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Heyy Chillupp..
Just caught up wid ur ff!!
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lovely update
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OMG OMG what an update Sara!
Mayur lost in each other and SG seeing them from behing.Too good!
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part 5-

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PART 6

"nupur kahan hy???" mayank ask gunjun who was there alone

"wo to sony chaly gae shaid"

"un dono ka sony k ilawa koi kaam nae hy"

Mayank said seeing the box

Mayank unlock the box, he found a few hours ago. Present in it was a precious, shiny metal. He hold the metal in his hand n handled the box to gunjun.

"gunjun there is something written on it"

Gunjun moved her gaze from the box n was now waiting for mayank to unreveil the statement written on the metal piece can easily be written even in the dark night because of the sparkling surface of the metal

"the key is hidden beneath the"

He stoped midway

"its incomplete" he said searching the whole piece carefully twice

Both for a few seconds thought of the statement

Then gunjun draw the attention towards the box she was holding n found something at the bottom of the box but it was difficult to read it in dark, she tried her level best to read it but in vain

"mayank something is mentioned over here too"

She asked mayank driving his attention towards the box

Mayank move in n bring the torch from inside n flipped the light. The whole box was enlightened n the statement was now clearly seen at the bottom

She looked towards each other as the statement was enough to increase their curiosity

the mystery will b reveled at 100 degree

It was more than fifteen minutes that they were sitting side by completely silent

N suddenly Mayank said coming out of the library of his thoughts.

"give me a vessel"

Gunjun was really surprised with the thing he demanded but do exactly what he said. She bring the bowl n handed it to mayank

Mayank take the bowl , filled it with water n thn placed it on the stove.

"what r v doing??? Tumhy kuch bnana hy to mein bna dety hn??? " gunjun asked with amazement

"gunjun v r doing alchemy" mayank replied

"alchemy???" gunjun was much surprised with the answer "over here???"

"gunjun" he said turning the stove "according to newton's scale thirty three degree is temperature used as water's boiling point "

"do u think it will emit light in boiling water???"

"no it will incandesce" he replied "when water will start boiling"

The bubble start forming in the water n gunjun was shocked to see that mayank was right

There was a small portion enlightened n text was clearly seen on it

the key is hidden beneath the sea

gunjun n mayank looked towards each other surprisingly, there was still another level to cross over here.

"mayank" gunjun said "tumhy kia lagta hy what does it mean???"

"buhut raat ho gae hy" mayank replied "its time too sleep, kal sochna abhi nae"

Gunjun nodded n both of them left the place silently

Next evening

There was a huge decrement in the temperature, n clouds were covering the sky, hiding the sun. Nupur was moving with mayank feeling cold, folding her arms around.

"its really cold" she said tightening the grip of her arms .

Mayank give her sweet look, remove his jacket putting it gently on her shoulder with great concern in his eyes.

"mayank tum" her sentence was still incomplete as mayank interepted in between

"its ok nupur"

"nupur" mayank said "kahan gum ho???"

"han" she came out of her thoughts "kuch nae"

"i was dreaming???" nupur thought "have I started liking him??? But what about him"

She said rubbing her arms in cold

"its really cold" nupur said

"hmm" he said holding his black jacket half zipped. He hold the zip n close it upto his neck "really cold"

He said walking silently leaving behind nupur in amazement

He turned back

"chalo bhi, wo dono wait kar rahy hn gy"

"han chalo"

N nupur followed him.

The sun was almost going for a sleep n darkness was going to cover the whole sky

There was a wooden stand on which the BarBQ sticks n below it was the coal forming black cloud.

Gunjun was sitting near it n samrat was lying down putting his head on gunjan's lap. She was passing her fingers gently from his hair, caressing his hair softly thinking about something different, really really different.But samrat was looking towards the stick busy in eating it, n was unaware that gunjun's gaze was permanently on him, she didn't blinked even once

"there was something in his chocolaty eyes" gunjun's pov "but what I was unaware. His eyes have so much depth that anyone can fall in love with them. Behind his flirting nature was a boy, which is really innocent. Noone in this world is like him"

"gunjan mein kab sy tum sy baat kar raha hn" samrat repeated third time "y u r not answering me???"

"wo or lo na plz" gunjun said trying to hide her thoughts

"gunjun" samrat said looking towards her "tum mujh sy kuch chupa nae sakty, I can read ur eyes"

He continued looking directly into her eyes "mery bary mein soch rahy thy"

"nae wo mein wo wo mein" she tried her level best to hide her feeling, to change the expression of her eyes that were sensed by samrat

"gunjun its ok. Nae btana to mat btao, but don't try to lie" he said touching her nose gently with her forefinger "I like my innocent friend, don't ever try to change, not for anyone, never ever"

"tum dono ny wait bhi nae kia hamara" nupur said snatching the stick from samrat

"tum hamesha mujh sy cheen kar hy kyun khaty ho???" samrat said giving confused look

"ab tum dono shro mat ho jana" gunjun said giving mayank the stick

"gunjun, its amazing really" mayank said "tum to bilkul maa jesa khana bnaty ho"

"maa" samrat said with so much excitement in his voice as he is the only person left in this world blessed with a mother "u have a mother"

I was only two months old, when my father fails to survive a car accident. So from my childhood my mother was my only world. She has done a lot of hard work only for my sake. The two important things in my life were my mother n my books.

"mayu kabhi in books ko bhi rest dy dia kar"

My mother always use to say me the same

"maa plz abhi to sirf aik baja hy"

We both always discuss the same everyday n I got irritated n gave angry replies but in real I loved our small fights n I always try to fight without a reason.

The bestest day of my life, when I was in 2nd year

"mr. myank sharma" the president of my uni said, after calling me in his office " all ur remaining studies will b sponsored by the university n u will also get a part time job"

I was so much excited that I cannot explain in words. It seems that now its time to return all those happiness to my mother that she has lost. Now all her worries will end.

But I was unaware that the happiest day will suddenly become the worst

I entered my home calling my mother "maa"

As usual I was expecting that she will call me "mayu itny late kyun aya" with her sweet voice

But the only voice was of screaming, pircing cry.

I was unaware that the smile I was expecting is vanished forever. I lost my world, my entire world.

But I was determined to fulfill my desire, my mother's dream to see me successful

That was the day of my last paper n I was busy doing my paper.

The inspection team catch me with the paper,about which I was really unaware. I begged in front of them, trying to convince them all, to prove my innocence but all in vain. My degree was rejected n I was incapable of taking admission in any university for next three years.

Noone believe me, I feel so lonely. For everone the day passed as usual but for me my only dream shattred, I lost everything, I really lost everything.

All three was listening him silently .his pain can easily be felt from his voice, his expressions. But they don't know what to say, how to calm him down. Instead of all this happened he was relaxed because somewhere he is confident that he was right, he was not at mistake.

"mayank" gunjun said "I can understand ur condition, mery story tumhary story sy ziada different nae hy"

I was the only child of my family, really shy n resistive

My parents have done love marriage, everyone was against them so they left their home, everything only for their love. I have not seen any of my relative to b in my home never ever

A pationate Sunday like always

"maa plz khana laa bhi do na" I said after waiting a lot for the breakfast

"ur mom is an example of laziness" my father said irritating my mother

"to ap khud aa kar bana lein"

"acah to phir"

But before he complete his sentence, I interepted in between "ap k jhagry ki waja sy I will die with hunger"

Was unaware that this is our last breakfast together

In the afternoon I was sleeping when someone knocked the door

I didn't give much attention but my heart started beating badly when I heard the sound of gun being fired. I rushed outside n seen only blood around everywhere.

I was standing still over there. They killed my parents only for the sake of few rupees or whatever they want. They snatch my little heaven.

"N my parents left me alone for this cruel world, how could they, y they have done this, y ???"

Her teary eyes were enough to explain her condition. She was unable to control her tears even after a great try. She left the place silently as she wanna hide her condition from the remaining three, the eyes of whom were also wet.

The atmosphere that was really calm a second ago was all filled with tears.

"mein dekhta hn" samrat said chasing gunjun.

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