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Posted: 14 years ago

awesome update!!!

awww maan wants a daughter!!!
and dadi only wants a grandson😡😲...
i really hate this type of people😡😡....
and it's sad that we sill have a lot of ppl who think like this...
btw now i m really happy that MaaNeet didnt go back to the mansion!!
this dadi deserves to stay alone if she doesnt change her thinking😡...
cant wait for the next part!!!
pls cont.soon and thanks for the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
next update will be here
http://naddiya26.blogspot.com/


i will cont my FF's at the address above if i have readers
do tell me ...
i had enough over here
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Posted: 14 years ago
plz pm me and i hope they have twins :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi,
The upate was great,
loved the way Maan taking care of Geet,
Last part was shocking,
Son wala, oh Daadimaa toh Balika waali Daddisaa nikli,
Well, I know u can sort this problem out too,
Love
Lakshmi
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Posted: 14 years ago

Maaneet fan fiction: FF love hamesha part 29


up dated will add here in a while
hi dear readers sorry for delay...me & my crazy problems ....thx for your support as without that i am nothing.


Maan: we will have Dua Maan Singh khurana bet
Geet: choked as he said ...
Meera: how you are that sure?
Maan: My heart... placed his hand on his heart
Dadi: yeh bilkul pagal hogya ha
Maan: looked at dadi pat Geet back
Geet: aap bhi na
Maan:kya mein bhi na...
Geet: Crazy... walked to Meera
Maan smiled

Dadi: if we will have a daughter i will be embarrassed
Maan : you are a lady why you should be embarrassed ?
Dadi: but your .. paused
Maan: bus Dadi.. i never thought you have think of 18th century
Dadi: Maan
Maan: meri Dua ... said loud & walked to his room
Dadi: whats wrong with him?
Meera: that what i was saying to you ? he is not that Maan any more ..
Geet: blushed as she knew he is changed because of her.. she finished her breakfast walk to room Maan was working on his laptop
Maan: did you had breakfast?
Geet : ha
Maan: Looked at her "why you are down" hold her hand
Geet: what dadi will think i have changed you?
Maan: any doubt .. pull her
Geet: you & your arguments ... ufff kahan mein ..paused
Maan: what? bolo bolo
Geet:"kuch nai" got up
Maan:smiled..
Geet: "lets go"
Maan: "yes " both walk out
Meera:Ready
Geet: yes
Dadi: where are you going?
Maan: suspense khatam karna...
Dadi: "what do you mean?"
Maan: " DUA Or.."
Dadi: ultrasound
Maan: yes that day DR asked me but ... paused as every thing changed after that...
Dadi: "you bet if i win then"
Maan: thinking
Geet: who was sitting & listening"please whats wrong with you?"
Maan: i will win as My heart say...
Dadi: if i win you will listen what i will say?
Maan: looked at her... "Dua,Dua ,Dua"
Dadi: say yes or no
Maan: Hug dadi"trust me Dua ha"
Geet: uff stop it is is my home no fighting here...
Maan: placed his finger on his lips...
Dadi: Maan.. if i win you will listen me...
Maan: Dua dadi Dua Maan kia Dua
Meera had a laughter
Geet: uff babaji twins ho dadi pota dono happy ... chalo Meera let them fight...
Maan: oh Geet , i didnot look for twin's bedroom interior
( i lost those pictures this is lounge..........Dadi room)


Geet:Maan chup
Maan: jee Mrs Geet Maan Singh Khurana
Geet: Meera please check him he is really not fine behaving like a .....as everyone walked out "
Dadi: drop me at my friend house Maan
Maan: dadi then you will say i cheat?
Dadi: "Meera is there to tell me truth..."
Meera smiled
Maan drop her to her friend home they all went to hospital
Meera: you both sit here i will call you in 5 mins
Maan: ok
Geet: whats wrong with you?
Maan: what i did now? looked at her with baby face... hold her hands
Geet: if dadi win's then
Maan: Geet my heart ...

Geet: "you & your logics"
Maan:took her both hands in his .."i will win"

Meera: come you both...both walked in

at Delhi
nt: in hospital "why don't you ask Dr what is wrong with me?"
dev: DR said you have to stay here for few more days
nt: pir hum ko huwa kya ha
dev: go & ask Dr don't eat my brain
nt : hum aap ki
dev: you are no more my ...
nt : started crying..
dev: walked out
nt: wipe her tears i will see you Geet
At Agra
Meera: oh....
Maan: what happen tell me quickly..holding Geet hand
Meera: i am sorry Maan
Geet: i told you not to bet..
Maan: Meera: you have n't check properly
Meera: poor Maan
Maan: will you tell me or not
Meera: let me tell dadi first she dial
Geet: i warn you
Maan: my heart can't be wrong... hold his head
Meera: dadi i am sorry you lost the bet .... yahan per Maan kai Dua ha ...
Maan: Hug Geet See i told you...Meri Dua ... humari Dua ....

Geet: but how?
Maan:looked at her see ... my heart is always right
to be cont...............comment if you want
pictures by Dimple Kaur
Edited by naddiya26 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

wao dear,

after long time, but such a nice update

DUA , A PERFECT NAME

keep writing

love

monica

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Posted: 14 years ago

wao such a supub update

after long time, but really nice update

DUA, a perfect name

keep writing n update soon

love monica

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: zebronics

wao such a supub update

after long time, but really nice update

DUA, a perfect name

keep writing n update soon

love monica

thx dear every1 is busy in chaanta😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
Dear just read ur update in ur blog😳, it was soo cute & awesome i just loved it😍
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Soni-Sanraj

Dear just read ur update in ur blog😳, it was soo cute & awesome i just loved it😍

thx dear thx thx thx

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