MAAN GEET FF~~~PRINCESS DIARIES~~~part 17 page 73 - Page 23

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: KaSh-Maneet-Fan

hiii
awesome update
loved it
loved da song
when will maaneet meet
geet life in danger
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm



heyy thnx a lot!|
m so glad u like it!
will update sooon
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part...but it was too short...i hope they find out abt each other...update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shivu_crazyfan

heyy!
m soo gald u like it!1
i know it was a short update...but m so busy wid my studies dat i dont get tym...hts y i update small becoz i dont want to close this ff...
but will try my best next tym to update more!!!


ok thx!! will wait till ur exam are over!!
do concentrate on ur studies and thx for replying back!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
love this part.. but want longerupdate next time.. hope their identities especially geet's will be revealed soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: zooni20

ok thx!! will wait till ur exam are over!!
do concentrate on ur studies and thx for replying back!!



hey!!!
thnx... will update sooon!!! in a day or two...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Tich...

love this part.. but want longerupdate next time.. hope their identities especially geet's will be revealed soon..


hey!
sure i update soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 10
tears rolled out geets eyes...
p-geet...dnt be sad..
G-i dont wana go back ...here it feels so free...m fed up of dat jail
(she meant her home)
p-u just raom a bit outside ...i pack up the things...
geet walks outside...she is sad...a she has to go back nd live as wat her elders ask her..nd also becoz she couldnt find out for her raj!

maan was also the same...
he was fustrated nt to find his simran...
shasha cums to him..
s-hey maan..lets go outside...all r havin fun...
m-shasha u go...m nt in a moood..
s-no ...nt today..if u wont go ..i also wont go...
m-ok..u go ...i just cum...
s-thts like my maan!!

as maan walks out he saw geet moving around...she was also sad just like him...
geet ..go nd sits under a tree...maan joins her
m-hey
geet just gave a fake smile
m-life so unpredictable...haina..
g-hmmm...esa kyu hota ha ki hum jo chahte ha hume nahi milta
m-exactly...may be god wana play a game wid us...
g-pata ha...i was so happy to be here...it feels so free! jo man kare woh karo!
m-free?? u talking as if u a princess...jo apne ghar me band rehti ho aur ab free ha!
geet hairs blow...its the same way raj calls her a princess!!
oh well she was a princess!
before geet could say anything shasha calls maaan
s-maaan...where r u???maaan
m-srry..i need to go!princess!( now it was maan turn ...he realised he calls her simran...princess!)
they both felt they knew each other but they remain unspoken..
geet stands up too...ndd she was in so much deep thinking dat she didnt watch out for the way nd lost in the jungle...
she hears animal voices...
g-babaji...how i got in this vast jungle...save me...she was too afraid...


here pinky was ready wid her bags packed...nd go outside to call geet...but she couldnt find her anywhere..
she goes whre all other students were sittin nd chatting..
p-any1 saw geet?
m-ya...she was ryt dere sitting under the tree check out...
p-no she is nt dere...i checkd out every place..dis was the last place to be checked..
seeing worry on pinky face even maan got worried for geet...he dont know why its happening to him but now he couldnt stop himself to find geet...
m-i help u out...


here in jungle...geet is so scared dat she started crying...nd she heard sum footsteps...she controls her weeping nd tries to keep quite..she saw sum soliders...having knifes nd all wid dem...she was confused who all day were...they were not the soliders of udaipur..she homeplace...den who all dey were???
she was keeping an eye on dem but sum1 holds her mouth frm behind nd takes her...her earing falls dere...

here maan is tried searching geet..he steps in vast jungle...
m-geeet...geeet...
suddenly maan saw geet's earing lying..
m-yeh toh geet ka ha...oh god...yeh ladki ...

on other hand geet is surrounded by so many soliders..1 of dem says maharaj ko msg send karo...princess geet ab humare pass ha...hahahahaha ...ab maharani shikha kya karengi dekhte ha...
geet wonders ..dadima..yeh dadima k bare me kya keh rahe ha..kya yeh humare dushman ha???
geet-listen m nt afraid of u all...agar humare yaha pata chala ki tum logo ne mujhe kuch kia toh tu,hare liye accha nahi hoga...let me go..
solider-ese kaise chod de...le chalo ise...
sum men catch hold of her nd tries to take her..
geet shouts..nd maan cums into scene..
he gives a punch to one who holds geet hand...nd nw he holds geet's hand nd move her safely behind him...now he fights wid other soliders too...
geet is shocked to see maan ...she admires him for a moment..how he was fighting for her...nd sudeenly she shouts maaan...
maan skips his heart beat nd as he turn around 1 solider hits him wid a knife...geet teras rolled down..
now maan is very angry nd hit the soliders v.hard...they ran away...
ofcourse they had too! as maan was dere!
now maan turns towards geeet nd slowly walks to her
m-tum thik ho..u alryt?
g-hmm..
m-y u crying? u r safe...
g-blood..ur hand...
m-ouchh...
nd all the other students came dere...
shahsha-maaan wat happ to u..oh my god ..look at u..lets go guys...we need to bandage him...
m-m alryt shasha..chill
s-how i can be maan..chalo..
p-geet u alryt??????
g-haan..
p-tune toh mujhe dara hi diya tha...wat was so iterestin in dis jungle dat u cum here woh bhi all alone...
g-woh main..
p-ab chal...kuch mat keh (oh gosh! batao koi princess ko ese bolta ha ki she shouls shut her mouth! hehehe)

maan is taken to his tent nd geet to her
g-i didnt even thank maan
p-woh toh ha..ja kehde..
g-haan.
geet was abt to step in maan;s tent..she saw shasha
close to maan...hugging him
s-ohh maan thank god u alryt...tumhe kuch ho jata toh...??y u got dere...
m-shasha chill...i cnt let her die dere...
s-jo bhi ho...dont do it again..
m-ok mam..
geet thinks...mjhe inhe disturb nhi karna chahiye...
she thinks dey r more den frnds...
the scene made her forget her admiration towards maan..
g-maan raj nahi ho sakta..
shasha nd maan dey luk gud togethr
geet returns back to her tent
p-u done?
g-ya
p-lets go..solideers r here..thodi dur haa..we cnt ask dem to cum here or the secret will be reveled tht u a princess ..lets go..
geet closes her eyes...to catch all her memories...nd left..

in maan's tent..
m-shasha ..let me check out geet..she was scared..
s-(she was jealous) maaan no u take rest..geet have wid her ..many frnds..
m-shasha..i will be back...plz wait

maan goes to geet's tent nd shocked to see geet's tent all vacant...



thts all for the day!! hope u like it! pheeww!! m tired!

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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks for the update! Great update!
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow awesomee
luved it
maan saved geet
super coolll
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow awesomee
luved it
maan saved geet
super coolll
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heyyy thnxx !!
m glad u like it

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