FF: love of two kinds (mayur's version on req) !!

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mehr

@missinguonly

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Posted: 14 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima
omg

wat's going on

i hope zaara gets over mayank soon

i can't see mayank and zaara together

and wanna see amyur together

upadte soon

u will see them together in next part😳
will deff give sum romantic part of them😃

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mehr

@missinguonly

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Posted: 14 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: achoose
why r u not pming me dear??? the update was great dear...but y mayank slapped nupur...thats not fair yaar........................

o sorry dear, m pming ppl from my pm list which is on page 1😳 n than ur not in there lemme add ur name there😃
its not fair, or it might be afteru read the whole part na😉

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mehr

@missinguonly

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Posted: 14 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: -sam-
lovely part mehar! I hope mayur will be together!

thanks will deff try to give romantic part in next part😳

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mehr

@missinguonly

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Posted: 14 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: shivu_crazyfan
soooooooo gud luved it!!!!!!!!!
continue sooN!

thanks for liking my work😃

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mehr

@missinguonly

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Posted: 14 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: samiralovemayur
mehr awesome update can'tw ait 2 see 2ther mayur soooooooooon thanks hun 4 d pm

thanks samira..u will see them together in next part😃

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mehr

@missinguonly

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Posted: 14 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: kirti123
i m not liking this zara
omg mayank slaps nupur
want mayur together
thanks for the pm'
continue soon😊

dont worry u will see mayur together in next part😉

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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#87

Awesum update mehr

loved it to the coreeee

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#88

cant believe this update... update the next part soon.

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mehr

@missinguonly

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Posted: 14 years ago

#89

@sariskamnarti: thanks=D
@Love_RM_Mayur: thank u=)
@divya: dont worry mayur will b together in next part=D

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mehr

@missinguonly

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Posted: 14 years ago

#90

part 4

after seeing all this
nupur just walks away
than mayank luks @ her
n zaara is still so worried
after nupur goes
m: zaara r u hungry??
z: i think u should go lunch with nupur
m: y??
z: cuz she needs u, she is so angry, n i think only u can be the one who will make her feel good
m: okay if ur seeing than i will go..bye
z: bye
mayank goes in high skool to find nupur
n he sees her
nupur is very happy with her friends
n mayank is keep looking @ her
suddenly nupur sees mayank
n goes in music room
m: aww man her mood was so awesome, arghh!!!
n he goes after her
m: nupur
she doesnt reply
mayank hold her hand
n: excuse me leave my hand
m: come on ya!!
nupur makes him leave her hand
n keep walking
m: nupur look whatever u see that was not truth!!
n: yeah right
m: m serious!!
n: i hate you, i wanna live my life now, n i will find someone to marry me, even better than u
m: what?? u??
n: m serious mayank, n now go from here i have many things to do
m: please try to understand just!!
n: i hate u mayanl, n i alwayz knew there was something between u n zaara, so cheap relationship
mayank gets mad
n slaps nupur
nupur is crying
m: m sorry but that is all in ur mind about me n zaara
n mayank hold her from arm
m: look, i only luv u, afterall zaara is like my good friend, but i only luv u, y dont u understand that??? y??
n: u luv me n ur slapping me?? y??
m: becuz i cant think of my relationship with anyone else like urz, m so sorry, but please dont ever say that again!!
n: i luv u too, n i also cant see u with someone else but when i saw u with zaara on the beach, i just dunno what to do!!
m: see our problem is same, we both luv each other, than y r fighting between us y??
n: i dunno, i mean i try to give u everything i want, but i cant make my place in ur heart
m: u alwayz have n special place in my heart, n now dont think like that
n they both hug each other
m: huh!! ur mood?? i couldnt even have lunch with zaara
nupur make big eyes
n: go eat with her i dont care
m: of course y would u care now?? after all i have been telling u that i only luv u
they both smile
n: i have to talk to you
m: what??
n: not here lets go on beach ur fav place n we will talk there
m: okay lets go
they both go on the beach
m: now would u tell me what u wanna talk about?
n: mayank actually amm umm
m: what?? say it?? i will not kill u
n: will u marry me mayank??
n now this part has done on mayank's shock face, n on nupur's happy face

~**~ Next part's promo~**~
nupur has sindoor in her forehead, n mayank n zaara is with her on front of mayank's mom

hope u all lyk it=)
p.s: guyx i will not update this next week, cuz i have to do mayur os "halloween special" so will unable to do that one, but will deff give u one part on next next week, i would b very happy if u will read my mayur os on halloween special=D n hope u all liking my job on this FF=D

Edited by missinguonly - 14 years ago

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