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Hinna

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Posted: 15 years ago

#201

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will catch up on the last few parts and comment soon 😛

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lallulal2010

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Posted: 15 years ago

#202

SOMEONE HAD PROMISED AN UPDATE TODAY!!!!!

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Hinna

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Posted: 15 years ago

#203

Part 11:
Amazing part Tia!
Aaah yayyyy Maan's finally confessed it to himself, Dev and Dadi!
Speaking of which yayyyy Dadi!!!
I just adore your style of writing! 👏
Hehe love the geet shouting at dev on the phone and maan listening to it all!
Yayy Maan's going to go get her girl! 😃
Great part!

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Hinna

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Posted: 15 years ago

#204

Part 12:
Awww Pinky! Yayyy Adi!
Yayy they're married! 😛😆
OMG Brij?! 😲 *falls off chair* he's so nice...?! 😲😆
Aww Geet's family is so sweet! Loved how you showed them all meeting her!
Beautifully written! 👍🏼

Part 13:
Ooooh pinky knooows! Clever girl!
Loved their convo!
And then Maan calling her sweetheart! hehehe
Tia while many may want to generously 'give' you ande and tomatar for you to make some omlette 🤣 .....i actually loved what you did!
Hmm Maan has something up his sleeve!
I love how he said all those nice things to Geet which btw made me feel all butterfly stomach-y 😳😆 and then say she was important for the firm 😆 and how he's showing he doesn't care...love it!
Aaaaah fab part! ⭐️

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Ayesha_MSK

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Posted: 15 years ago

#205

Tut tut Maan! It's not nice to break a girl's heart multiple times 😒
I do feel for Geet!

But I'm sure he'll make it up when they get together 😉😆

Overall, lovely part! 😃😃😃

Thanks for the PM and PLEASE continue asap ⭐️

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Tia

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Posted: 15 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes
hahaha, MR MSK is hilarious, please do continue soon!

Hehehe.. Yeah.. Thanks dear!😆

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Priya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#207

Great update! I bet he's going to Mumbai instead of Malyasia! But me is angry with Maan for making Geet cry, I think he deserves another dose of jealousy... perhaps he sees Geet and Shekhar together or something like that?😈😉 Hmmm on second thought judging Maan's mood it might be Geet's turn as well, perhaps when she refuses to listen to him? Hmph but me want to see a jealous Maan anyways.😆😳 A jealous Maan is totally yummy... hot... and the list goes on and on.😳☺️ Cant wait to read the next part Tia, please update ASAP!

Cheers,

Priya

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Navpreet

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Posted: 15 years ago

#208

hey tia!
sum 1 wz supposed to update today ryt?! :P
btw ven u updating??
m waiting.....

luv
Navpreet

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Maheen

@sweet_gurl93

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Posted: 15 years ago

#209

hey

omg such good parts (12 and 13) really like the whole family bondage of geet and all, its nice lol

and what is maan going on about?? malaysia?? i thought he loved her?? im confused lloool

please continue soon

Maheen xx

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Tia

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Posted: 15 years ago

#210

Originally posted by: spvd
hello dear count me in for the eggs and tamatar.................wanted to keep on reading..................but u stopped..........sigh..................nice part....................wonder what Maan is planning.....................don't think he's really going to Malaysia..................but liked the way he said hey sweetheart...................poor Geet was in wonderland for few minutes but thanks to Maan she came back to earth harshly..........................cont soon and thanks for the pm.................

Thanks Deepa! i've now got ample eggs and tomatoes!😆 Glad you liked the part and yeah, wat Maan did to Geet was rude but it's Maan, after all!