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Posted: 14 years ago
wonderful update pls cont soonnnnnnnnnn
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i really love the name dua for maneet
daughter.the child is a god gift for the
and so no less then a dua.vey apt name
beautiful update
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part. loved it.
update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
Dua .....nice name
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Posted: 14 years ago
Dua was a awesome name
Maan was happy thanks for the wicked ff please
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Posted: 14 years ago

thnk naddiya 4 the PM ... loved all the updates ... read the last part too ... it was nice ...

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Posted: 14 years ago
PArt 30
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AUA1vWCcWEE[/YOUTUBE]

driving back home
Geet: you are totally unbelievable
Maan: smiled .. should i tell you the truth? whisper
Geet::yes
Maan: remember the day you told me paused ...
Geet: yes
Maan: that day i asked dr ...smiled
Geet: you cheat
Maan: karna parta ha ...
Geet: i was shocked how you bet
Maan:smiled.. let me drop yo at home then i will go for a Meeting
Geet: looked out side Taj Mahal
Maan: would you like to see it?
Geet: yes
Maan: ok to night we will come here promise
Geet: smiled "what kind of meet do you have with Adi?"
Maan: i am building KC office here
Geet: but
Maan:"Geet i don't want to face Dev for rest of my life , if he will come in front of me surly i will kill him, so it is better we stay away from them..."
Geet: but Dadi
Maan: dadi can stay any where ,with us or with him.
Geet: looked at him he was driving.
Maan: you go up i will talk to Adi & come
Geet: ok..was about to walk out
Maan: you are missing some thing Geet
Geet: smiled later
Maan: he hugged her "see you"
Geet: My Pagal khurana... she walked to the lift.. it was not coming she used stairs ... as she reached Meera floor she saw alot of flowers at her door step , she looked around

Jay: hi
Geet:hi
Jay: do you want some? offer her flowers
Geet: no thanks ,by the way who are you?
Jay : i am her bechar husband
Geet: Dr Meera's
Jay oh you know her
Geet: yes i am her cousin's wife
Jay: cousin who?
Geet: i am Mrs Maan....
Jay: shocked
Geet received call.."excuse me "
Jaiy sure bit shocked
Geet: yes i safely reached you don't worry...she said to Maan & cut call
Jay : you live here?
Geet: yes next floor , you come up stairs she will come in evening.
Jay: thx followed Geet
Geet: please sit as he enter home
Jay: can you help me?
Geet: sure
Jay: actually Meera is angry from me, she had asked for divorce .
Geet: shocked but why?
Jay actually i was very busy in business , didnt gave her proper time. or paused
Geet: or what?
Jay: family
Geet: why you dont take her parents help
Jay: i asked her sis samreen but she said help your self
Geet: how i help you?
Jay please aik meeting arrange karwa da
Geet: but if she will see so many flowers at her door she will for sure get more angry..
Jay: i will pick it up... will you help me?
Geet: yes but let me think first...
Jay: let me pick the flowers he ran out ..
Geet: what to do ? she called Maan
Maan: any problem
Geet: Jai is here he want's our help should we...
Maan: yes we should help them..
Geet: i called you to ask this .
Maan: ok aur kuch
Geet: no take care as she saw Jai coming in with flowers
Jay: can i keep here?
Geet: yes sure..
Jay: what are your plans to help me?
Geet: you just say sorry to her she will surly forgive you..
Jay: she will not i tried
Geet: she will have faith in your self & your love , gave him tea
Jay: thx you are very different for Samreen.
Geet: please don't ..
Jay: sorry
Dadi: entered ..
Jay : hi aunty
Dadi: what are you doing here?
Geet: he wants our help..
Dadi: "so you are again trying your luck"
Jay: "last time "
Dadi: these both sisters are too zaadi
Jay: dadi it was my mistake too, please you help us
Geet: smiled at him
Dadi: beta i am going back i have to sort few more things
Geet: "why are you going back?"shocked are you angry from me
Jay :looked at them .
Dadi: beta i am just happy that you & Maan are settle,
Geet: but dadi you yesterday ...
Dadi: beta abhi kuch logo ko theek karna ha
Geet: who?
Dadi: dev & nt
Geet: hug dadi "are you angry from me?"
Dadi: nai beta,
Jay: "hello are you guys planning to cry?"
Dadi: you do such thing that made Meera angry.
Jay: "i hate woman crying"
Maan"who is crying?" as he enter he check Dadi & Geet face
Jay: I in time stop them...
Maan: "uff crying ladies "
Geet: Maan
Maan: shhhh ... she will kick us out
Dadi: smiled
Geet: dadi is going back
Maan: why?shocked
Dadi: i will come again beta
Maan: but why dadi?
Dadi: beta you both should stay alone understand each other , i will visit you both off & on
Maan: are you still angry ?
Dadi: why i should be angry? i was just testing you , how much you love & support Geet.., i just wanted my grand Grand child should be healthy ...nothing else..hug both

Jay: oh this story is having an happy ending . i wish i too have such story.
Maan: had a laughter .. "don't worry you will too have "
Dadi: Maan look after her
Maan: i will dadi
Dadi:Geet call me when ever you want me
Geet: sure..
Dadi: Maan drop me to airport
Jay : Dadi i will drop you ..he said before Maan could reply.
Dadi: thx beta ...
Maan: dadi
Dadi:: Hug both .."take care see you both soon with Dua Maan Singh Khurana"
Geet: blushed
Maan: sure
Dadi: you will bring Dua to Delhi
Geet: squeezed his hand.. with eyes asked him to say yes
Maan: sure Dadi..
Dadi: smiled Whisper in Geet ears "sure you will change him"
Geet: smiled..
both see off Dadi
Maan: tell me what dadi was saying grab her ..from her waist
Geet: she was saying keep an eye on him , if he do some mischief call me at once.
Maan: abhi bata hoon
Geet: let me call dadi , she is still in city.
Maan: hug her more tight.
Geet: how to reunite Meera & Jay?
Maan: it is your head ache.. started his mischief
Geet: Maan.
Maan: yes dua mama.
Geet: i will beat you.
Maan: had a laughter.
Geet: tell me
Maan : lets take her with us in evening , that place has some magical effect. hope she realized.
Geet: great idea , lets call Jay too there
Maan ok..
Geet: Maan
Maan: didn't listen her carried on with his mischief ..
Geet: Dadi....
Maan: looked out side window "see her plane going wave it"
Geet: you...hug him back
Maan: ask her to come with us
Geet: sure i will..
Maan: what for lunch ?
Geet: pyar ha , khana ha
Maan: my magic he place pizza at table
Geet: I love you..
Maan: didnt let her go..I love you too

At Delhi
nt: dev i don't want to die
Dev: pray seek forgiveness who all you have hurt..
nt: give me veerji number i will call him
Dadi : enter "what happen beta"
DEv: thank God dadi you are back .
nt: dadi ask dr what is wrong with me?
Dadi: dev did you asked?
Dev: dadi they are not telling
nt: dadi hum ko maaf kar da , please i don't want to die , please
Dadi: chalo maaf kia
nt: what? shocked
dev: open his mouth
Dadi: promise with me you both will stay together
both in chorus yes we will
Dadi: you will not hurt Maan & Geet
both we will not
Dadi: then lets go home you are totally fine
Dev: but dr
Dadi: i asked him pull their ears to make you realized how important life is
nt: hug dadi "i am sorry for every thing"
Dadi: pull dev too in her hug...

At Agra
Maan: Meera my wife is ready why are you so slow
Meera: your wife ...pasued
Maan: uff you are getting ready as if wahan per koi hoga
Geet: kon Maan both sitting in Meera lounge
Maan: koi
Meera: i & geet are going on date with you ..
Maan: ok ok ... shall we ladies offer them his arm
both grab it.
Maan: how lucky i am ?
Geet: Maan
Maan: smiled ...
Meera: you are just like Jay
Maan: cough "who"
Maan: ouch , maara
Meera: smiled good Geet
Maan: i am taking you both for outing & you .... made them sit
Geet: acha sorry kuchi kuchi pull his cheeks
Maan: Meera ha Geet
Geet: so what?
Meera: i have closed my eyes you both carry on.
Maan: had i laughter...started car..
Geet: what i awesome weather?everyone should be with their loved one right Meera.
Meera: hmmm
Maan: my wife is very romantic..
Geet: less than you
they reached....
Maan: lets go ladies
Geet: everyone will think you are on honey moon with 2 wives
Maan: how lucky i am
Meera: i am not holding your arm
Maan: do you want someone else arm
Geet: wow look at that a shooting star...Meera make a wish closed her eyes
Meera: you make Geet:
Geet: i made once & got what i wanted... hold his arm more tight
Meera: silently prayed....
Maan: this place has a magical effect, no one can stop loving their love one
Geet:so true






both looked at each other in water Maan smiled

Maan: meera whats wrong with you ?as they saw her lost
Meera:nothing
Geet: really the he use to love his wife see what a beautiful gift?
Maan: by the way i did some what same...
Geet: oh my Emperor
Meera: had a smile
Maan: spotted Jay"Geet come with me lets have a picture here."
Geet: sure ...they asked the camera man
He took their few pics
Geet: Meera you too come .. pull her
Meera: no
Camera Man: i can wait for her husband
Meera: he will not come
Jay : from behind if he come will you have pictures with him
Meera: looked around Jay waved from Maan side
Maan: Meera chalo maaf kar do see he is sorry
Meera: how you know:
Geet: placed her hand on Maan mouth he K*..."uff babji yeh bhi na"he is trying to say i as this place is symbol of eternal love, he met you here means he love you alot..
Meera: looked at Jay who was holding his ears
Jay: if you ask me i can do sit ups here
Meera: smiled... theek ha but last chance
Maan: Geet: maaf kar diya hurray picked her up
Geet: she forgive her why you are jumping?
Maan: if it happen with us in future
Geet: never...wrap arm around his neck
Hum na honge juda Hum na honge juda
Fasley ab kabhi na honge darmiyaan
mere ho tum ho na
mujh mein ghum tum ho naa
Rah mein jo main gir padrun
Badrh kar tum thaam lenaa

by ksg-kash-kajen thx dear
do listen it by

they both looked back they were hugging each other... looking at Taj Mahal.... they walked out and lived happily ever after



Few pictures from their album,






thanks everyone for reading , those who were in touch with me by comments & their Pm's & those who were just a silent readers i hope this story will stay in your mind & heart for sometime, i loved writing it.it is very hard to finish something.
hope you all enjoyed it.
your's
writer

Eid Mubarak to you all
Edited by naddiya26 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey nad ... u really did an awesome job yaar ...keep it up ... & plz come up with a new story line ... thnks 4 all the pm's u sent without fail ...take care ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
really cute adorable.. everything... don't know how to put it to wwords!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome update yaar....but am sad that u finishes it soon..... very nice ending ..especially the photo touch was too too good .....loved it ...dont forget to post the other update ffs..

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