Maaneet FF *A Second Chance* |NOTE P.65|

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Shreya

@shrezzj

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#331

Originally posted by: liv2laugh
Lovely update 👏 👏 👏

Good luck on your exams 👍🏼

Loved how Maan and Geet bonded, then fought and then made up again. 😃

I am a tad confused about the diamond ring flying away. 😕 😕 😕

Could you please shed some light on that.

Thanks
Jhan

hahaha i knowwww i didnt make that very clear 😔 darn :/

it was supposed to be that the ring fell off her finger when maan pulled her to the car (you know the part where it says she mentally and physically felt something slip away...that would be the ring. and the photo was the thing that flew away. im sorry!!! maybe i should go write that in the note at the top or something..lol

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Nanthini

@Nanthini9

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#332

Originally posted by: shrezzj

haha noo it picked up the photo 😛 and the ring fell off when maan pulled her back to the car.....i knew i wasnt clear enough 😕 darn

Ahhh I get it now 😊 THnks!

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Sara

@charmed ones

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#333

i luv it ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

it was awesumn fab update...!!! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

hu is ur exam going....onli 1 left..huh..!!!! then afterwards cn i ask 4 regular updates.!!!!..hehehehe ...😆😆😆😆

Maan being so care, luvling, adorable, possessive abt geet....!!!!😳😳😳😳

both hav started 2 rose new feeling n realising of it....!!!!😃😃😃😃

Thanxx 4 taking tym n updating 4 us...!!! 😉reali appreaciate it...!!!👏👏👏👏

waiting 4 more update...!!! 😊n Do well in ur exam...!!!!👍🏼

Luv

Sara😊

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Hetal

@ibelieveinpink

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#334

i was waiting for this for so long...loved it!!! It's wonderful, especially the ending!!! Shreya you're the best...love your FF!!! So looking forward to how it will shape up!!!!!!!!!

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sweet scorpio

@sweet scorpio

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#335

superb!

atlast geet started to move on!

lol!...both of them are wondering the same thing!....

continue soon!

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ansah

@SahSah

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#336

wow...that is just so amazing...really so good...

i am so loving it...maan and geet moments

are really adorable....great it is....do keep writing...

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Sireesha

@.sireesha.

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#337

OMG thats Fabulous Dear....👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏...............

Thanq soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much for the Lovely Long Update......🤗🤗🤗.............

Loved it sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Loved the way Geet cooled Maan's tension...❤️...........

Thats a very Sweet gesture.......😳😳😳..........

Loved every single line.......❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️.............

Thanq so much for including the Endnote Dear......🤗.......

Nahin to humari itni choti si khali dimag ko kuch samajh mein nahin aaya hoga......😆😆........

Now I understood why Geet felt lighter.........

Eagerly waiting for the next part

Pls Update Sooooooooooooooooon

All the Best for Ur Bio Exam.....🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗..........

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swetha10

@swetha10

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#338

nice one.. gud tht geet's moving on... luved the protective maan.. do continue soon

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shivangi783

@shivangi783

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#339

Awesome update!!!👏👏

yeah, it was long and I thoroughly enjoyed it😊

Loved the conversation!

You beautifully portrayed the different emotions of Maan-anger, care, joviality!

Last part was nice where Maan says he was expecting that😆

The car part where car doesn't start lightened the environment but it too had a deep symbolism involved-falling off the ring when Maan takes her to the car!👏

I loved the way you've shown this-Moving on in life on Geet's part!

Though it was a bit confusing-the ring and pic part, but your note helped😊

Continue soon please😳

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Saz

@Chotii

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#340

Awww shreya! What a beautiful part! Everything about it was justtt amazing! Love love loved it and the fact tht it was niice + lonnng! Wish you all the luck for ur midterms! I can't wait til u update again, but be assured tht this part will make the wait easier to bare. I really loved everything tht took place.. Written Wonderfully + awwww! Maaneet are just The Best in this - I love what they're feelin eachother love love love it! Thanx for a fantassstic update! + thanx a lottttt for clearing that up at the end :D
xxxx