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Posted: 14 years ago
heyy muskan,
i m soo sorry i haven't replied to the last couple of updates....blame college work for that!!😆....anway, firstly, CONGRATS on the new thread!!!👏....ur ff is just amazing and i hope there are many more threads to come cuz u write soo wonderfully!!....and awww, the last couple of updates, our MSK has been getting a little too romantic😳....ofcourse, that is always welcome😆.....and really, the way geet understands him, i think no one else can ever do that....i just lovee the understanding u have portrayed in their relationship because it really is beautiful!!...now coming to the last update, omgg i lovee pooja😆....and the maan climbed the pipe cuz geet didn't pick up the calls was just😍....like a true filmy hero lol....lovely update and i can't wait for the next one!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

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the end was very naughty yet so cute...............
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Posted: 14 years ago

hi muski love uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu a lot for your writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
AAAHHHH AWESOME!!!
Loved it specially the phone s**...............was soo soo cute!!
N loved the way she told Pooja abt her marriage 2 MSK
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Posted: 14 years ago
Muskaan i loved loved it!! finally one of her friends knows she is married. and maan so sweet he actually came looking for her how romantic.. and geet so shy asking about what phone s** and the way maan called her and told her what it was.. ahh our geet will always be shy.. loved it..

Gonnna go read ur new ff madhoshi now..

tc
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Posted: 14 years ago

woooooowwwwww dear.....

congo 4 ur 5th thread...🥳🥳🥳..
i know i late but.....wish to banta hai..😊...
gr8 part yaar.👏👏..
Geet ne priya ko bata diya..😊...
abb age ayega maza haina.....
thanks 4 pm me......
lov,❤️
Tama
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Posted: 14 years ago

moves her hair from her neck & wispers..this is..phone s**
she cuts the call & covers her face with the spread..

part 119

next day pooja calls up...poocha?
geet blushed..not bad geet ..not bad at all
pooja - yaar wat do I wear for the launch party
geet - kuch bhi phenle..u will look nice
pooja - nahi yaar I meeting Arjun as the young talent of the year
Arohi Sharma...yaada..because of him I could not participate in that
competition..last year...but this year I have won it ..
geet - woh sab chood na..sir aise nahi hain..he is really nice
pooja - but I am not going to spare him..

geet - wear salwar...
pooja - wat???? disc main...
geet - I think Arjun will like that
pooja - I am not going there to impress him..
geet - teri marzi..
pooja - umm!!! let me see
it was saturday night..the launch night..
geet arranged for all the displays & hand outs..
she coordinated with pari for the arrangement & checked & rechecked every small bit
Arjun - great work geet...I will manage from here..
geet - thanxs sir
arjun - if there is anything I will call u...I think we are pritty much done here

at the launch party ..the decor was set beautiful lighting & guests were given the hand outs
Maan - Welcome Mr. Punj
arjun - nice decor Mr. Khurana
maan - thanxs for coming..& smiled..restless..& looking around
maan kept looking for geet
pari checked up all the arrangements & met up with Arjun & Maan
pari - Mr. Arjun ..where is geet? we need her hear...when is geet coming
Arjun - I am sorry Mr.Khurana she won't be coming
pari - how can she do that..at the last min
maan stared at pari...
Arjun - no no...she was never supposed to come...
maan - why?
Arjun - she does'nt attend any business parties..she is not comfartable
maan was little taken a back..he remembered how she attended Mr. Sharma's parties with him
in mumbai and here..

pooja walks in & meets up with maan
maan - hi pooja
pooja - hi jiju..call me arohi sharma infort of that sadoo(she wispers to maan)
maan smiled..why wat happened...
pooja - thats my screen name...last year because of him I could not participate in the competition
arjun intrupts their talk
Maan clears his throat...meet Ms Arohi Sharma
Arjun - winner of the young talent this year ..right
arohi - hi..aap??(looks at maan extending her hand to arjun)
Arjun - I am Arjun Punj
they have that brief eye lock...(pooja mumers to herself..tu use badla lane aayaee hain
aise deehk aaghi to..tujhe pyar hojayaga...look away..pooja..)
Arjun - kuch kaha tumne
arohi - nahi....arjun - good
maan leaves them alone & calls geet


maan - why are u not coming..it is such an important day for me..
geet - I can't come there now..it won't look nice
maan - tum disc jaathi to hoo..friends ke saath...
then why are u doing this to me...I thought u will be here..
geet - aap kab se disc jaane laaghe...
maan - I want u here...
geet - maan plz..aise zid na karo..
maan - u are leaving me alone with all this girls...
geet smiles - enjoy yourself...
maan cuts the call..

the dark shade of the cover was looking wonderfull in the dim light of the disc..
it just added upto the feel ...there was lots of prasises & the magazine got
good accepatance ...maan thanked media & Arjun
Arjun - actually geet deserves it all
maan - sab kuch to uska hi idea hain...
Arjun - sorry!!
maan excuses himself...and kept looking at the entrance
pari - r u waiting for some one
maan - yah !! my wife..(he looks at the door)
pari - shall I get u a drink?(lagtha hain he really misses his x-wife..how dreamy..mumuers)
maan - umm!!!(he just did'nt want to be seen around her especially when geet walks in)

pari mixses few hard drinks to lighten his mood...


maan gets high on the drink..
he calls geet again - tum kanha hoo?
geet - maan ??? maan?

maan gets carried away & dances with pari & others


maan felt geet was around ..he kept looking for her...
arohi aka pooja..totally flat on Arjun..but tries very hard to put up an attitude...
Arjun - arohi..I am really sorry
arohi(wondered wat was wrong with him) - actually u may not know this..
but last year u could not participate because of me..I really felt bad after
I saw ur talent this year..I am really happy u won it ..
arohi was speechless...

next was a soft music..maan sat next to the bar expecting geet...
u said u will never let me miss u...phir tum kyun nahi aayee
arjun asked arohi for a dance..she just could'nt refuse him..

arohi almost got carried away with the dance...

the launch was really successful & they get a great media coverage and response

after the party was over..most have the guest had left..
maan sat there waiting for geet ...intaha hogai intazar ki...
geet - bewafa hum nahi ..phir wajah kya hoi intazar ki
maan - tum kanha thi geet..I was waiting for u...
geet - ghar challen..
maan - ek min geet ..tum party main kyun nahi aayee
geet - we will talk about it tomorrow & she walks away..
maan - nahi mujhe aabhi baat karna hain
geet crosses her hand over in front and gives him a stirn look..
maan - don't look at me like that...I may just kiss u hear ...
tum gussa main aur bhi pyari laagthi hoo
geet drags him home...
she helps him change & makes him lie down...
maan - tum party main kyun nahi aayee?? I was feeling so lonely..
geet - shhh...sleep now..
he cuddled up next to her & slept...

precap
geet really angry..

pooja..screen name arohi..if u all remember..when arohi becomes a singer she changes her name..so just worked on that.reverse....😉......yet another twist...hope u like it...
thanxs for all ur responses...please do comment
my new FF ~madhoshi~
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome muskaan,
i wonder now what will happen as geet is again mad at his drinking . i read madhoshi hit the like button also in the morning dont forget to add me in that pm list.But ur morninh update was super rocking so forgot to mention ab8 th9 in pm.

keep it up enjoy urself anf Good night
Edited by simzzzzcool - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
luved it. thanks muskan so arohi aka pooja wow. i luv ur idea. damn cool two of ma fav jodi.yes im dancing. nw to MAAN he is going to get nicely from GEET it seems like tat he drank again and GEET give one tight slap to PARI.
Edited by arthirajendiran - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi 2day also i made it b4 u pm me. Loved it but i feel geet should b there in the party. But u must hv something in mind, im sure. Thanks 4 pm.

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