FF: love of two kinds (mayur's version on req) !!

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mehr

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Posted: 14 years ago

#171

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manjeet

@love.mayurarti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#172

awesome update

luved their convo.....soooo sweet

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Faria Ferdousi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#173

Mehr
it was a very beautiful update
loved mayur a lot
they r very cute and sweet
wah so mayur now going to PAris for their honeymoon
great yaar

hey nupur wanna suprise maynk on V.say- wah wah
waiting for her surprise
loved ur update dear
keep updating

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mehr

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Posted: 14 years ago

#174

@luv.mayurarti: thanks a lot<3
@faria: thank u so much faria....u made my day dear<3

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mehr

@missinguonly

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Posted: 14 years ago

#175

part 11 of "Love Of Two Kinds"
*only mayank and nupur's part, but someone again in the middle....*

nupur throw pillow @ mayank
n- ab chalogay?? kab se tayaar hoon main
m- tum yaha kaise agaye?? i mean abhi to tum tayaar hone gaye thi
n- ab ho gaye chalay??
m- haan chalo
-suddenly door bell rings
m- abhi kaun agaya??
n- ruko main dekhti hoon
-nupur goes to open to door, mayank is still in the room
-there is a man on the door
n- yes??
man- mrs.mayank??
n- yes
man- jee hum waha valentines k liye tayari karrahay thay..lekin thori cheezain nai hai or list aap k pass se lene thi to hum aaye hain?
n- oh yes...lekin mayank ko pata chal jayega yun to
man- to aap humain batado kaha hai hum le lenge
n- acha theek hai wo right jaake left pe jaoge na wahi saamne waale room mei hain..tum log jao tab tak main mayank ko bato mei lagati hoon
man- ok
-nupur goes in the room
m- kya howa?? kaun tha??
n- nai koi nai tha
m- per mujhai to awaaz arahi thi
n- i mean wo parosi k ghar ki jaga humare ghar agaye thay
m- acha ab chaltay hain
-nupur suddenly hugs mayank
m- nupur..chalo
n- bas 2 min
m- kya ho gaya hai?? kya karrahi ho??
n- yaar mujhai tum per bohat pyaar araha hai..i mean valentine ka gift bhi nai diya or isi liye..mat roko mujhai abhi
m- waah i luv u too
-suddenly nupur sees those men left
-nupur leaves mayank
n- dekha pure baal kharab ho gaye
m- kya?? abhi to khud ko pyaar araha tha
n- yaar...ab chalo late ho rahay hain...gaari mei hi banaoongi baal mei ab
m- waah bari ajeeb insaan ho chalo
n- tumne mujhai ajeeb kaha??
m- nai kab se deewaaro se batein karraha hoon main to
n- valentines day per bhi na mujhse larai hi karo tum to
m- acha meri maa sorry ab chalay
n- chaloo
-they left from there
-nupur is fixing her hair in the car
m- itna mat dekho aaina toot jayega
-nupur luks with angriness
n- acha hai na kuch to kharcha karogay apni gaari pe
m- aray itna lar kyun rahi ho??
n- main larrahi hoon? tum larrahay ho mujhse
m- acha baba waise ye batao tmhari honeymoon ki packing ho gaye hai na??
n- haan ho gaye hai
m- kal subah 5 bajay nikal na hai tumhai to yaad hai na
n- haan mujhai yaad hai aakhir mujhai jaana hai honeymoon per wo bhi tumhare saath
m- wapis pyaar araha hai tumhai??
n- ab kya karoon?? valentines hai na
m- acha is k baad pyaar nai hoga??
n- tab thora sa kam hoga na
m- ohooo to to har roz hi valentines day hona chaiye
n- kitni ajeeb batein karrahai ho??
m- yaar tum bhi na...
n- main bhi na??
m- khair choro ghar agaya
-now mayur are there
-mayank rings the bell
-someone from inside opens the door
-mayanks smile just went away...n nupur is still happy

-i gave short part cuz of suspence-

p.s: sorry cant pm now m in hurry so plz if u see this n u dont get pm dont mind