MARS (mjht) part 11 (pg 111)

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#411

it was short n sweet update n ya take care

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AnotherAdmirer

@AnotherAdmirer

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#412

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Whoah! Amazing Update!👏

Simply Loved It, eventhough it was short, it was fun!:D

want to see MARS explore the forest, ur ff promises lots of adventure ahead, waiting eagerly for the next!

u rock hun! i particularly love the way u bond characters, Sanu, MaJan, SaJan n Mayur, all of them dealt with beautifully, i wanna see more of GuNur:D:D

This ff leaves me wanting for more😆 i cant help it, the concept is so different n interesting!

Thanks for the PM

Do Cont soon!

Luv

ZJ🤗

Edited by VampirePrincess - 14 years ago

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VRITIKA

@karantakiar

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#413

it ws gr8 one plz cnt soon n shw sum mre sajan scene
luv u
vritika

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XDevilsDesireX

@XDevilsDesireX

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#414

Hi sara🤗jaanti hoon that you are very angry with me so mujhay maaf kardena bhena for being so late magar iss baar main tumhay ek lambaaaaa sa comment doongi jo tumhari saari updates kay liye hoga.So lets begin with

2nd Update

Wow Awesome.Sara you are just fabulous.Waisay ek bataaoon you are a big chupi rustam😉i,ve been visiting the forum for more than 5 or 6 months but you never wrote such excellent updates and now you are showing us but still i love reading your updates😳.I read both SG and MN part and they were extremely cute.In sg scene i loved the way Samrat was irritated and shcoked when gunjan told him that he looks younger😆but she covered it by saying Nups name and nautanki to ussnay bikul sahi kaha😆.MN scene was adorable.I loved Nups thoughts about sadu Mayank.

Ok Now 3rd update.

3rd update

Okay spo they found the first clue.Mayank is really intelligent yaar.and on the pother side gunjan and sam found the bracelet good!👍🏼Sanu scenes are so cute😳Wonderful and awesome blossom update👏Loved it completely

Okay now the 4th update

4th update

Oh god i loved the Sanu scene.kaisay hain ye donon yaar ek leg piece pe larr rahay thay🤣.You know this happens often at my home as well.Sanu are just like my bro and sis.They even fight on these kinds of things😆.Wow i love the fall.Tch tch leg piece kisiko naseeb nahi hua🤣.Aww i loved the way Sam insisted gun to come in water.I loved that scene completely😍So cute and i loved the way mayank proposed Nups although not in real but still it was cute😳.

Amazing,wonderful and Superb updates dear👏👏👏I loved each and every update of yours.Cont soon dear

Love

Ash

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Alpenliebe

@Alpenliebe

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#415

Hey Sara honey hws ya???? you not wel wat happnd dear???😕 Arey first tum thik ho jaao then update....got it...

Any ways though this update is bit shorter, but I loved it to the core, loved the bondings of Sanu in ur ff, though I loved others too!!!!

and I m really waiting fr the next part where they gonna explore the foresyt!!!!! Gosh!!!! your update is so nice, that I cant help but request you to update ASAP!!!! 😆 GREEDY!!!!!!

But honey first you get well n then only you update!!!!! Get well soon dear!!!!!!😊

love ya!!!!!

urs'

Aditi

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Dilbole_ShiOmRu

@Dilbole_ShiOmRu

Stunner

Posted: 14 years ago

#416

Sara first of all take care of your health

Part was outstanding, awesome and wonderful. Your ff getting mysterious day by day. Loved sanu fight over chicken leg like 2 yr old kids and the strong bond four of them share continue soon really waiting to know their mysterious past and future

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manjeet

@love.mayurarti

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#417

awesome update

wonderful

luved sanu leg piece scene

n den the way mayank proposed nupur luved it

cont soon n tnx fr pm

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556195

Hibernated

Posted: 14 years ago

#418

loved the update dear
mayank proposed nupur😳
loved sajan closeness
really nice update but what was that the bitter past😲
future ka to phir bhi smajh ata hai par past .........😕
waiting eagerly for a extra long part..... extra long means really long😆
update next part soooooooooon

love
tasfia

Edited by tasfia123 - 14 years ago