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ChocoLatte

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Posted: 14 years ago

#221

it was cool..!!bechara mayu phas gaya...plz 2nd part jaldi update kar...cant wait more for it.!!

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samira

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Posted: 14 years ago

#222

lovely OS Mehak thanks 4 d pm

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stuti

@stuti123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#223

mehak ......such a lovely OS but you leftit at this juncture .........making all of us sooooooo very mad with excitement ............ do update soon ......intezaar kab tak hum karegein bhala lol.................

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AWonderfulChaos

@AWonderfulChaos

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Posted: 14 years ago

#224

hey really nice!

awesome os.........y did ya stop????

anyways cont soon!

n thnx for the pm!!

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#225

part 1..PG..29

what am i doing??...(part 2)

N...main kia kar rahi hon?...what am i doing??...

nupur was sitting on the bed, with tears constantly flowing...it seemed as if there were two voices speaking in her mind...

N...main tu bus mazak kar rahi thi...main..

she stood up..

N....stop it nupur!...tum janti ho k tum mazak nai kar rahi...U ARE RUNNING AWAY FROM MAYANK...DELIBERATELY....

again she sat down, she was bitterly crying...

N..tum bhag rahi ho mayank se...ku k..ku k...

she herself was confused, she didnt knew what was the reason...

N...ku k main bhi door rahi hon...is liye mayank ko bhi door rehna chaiye...

her eyes had turned very wild,..

N...kisi ne mujh se pocha bhi nahi k main teen saal kaise door rahi..kisi ne bhi nahi pocha..asiey kaise sab ne soch liya k main normal ho jaon gi..mai bhi insaan hon...

tears again flowed from her eyes...

N..lekin is main mayank ka kia kasoor hai...

Her tears suddenly started flowing with a greater speed....

N..tu mera bhi kia kasoor tha?..mian ku 3 saal aisey haalat main rahi?...

This time she lied down on the bed...the two vioces again speaking inside her...

N...jo bhi dard tum ne sahe hain tum un sab ka badla lena chati ho mayank se...U WANT HIM TO COMPENSATE...

she tighlty closed her eyes...

N...kaisa rishta ho gaya hai...k mujhe mayank k dard se khushi milne lagi hai...

again she sat up..she was very restess , this battle going inside her was killing her...

N...lekin agr mayank ki jaga koi aur hota tu kabhi asiey meri batien nahi manta...wo itna acha hai phir bhi main...

She hid her face in her plams and started crying gain...

N..shiayed itna acha hai isi liye main usey apna her dard de rahi hon...main kia karon...kuch samjh nahi a raha!...

she lied down..

N..mujhe laga tha dhruv chala gaya hai..lekin shiyed wo hamari zindagi se kabhi nahi jaye ga...

Nupur didnt realise when did she went to sleep

Next morning she was very quiet..all this time she had been hiding all these realities from herself but last night she had a confrontation with herself..it had made her very weak...

she ddint talkd to mayank, mayank was extremely normal, as he used to be..

they went to the college...same lectures, same routine, everything was same.

She was pasisng by the staff room when nupur saw mayank looking at her picture in his wallet and gently brushing his fingers on it and then he placed it back...

Nupur ran away from here..every gesture of mayank's sffection was making her sink deeper into the dillema..

At night she was standing by the window,wearing her silk night suit, with stra sleeves, her wet hair by one side.. thinking about what did she want??...the compensation of her pain...but he wasn't happy..mayank's closeness but she wasn't comfortable...what does she want??...the battle was going inside her..she closed her eyes...when..

M....i love u nupur..

She immedeiately opened her eyes..mayank was hugging her from back..his hands firmly around her waist and his head on her shoulder...nupur was dumbfounded..

N..mayank please...tumhain pata hai na main ne jo kaha tha...

M..the punishment is over nupur...time dekho..

She looked at the wall clock and it was above 12..she got very confused...

N...mayank dekho main

maynk picked her up in his arms and nupur was speechless., her pulse was increasing..she was constantly staring at mayank...

he made her lie on the bed..she closed her eyes firmly, and clucthed the bedsheet..she clutched it with a very tight fist..she could feel mayank coming closer to her, the distance between them was reducing, she could feel his breath and his heart beat..she clutched the bedsheet even more tightly, her eyes firmly closed when....

(part 2 ..pg 37)

to be continued...i will update the last part tommorow inshAllah..but girls do tell me what do u think abt nupur's reaction, i always thought that it is a very natural reaction, do tell me how did u like it..plzz...

Edited by mehak03 - 14 years ago

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AWonderfulChaos

@AWonderfulChaos

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Posted: 14 years ago

#226

hey mehak....nice update.....

nupurz disturbed.......i hope she lets mayank know this........n evrythin becumz normal again!

waiting for part 3!

n thnx for the pm!

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komal991

@komal991

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Posted: 14 years ago

#227

its nice mehak!!!

ab aisa na ho k nupur mayank k sath khuch misbehave kerday!!

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Prachi

@preitygal99

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Posted: 14 years ago

#228

Wow Mehak,

This was just amazing update.

The delimma nupur is in, is absolutely normal.(I feel so)

I always thought that CVs will give Nupur recovery track which didnt happen.

I think her reaction is absolutely normal bcoz she was in a living hell for three long years and to expect her to get back to her normal self in few days is not humane at all. Things will take time to get back to normalcy.

Great piece of writing.

Keep writing more.

Ur writings are like a daily dose for me.

Do continue soon.

Prachi

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umaima

@cutiepie12

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Posted: 14 years ago

#229

WHEN WHT???????????????

OH GOD u always do dis creatin suspence n keepin us w8in for a whole day

plzzz update soon cnt even thnk of any other thngbt ur os

u r superb gurl.....luved it

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Mansi bhatia

@-Mansi-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#230

Hey...that was so nice. For a split second..I was shocked seeing her reaction..but its totally true..and I agree with every word. She needs to open up..she needs to speak Mayank..or Gun or Sam about it. She needs to express her emotions.

Thanks for not telling me the suspense last night!

And now again you ended here>?!! Uggh!! Get ready for my PM's again! Cant bear the suspense!!! :P:P