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hey,


loved the update....yes count me in....i would love to throw eggs on u....plzzzzzz update soon.....cant wait..

Originally posted by: .sireesha.

OMG Y did U stop there..........

Hey I think Maan is going Mumbai and not Malaysia........................

Im Eagerly waiting for the next part

Pls add me to ur PM List

Pls Update Sooooooooon

Thanks Sireesha!😳 Oh, I had to stop!😉 Wat Maan's gonna do, we'll know in the next update! you're already on my PM list, hun!😛

Originally posted by: Maania

So sad,but waiting 4 the happy moments.

Thanks hun! Aw, those moments will come soon!😳

Tia Loved it.......waitin 4 2moro updte nw...😉

Originally posted by: lallulal2010

Maan is really a jerk...................but r u seriously UPDATING 2MORROW???? ThAT WOULD BE 8th WONDER OF THE WORLD!!!! 😆

Hehehe... Maybe he is!😉 😆 Hun, you break my heart! Haven't I been updating daily before?!😲 Yeah, well, I might update tomorrow!

heyyy dear,
nice FF
thanks for PM.



love
Riddss

Tiiiiiaaaaaaa!! What an update!!!

Omg.. I almost wanted to cry with Geet at the end, simply out of frustration. There is No way Maan is going to Malaysia.. sure, he might have booked a flight, but to Mumbai! To his Geet! And if he hasnt, Tia I suggest u sort that out for him! :p

I loved Everything, Everything, Everything about this part! I didnt even realise when it was coming to an end.. I was like arrre, what? You stopped writing? lol

Uff.. Geet-Pinky convo = Cute!
Maneet convo over the phone.. Tia very honestly speakin, even I was blushing lol the way u described the feelings his voice and words were evoking in Geet was just outstanding! I may not have 'heard' him for real, but I certainly could hear his gorgeous voice say those words in my mind, and that too in his Maan-fashion.. hayyyye Tia! Loved it! Wanna wack a hard punch on his arm or something though, for basically irritating Geet - how can he be so cruel as to say such sweet things, and then make out it was for the sake of their god-damn company??!! Urgh, munda is deliberately annoying her! I was slightly surprised how he was somewhat confessing over the phone, although it was still hot. So am glad that his real confession will happen Face to face!!!
oooo I cant wait for the next part Tia!!!

Before I shut up though, I have let you know that although this was an absolutely fannnn-tabbbb-ulous part, I wanna give u a huuuuge jhappi for something you wrote towards the beginning of the part..

"her thoughts dutifully drifted to the center of her existence. Maan."

Tia... thats beautiful :) A Really, Really beautiful line. I stopped for a moment when I read that and just sighed and let out a little but long, "awwwww". A truly well crafted line for one, depicting her feelings for sure but the depth of it is really quite something. Makes me fell all smiley when I read that, and just makes me Love Maneet even more.. of course makes me love u even more too!! lol
Its just small things like this, which really make me love what you write. Just a completely 'wow moment' for me in the part :)

Keep it up bubs!!
A wonderfully written part as always - ur style rocks! and of course, fab ideas included!!!

xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Well im ready to throw all sorts of Tomatoes Eggs n all on u

Originally posted by: Tishuu

Tiaaaa that was n awesome update! Omg i hau an inkling theres sum secret around. Dno bout pinky bt maan 4 sure is tricking geet. Dev told maan already bout weddin and geet bein in mumbai. I guess he wantd to hear 4rm geet. I bet his flight is 4 mumbai =} update soon

Tishu,

Thanks hun! Ah, smart girl!😉 Yup, there is something going on but Pinky isn't a part of it and Maan is going to M...!😆

WU partner! I'm back! So, you don't update for a whole month and the one week I'm gone, two updates! It's a conspiracy!