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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi i liked your ff plssssssssssss update sooooooooooooooooon as u have not updated since long time plsssssssssssss.
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey nice ff cant wait for the next update....................
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Posted: 14 years ago
Mujhe maaf kiya:(Im sorry long time i know but i was trying to get my other ff caught up to this one:)

Is Pal Mein hoon

He stood rooted in his place,as he took in the sight of a beauty standing merely inches away from him.She looked gorgeous,clad in a red and black saree that hugged her features.His breathe got caught in his throat,his mouth drying up.Maan's grandmother noticed the change in him,nudging him she smiled before signaling him to bring Geet to the stage.Slowly,he moved towards her,ignoring the crowd of girls who were drooling over him.He passed by the men,failing to acknowledge the envy they had in their eyes for him.Today only one person mattered.HER.His Geet.
She looked nervous,she held on to Maya's hand as if there would be no tomorrow.Why was she so nervous?She took the time to look around,the Mansion was full.Maan had made sure it was a Grand affair.Her legs started to give in,as she watched Maan make his way towards her.He was wearing a sherwani,looking absolutely amazing.Geet looked for Arjun,she wanted to hold her brother because today her heart would give up on her.He came in front of her,smiling at her he extended his hands for her to take.She was about to give him her hand,when he dropped to the ground and took priya in his hands.He looked up winking at Geet,before picking up Priya and offering the free hand to her.Upon taking his hands,it suddenly became dark and a single spotlight came on.The spotlight followed the couple as the went up to the stage.Walking up to their family,the couple took dadi maa's blessing before stand on either side of her.

The crowd stood their in awe,admiring the beautiful family.The ring ceremony was about to begin,Maan had been given the ring he was going to put on Geet's finger.Priya had come to hand over the ring Geet would put on Maan's finger.Maan watched as Dadi said something to Geet and she laughed.Although Maan knew that her laugh was not real,it was more of a nervous laugh.He understood.

"Wasaiy bhai.....you can still run away you know....Yeh shaadi apke bass ka kaam nahi.Aur Geet bhabi ne apko kacha chaba jana hai shaadi ke baad."Vicky said laughing at his brother who was a wreck.

"Chill bro."Dev said offering a comforting hand.

"Haan yaar,Geet tumein kush rakhe gi"Mayank added.

"Aur tum meri behn ko kush rakhna"Arjun said.

"Tum loog chup ho jao!Wait..Just wait vicky tumhari shaadi ke din tumein meine pagal ker deina hai!"Maan said,as the guys let out a loud laugh.

Finally,the ring ceremony began.The crowd clapped as both the rings were exchanged.The night had finally begun,and the music had people dancing.Everyone was now on the dance floor dancing to random songs.Maan sat himself down beside Geet on the stage.He watched Geet with a worried look.She looked lost.He looked at priya who was sitting beside Geet playing with her bangles.Smiling he cleared his throat and looked at a confused priya.

"Priya,can I talk to mommy alone?"He asked,priya looked up and nodded before running off to find her friends.

"You know,main itna bhi bura nahi hoon..... jo tumhare chehre per bara(12) baje hue hain."Maan said teasing her,but he got no witty reply.

"Geet honey,what's bothering you?"Maan asked taking her hand in his...

"you can tell me anything babes."he said looking at her.

"Maan I am not good for yo.Dekho na you go through so much trouble because of me."This angered Maan,how could she even think like that.

"Don't you dare think like that,you don't see your self very clearly.In fact I think your blinded by lies....Words can never to justice to describe what I feel for you.Yo make my life worth living Geet.Main tanha tha,magar tumhare ane se na janey kitni kushiyan mujhe mili hain.Mere subah ki roshni ho tum.Mer dil ki darkhan,mere ankhon ki chamak.TUm mere liye eik angel ho.Your my angel.So don't say that."maan said looking at geet who was on the verge of tears.

"That was beautiful Maan"Geet said getting out of her sit and hugging him"The crowd watched secretly,as the couple shared the intimate moment.

"sigh"Maya said.

"Kiya"Mayank asked.

"theyre soooo dreamy na!"Maya said clasping her hands together.

"Haan."Arjun said

"they are-"Vicky said before Dadi and dev finsihed the sentece for him.

"Perfect."

"aaj se mera sab juch tumhare naam Geet"Maan said.

"Aaj se meri har baath tumse shoro hogi"Geet said.

"Aur tum pai Katam hogi!"

"Aaj se har paal tumhara saath nibhone gi."

"Aj se har pal tumko chahon ga"Maan wisphered.

"Mere naina,aaj se sirf tumein hi doonde ge"

"Aur meri sansein sirf tumhare naam se chalein gi."

"Aaj se mer wajood ka hisa ho tum."

"Mere dil main rehne wali eik pari ho tum"

"Mere jeene ki waja"

"Mere chehre ki muskhurahat.

"Mere Mann ki Geet."Maan said before placing a kiss on her head and hugging her.

"Ms Handa,may I have this dance."Maan said extending his hands.

" I can't dance"She said

"Its all about who is leading"Maan said as they made their way to the dance floor.

The Dj,put on a slowly romantic song for both the couple.Geet rested her head on his chest as the slowly swayed to the music.

Is Pal mein hoon ya tum bhi ho
Ya dono hoke bhi na hain
Kyun ho kya ho
Ho bhi ki na ho
Ya kehna sunna mana hain

aa aAa aaAa

da da daa

Pa dha ni sa re gaaa aa a
Dha ni dha
Pa daa pa
ma pa ma
Ga ma ga re

da na da na da naa

Tumhein dekhke yaad aai
wohi bishri kahani
Deewane ka kissa
Ya phir ek deewani

Dono sang sang rehte har dum
Esha yeh mene suna hai

[Is Pal mein hoon ya tum bhi ho
Ya dono hoke bhi na hain
Kyun ho kya ho
Ho bhi ki na ho
Ya kehna sunna mana hain

Ishq hua

Tum bata do yaad koi
Kya purani leke aau
Ya nishani deti jau
YA kahani leke jau
Ya ki maan chod do jaye
Yeh jata ,jata jahan hai

[Is Pal mein hoon ya tum bhi ho
Ya dono hoke bhi na hain
Kyun ho kya ho
Ho bhi ki na ho
Ya kehna sunna mana hain]2

Is pal Mein hoon

"Geet I love you."

"Maan I love you too."

That night,everyone slept in their beds with a smile on their faces.The engagement had turned out to be magical,and why wouldn't it be.After all Maan singh Khurana was finally engaged,to a girl who he loved more then anything.

Noori93 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Pm tommrw guys...i will do some tonight....
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome one yaar..so so superb
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awe such a cute update and awe the engagement went nicely and love the promises they made it was such a romantic moment anyways great update and can't wait to read more 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
hiiiii
awsome update
loved it
loved vicky teasing maan
maaneet were so cute
da enangement was perfect
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
Hinal.94 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow the engagement was really nice
just want thm to get married soon yaar
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Posted: 14 years ago
my fave update
.Main tanha tha,magar tumhare ane se na janey kitni kushiyan mujhe mili hain.Mere subah ki roshni ho tum.Mer dil ki darkhan,mere ankhon ki chamak. love teh lines swoon :)
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pkus the choice of song superb
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Posted: 14 years ago
awwiiieee thank you everyone<3 U guys are so niceee with the comments....PLUS Did you notice that in todays episode even Geet was all sad hehe.....I love them

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