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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovelyyyyyyyy.
Geet has come to maan's house.
Maneet scene was veryy cuteee.
Continue soon.
Thanxx for the pm.



Fatima
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update... do continue soon.. eagerly waiting to c dadi's reaction..
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Posted: 14 years ago
OYE HOYE! loved this! maan couldnt say a word against what geet wished to do..!! I lovvvvvvvved this part! the fact tht she sneaked in to see his wounds and then apply some medicine.. really sweet! the fact tht they both got lost in feelings again.. the fact tht they hugged awwww really beautiful! i love the way they feel towards eachother, lvoe the way they're pulled towards eachother - this is fabbbbulous!!
love, love, Love the part.. uh-ohhh ye dadi ko bhi abhi disturb karna tha??? uff..!
anyways, update soon! am looking forward to it! =D
xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it.................read it again again................will wait for next part.......
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Posted: 14 years ago

hmmmm

madhosi ne to madhosh kar diya....
geet maan ke ghar chale gaye..😳😳....
hmmmm
yea dono khabhi nehi sudharnewale hai na..😉..
musky supar dupar part....
lov,❤️
Tama
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Posted: 14 years ago


hello musks,😛
😛
i'm sorry sweets, i've not been leaving as many comments here as I do with the other FF..!!!! ...

I read all the parts again and I must say, you are doing a fabulous job with both the FF's...!!!! i loved every single update of this FF too.....!!! rocking haan,......!!!!!!

love, how maan and geet are attracted to each other and they feel a kind of connection between them...!!!

hey, i liked the coffee scene too, poor geet had to keep barging into the conference room to ask maan , and he did not lose his patience..!!! choooooo adorable...!!!!

and the last part.... hoyeeeeeee... both of them were so concerned about each other... even adorable..!!! and geet in maan's bedroom......"ahem ahem*.......!!!! 😆😆😆😆😆😆

all i can say, is waiting for ur next update...!!!!!!

soumya
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Posted: 14 years ago

~madhoshi~
part 8

geet opens the fridge & takes out the milk
she places it on the gas & looks at maan
maan - kis ka wait kar rahi hoo?
geet - doodh ke garam hone ka...(she answeres smilingly..)
maan - who will switch on the gas?
geet looked confused - ji
maan - just move...
she sits on the slab..& takes a apple from the bowl & was about to bite
he takes it from her hand
geet mumeres - baby tera papa to bahut kanjoos hain..ek apple bhi nahi detha..😲baby shocked
maan washes the apple & gives to her..she mumers..nahi nahi wash kar rahe the..😊baby oh!!
she eats the apple & maan lights the gas..
maan - tumhe coffee nahi bana na atta..doodh garam nahi karna atta
tumhe atta kya hain...?
geet - mujhe..lodo kehlena aata hain, snake & ladder, cycle bhi chalathi hoon, scooty,
(maan rolled hi eyes)
studies main average hoon, phir mummy ke saath shopping main help...
her eyes was filled...
maan - kya baath hain geet
geet - mujhe mummy se milna hain
maan - why don't u go & meet her..do u want me to take u
geet - nahi main 8 months ke liya unse nahi mil sakthi...
maan - kyun?
geet cluctch her duppatta..& bends her head..
uske bechani dehkai nahi gayee....maan kuch samjh nahi paya..lekin..aisa kuch
pooch na bhi nahi chahatha tha jise use ki bhechani aur badhe...
maan - aacha woo saab chodo...yeh deekho doodh boil hogaya ..aab kya kar na hain
geet - aab isme 1 spoon haldi & 1 spoon sugar nahi nahi 2 spoons
maan - u take 2 spoons of sugar(lifting his eyebrow)
geet - no no I take 3 spoons...this is for u...thats why 2 spoons
maan - lekin I have only 1 spoon...
geet - trusth me u will need more sugar in this
maan comes closer..& says mitash ke liya...tum hona..she looks down biting the apple
maan moves closer to her she could hear her heart beat thuding in her ears..
he bites the apple from the other end almost biting her lips with it...
uske palke jhapakthi rahi..aur ek took use nihar thi rahi..she covers the stomach
with her hand..(mumers..baby that is censored for u..baby - I am sleeping any way..🥱)
maan takes the bite & stops there & asks narrowing his eye brows..
she noded her head for a no..& looked down...
geet - aap ko apple khana kain..yeh lijye..picks one from the bowl gives
maan - mujhe wohi wala khana hain(looking at her lips)
she pulls the apple away from her lips & looks down...and tries to change the topic
geet - aap yanha rahethe hain
maan gives a stirn look
geet - nahi mera matlab hain...woo mansion phir kiskha hain
maan - yeh 35 crore ka ghar mera naam pe hain..to mera hi huwa
geet - phir aap yanha out house main kyun hoo(innocently)
daadi came with haldi wala doodh to see maan & stood outside hearing geets voice
she wondered..maan ke kitchen main se ladki ki awaaza woo bhi ise waqt
she hides behind the door & smiles..wondering wat will maan reply to her
maan - woo..meri daadi ke saath misunderstanding ho gayee tha..
geet - yehloo..iskey liyai koi aapnoo ko akeela chotha hain kya?
daadi..perfect...!!
maan - nahi..woo baath geet cuts him..
geet - aap bhi na...daadi ko akeela chothdiya...uff kya karthe ho
kal jaake unse sorry kehna ..woo aap ko paka maaf kar denghi (daadi smiled)
maan - main kyun sorry khahoo (maan in attitude)
geet rolled her eyes...daadi ko sorry keh nai se aap ka maan kum nahi hoga
maan - deehko haldi wala doodh ban gaya..aab kya kar na hain
geet - jaladhi se ..pee lijiya..aur muhe ghar drop kijiyee
daadi looked at the milk in her hand & smiled ..ab iske kya zaroorat & left them alone..
maan makes a face & drinks..it..
maan - come I will drop u home..now...
geet - suniya
maan - umm!!
geet - mujhe neech uthareeya na...
he comes closer held her from the waist her eyes fluttered..looking at him
uski nasdikhi use madhosh karde thi thi..sudh budh khoya use deehk thi rahthi..
uska bas chal tha tho use aapne aagosh main samaletha..kuch baath thi..
jo..aapne aap ko us madhoshi main phir se kona se dartha tha maan...!!!
mushkil tha phir bhi koshish kartha rahtha!! har pal har lamha..aap ne aap se
hi uski jung chid jaathi...
maan slowly let her down & still held her capitive of his gaze & hands on the waist
her eyes moved from his eyes to his lips..then to his eyes..
she wiped the haldi mark with her thumb...her fingers moved slowly over his lips
maan closed his eyes & tighten his grip on her waist...then his mouth lowered
slowly towards hers until his breath warmed her lips..he was going to kiss her


shayad geet mana bhi nahi karpathi...karthi bhi kaise...shayad woh bhi yahi chahthi thi
maan pulled back his hands...moved away...
maan - lets leave...abruptly he said...
geet followed...they sat in the car...dono ka dil betaab tha us ek pa ke liya...
lekin kaise ishaar karthe...kaise batha the ki kya chahthe hain..jab kudh nahi
jaanthe ki kya chahthe hain!!!
geet closed her eyes & tried to divert her attention...away from the wild urges & thoughts
running in her mind...when they reached home...she quitely got off the car
& left..did'nt say anything...don't know wat was it..he waited ...
jaise ki he knew she will come back for him..& she did...
did'nt say anything...she lifted his hands & placed a soft kiss....
aapna khayal rakhna ....ek dil (baby umm!!😳..geet rolls her eyes)ek dil.. do jaan..bechain
rehtha hain aap ke khayal main..maan khada raha...aur sooch tha raha...bechain uska dil tha...
uska haal jaane ke liya...but she actually came looking for him...main bas sochtha rah gaya..
aur woo itni masoomiyath se aapna har hale dil bayan kar gayee..
kaise sambal paavoonga main use..kaise raku kayal uska...
jitna use door jana chatha hoon uthna hi uske kareeb patha hoon...

precap
geet angry & quits the job!!!😲

thanxs alot for all ur appriciation...hope this part brings smile too...please please do comment
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
oops wow!!! whns maan knwing geets preg............nd y is geet angry ??/
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Posted: 14 years ago
I was waiting from morning 4 ur update.Awsome as always,and i love dadi sweet dadi
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey muski !
nyc update sweetie!
i lyked part ven geet says tumhare papa toh kanjus nikle....hehe.......it wz cute
n dadi already likes geet now.......cuz she wz supporting her....yipeee!! :D
n geet quiting d job??!!!! y??!!!
god!but m sure maan will stop her! :)
update soon!

luv
Navpreet

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