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Posted: 14 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: macho_muffin

heyyy my muffin lover,

okay now u have 2 reasons to say ahhh cuz first, its a new thread and second cuz u gave an awesome first update on ur new thread.....so say AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!....umm, lets go with chocolate cheesecake this time!!😆
On a more serious note, CONGRATS for the new thread!!!🥳🥳.....hope there r a million more in the future cuz u deserve them all!!!😃
Now, moving on to the update......*haye* ur sooo gonna gimme diabetes, seriously.....these maaneet scenes r just 😍....need i mention i loveed maan's way of waking up geet?😉....he's just perfect!!!...he knows when to be serious, romantic and naught but the only thing he can't do is stop giving us dhak dhaks!!!😆......but my fav line was when geet says she has all rights on him.....though i have to admit i was jealous cuz i wish i could have said that to MSK....*pouts*....but still, that line was justt soo cute and i love it when geet exerts her rights on maan cuz it really shows how far their relationship has progressed....and geet too, from her past!!!....and omgg aaron, i feel ur pain dude!!....when i was little, i also liked to be carried around....even now i wudn't mind, but am kinda big now!!😆....omggg i keep on loving sanjana more and more everyday....she's sooo cute and her teasing maan is always hilarious!!😆.....aww geet doesn't want to get anything cuz all she needs is maan....i lovedd that line too!!....that is our geet, always happy with what she has and never asks for more!!!...and this nature of hers is what makes me like geet even more!!!
omggg so before i forget, i was watching yesterday's episode and i kept on remembering u the whole time!!....cuz of maan's water dialogue and there was something else too that i can't remember ritee now....see, college messed up my systems😆....but what i wanna say is that this shows how talented you are and how awesome ur ff is cuz u picked up on these symbols and presented them soo beautifully in ur ff and now the show is following ur way!!😆.....so awesome update and omgg u would need a week to make it long? nah, i ain't that crazy dude....i can't wait that long😭 so u better find some other way!!! lovee youuu❤️ (and ofcourse, when u say this back, u always lovee the muffins more than me *pouts*)



haillaaaaaaaaaaa here comes the muffin .... i was feeling hungry too... so here we go.... AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH 😆

hey, hold on, its a chocolate chesscake this time......!!!!!!!!!!
😆 nice............ *yummy yummy,, in my tummy.......* lol.... i've become a poet becuase of the excess sweetness in ur comments and ur muffins...!!!!!! 😛
😛
awwww ruchi , i love you more..... and next the muffin....!!!! and this is final...!!! love ur comments too....!!!!!!

hmmmm, so u too join the jealousy league haaan??? well, there are a lot of ppl here, u told me the exact same thing about the line geet said...!!!!! 😆😆😆😆😆😆

and ur last para, took my feet above the ground...!!! i feel like i'm flying.... ruchi's comments have taken me on cloud on....!!!! awwwww, my cute little muffin, praised me so much that i feel so happy and honored...!!!! thanks sweets...!!!! i knida found the symbolism too, in that fountain scene, when he says the whole water dialogues, but my muffin is the only one, who pointed it out.. so say AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH , u get a molten chocolate lava cake for this.,...!!!! 😛

I LOVE YOU, more than the muffins... anytime...!!!!!!!!!! 🤗
🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗



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Posted: 14 years ago
#92
love update....kitne late karthi ho aajkal...
loved maan's maughty pan & his care for arron...
daadi's trip to shimal..umm!!! intresting...
precap😲😲😲😲😳😳😳😉😉😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#93
hi di

plz jaldi se us N ke T ko bhagao
great part
plz continue soon
eagerly waiting for the next part

love
Nidhi
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Posted: 14 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: uzmakhan

Soumyaaa!! main finally aagai!!!🤗 i was waiting and finally someone found the time to come...!!!!! 😆😆😆😆😆

OKies soumya first of all dheeer saara congos fer the new thread!!! 🥳🥳
kya khila rahee ho??? molten lava cake???😉😛😛 tumhare liye jaan bhi haasir, maang ke tuo dekho, uzmaaaaaa....!!!!! 🤣
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
soumya guess wat wat wat?!! maine part 77 tak parh liya!!hayeeee....me doing bhagra...!!! oh balle balle... meri snail, rabbit ban gayi.... celebration ki baath hai...... party ho jaaye...... oyeeee.... *brij style*!!!!! 😉😉😉😉😉😉
wooohooo main rabbit banh gaye---😆
acha so here are short updates till part 77---
78 i will read tomorrow and give a lambha chorha one, thek hai? your wish is my command jaaani....!!!alright, melodrama kuch zyaaaada ho gaya...!!! haina???
Part 72: and oh my---how did maan control himself durin the sprayin session? 😍😍Daym this gurl is getting x-rateded by the minute!👏 our influence uzmaaaa, bechari HP se aane ke baad itni innocent thi, ab dekho.. !!!!
fav dialgoues:
"Geet, don't try so hard, I might melt. I do not want to", he said.
"Maan!" she said seductively. Maan looked at her noticing the change in her tone. He hissed, "GEEt!"

Part 73:

soumyaa!! OMG!!*faints*😍
*rushed to MMI's emergency ward*
Waow waow waow!!!! This waz simply beautiful soumya!!😍 By far my favouritist update!!!😍
Excellent!! Very very well done!! 👏👏👏I cudnt picturise anything more perfect then this!!😍 Ufff'the proposal really tuk my breathe away😍---I haf lost counts of how many times I haf read this!!! *reads it agen*
My God---soumya'u shud sirsli start writin novels!!⭐️ Like book form main!! Main pehli customer hongi!! Aur haan mujhe autographed book chahyay!!😉😆 Buh on a serious note, outstandin job!!! 👍🏼
"Geet, will you spend the rest of your life with me?"
"Yes, I'm ready to signature my entire life in your name, Mr. Maan Singh Khurana".

Daym these dialogues!!!😍😍😍 My God---how I wished Cvz read this!!! Beach main---beech paani main😆'on his knees😍---ahhhhh!!!
*faints*
dheeerr saara jhappiyaz and paapiyaz fer this part yaar!!🤗 Never read aur heard issay zyada beautiful proposal!!😍 Too too too gud😍! thanks a ton uzmaaaa, u're comments leave me speechless and i have nothing more to say, than this.....
🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Part 74: soumyaa---tum kitni naughty ho!!! 😲😲😲Agar dialogues main itni naughtiness hai toh tumhare dimag main kya kya chalta hai!!🤪🤣 This update waz shot laykin uff---toooo sexy!!!😉 oye... main seedhi saadhi innocent baccchi hoon..... tumhe nahi pata kya????
oyeee---😲shish kebab---I am so glad fer once kay main peechay hoon!👏 Tumne aisa point perh laaker rokh diya'I wonder sabne kaisay control kiya hoga!!😆 control kiya??? ghali de rahe the mujhe/... threaten kar rahe the, ki thaaney thod denge, agar update nahi kiya..bolo,... bas tumhare wajah se maine update late kiya tha...!!!

Part 76:

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh-----maan singh khurana ko disturb kernay perh itna pleasure milta hai---hayee😍----I waz getting chills after that ahem ahem love marks bit☺️---shish----howww yummmy'☺️.........ahem ahem...!!!! kya hasne ki zaroorat nahi hai... gala kharaab hai...!!! kash main geet ki jagah hoti....... yahi soch rahe ho na tum???? naughty girl.. stop blushing ab..!!!

And OMG---I jus loved it jab maan ki ankhein say sumthin else-buh he does sumthin else!☺️ The bath robe scene waz adorable😍😍😍'.yah yah---I noe geet left the straps untied purposely!! 🤪Werna how cum shez alwayz careless at the right tym?😉😆 she 's an opportunist...!! does the right mistakes at the perfectly right time for maan to correct them in his own style...!!!! hayeeeee... ab koi maan jaisa ho, tuo ,,, i would not regret the mistakes and carelessness...1!!

Part 77:

this part waz soo cutee!!👏⭐️ I thought the guests wud be annoying🤪 buh I completely adored their stay!! Loved the way they all were pullin maan's leg!!😆

And awww<3 fer aron and geet!!!😳😳😳 Aik he din main itnay close hogaye---gosh geet's child is gonna be one spoilt baby!!!😉 hello, maan is gonna spoil the kid more..read on... u;ll know..!!!!


lmao m sure uppar maine sirf "i love this...i love that" likha hoga---
toh to summarize it all----"i loved it all"
aik bhi part abh tak aisa nahi aaya--wher i evn thought kay main bore hongi!!
u haf sketched everythin perfectly and beautifully!!
its simply fantastic--
chalo abh tum mujhe jaldi jaldi shabash doh rabbit banney kay liye!!😆
luv u duniye ki population bharke!!!🤣
muazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz!!!
kabse hug nahi diya na---yay loh dheer saaray---🤗
🤗🤗🤗



tumharo duniye ki population bahrke pyaar sambhal ne mein badi dikkat ho rahi hai....!!! isiliye, i'll give half the population pyaaar to u...!!!!!! 🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
#95
wooooooooooooooooooooow loved da update
do continue
cant wait to read da nxt update
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#96
loved ur update👏
please add me to ur PM list

love
nandu
Edited by nan_10 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#97
awesome update... yaar.. loved it...
update soon..........
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Posted: 14 years ago
#98
Hey Soumya,

Congrats for 4th thread...sorry I'm late!

Part 77 was good...Geet got along w/Maan's friends.

Keep it up!

-Sona
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Posted: 14 years ago
#99
superb!...
really love that maan is attached to aaron soo much in such a short period!....
aaron is such a cutie pie!.....
love dadi's plan!....NT will surely trap in her plan!....
love the ending!....but u ended at a wrong time!...
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Nice n lovly update somaya,

waitng 4 next update hope u will update soon yaar
maan palying game with geet great😳😳😳😳
thanks for pm
love u😳😳

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