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sjain

@sjain

Trailblazer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#91

shabaash ...wonderful....maza aaya...

now complete it sooonnnnnnnnnnn

dimaag ki batti zara jaldi jalao😆

Edited by sjain - 14 years ago

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@-Bleeeh-

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: baby bubbles

hey rach..just a suggestion..
try n put smthin bout other copules too dis tym..or sm more romantic scenes of AR..or sm mind change of shashank (lol), or dis tym ridz giving surprise to armaan (last tym he gave such a wonderful surprise wen he proposed her n dis tym u have a lovely place already, mahabaleshwar!!) or try shanky padma romance for a change..(if even in d wildest dreams dat man can b romantic, wahaan pe bhi it'll seem k he's threatening her..poor padma..rofl..🤣) or or try gals vs boys--smthin really exciting..or bonfire party n lots of games alongwid..

lol..sorry..m just tryin to give yr mind sm rest..dunno if u ll go more crazy on hearing my crazy ideas..rofl..u can just ignore dem..as such we love watevr u write..let it b a plain non romantic part..😊😊

I like her idea alot!😊

I guess the readers would just love to see Ridz doing something for Armaan like giving him a surprize or something!😳 And even the idea of girls vs boys appeals to me! I'm sure you can use your creativity and then turn this idea into something really special!😃

Just a suggestion though!

Au revoir!

P.S- I'll comment once the part is complete!😊 Will be waiting for it!😃

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Riddhi

@Riddss

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#93

heyyy dear,
nice part
but short one
continue soon
with long part

love
Riddss

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skippy02

@skippy02

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#94

Awesome part so far and cont soon!!

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sweetieangel

@sweetie_angel

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#95

oh my god
i laughed my ass out yaar🤣🤣
AR moments were soo passionate yaar
lol never thought that armaan gets such wild dreams 😳
but hey i didnt receive any pm??😡

🤣

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anjie22

@anjie22

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#96

Hey whn will u update the whole part????

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crimson_10

@crimson_10

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#97

I caught up with your fic recently and it's simply awesome. Loved it to bits and I must say that you are a fab writer. Keep up the great work!

Cheers,

Aashi

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riddhan

@riddhan

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#98

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww the incomplete update was awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 i loved it 😃

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sania

@saniashzadi

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#99

hey..

part is sooooooooooo cute..wish nw anjali dnt create much fuss.....loved dis part..

r u goin t update today??

waitng fr da full part

love

sania

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Coffee

@coffee_beans

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: angelina_angel
oh my god
i laughed my ass out yaar🤣🤣
AR moments were soo passionate yaar
lol never thought that armaan gets such wild dreams 😳
but hey i didnt receive any pm??😡

🤣

beta mithoo ! ! title aankhen khol kar dekh..!! ..the part is incomplete right now toh woh pm kyun karegi abhi ? 😡😆 ...*mithoo i asked u to place ur brain back from the freezer !! 😡🤣*

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