me also.

i always accept the fact what today nupur is , is all because of you.
.and i really really admire u for this...

THANK YOU MAYANK..THANK YOU..
for
bringing her out the best in her,her smile, her naughtiness,her shyness, her cuteness, her bubbliness..the blush of her
cheeks, the innocence of her eyes, the beauty of her being..
.IT IS ALL BECAUSE OF YOU MAYANK...


although u are not with her...but in nupur,
u have left an epitome of perfection for the rest of
the world..
right dude?..


ok now i have started crying...so i guess i should wrap up..

and i know nupur will kill me for saying this
but i dont care ..
.I LOVE U MAYANK..THANK U FOR LOVING HER.
.THANK
YOU FOR FILLING HER LIFE WITH VIBRANCE..
ALTHOUGH FOR SUCH SMALL TIME..BUT THANK YOU..

THANK U FOR MAKING NUPUR WHAT SHE IS..THANK YOU.
.AND AGAIN I WOULD SAY...
I LOVE YOU..


HAPPY BIRTHDAY...and we miss u..<3
Edited by -Mehak - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
yipeeeeeeeee 1st one to comment

when i started readin i was lyk??????????
dheere dheere ...slowly i understood it
indeed a good 1 didi
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want MJHT 3 with ArTi
Edited by dhano_arti - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh sho sweet and emotional OS mehak.
I am feeling so sad my angel Nupur.
Thanks for Pm and plz write more

Edited by DhanakZ - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow it ws spellbounded
may GOD gave nupur all da happiness n a lyf full of bright colours,love n joy.....
HAPPY BIRTHDAY MAYANK........
Edited by cutiepie12 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank You so much Di ... I don't know how to thank you enough for writing this ... You made me cry but not due to sadness but just due to happiness - I relived everything ... I know I should not write it here but I just cannot help - The past two of your writing pieces have just made me feel so happy that I cannot put it in words ...

The prayers you wanted him to make, your curses for him, your admiration for him, your love for him was all valid ... He was special and made her feel special - he changed her, taught her to live but left her alone to face everything ... Yet I can't stop loving him and I am sure, he would listen to you and would surely be making prayers ... and let me tell you that she can never hate you or kill you for saying that you love him ....

Your love for her is no less than his - there is no comparison in love ... If he made her what she is then your support helps her in remaining like that ... Thank you so much Di for writing this here that to at this time ....


Edited by -jaee- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Mehak.. All I can say is your OS/FF's make me cry.. sometimes its coz of happiness and sometimes it bcoz they are so heart wrenching.. and this was really emotional.
Beautifully written.. and I m waiting for you to start your new FF on MN.. Be fast, Mehak Express...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Cinderella you made all emotional😭 with OS. I could feel the sadness flowing right through me as i read each and every word of yours.

Write Happy OS😳 Pleaseeeee

Sajjal

Edited by -Sajjal- - 14 years ago

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