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Posted: 19 years ago
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i'll cont. soon :)
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Posted: 19 years ago
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In a little bit MORE>>> HEHHE

Edited by Babi Ange1 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 5

Angad basically left her out of his time, out of his reach, out of his life. He acted as if she wasn't even his girlfriend. She did as much as she could for him, though he didn't see it, and sacrificed her whole life for him. She did anything to make things work, but he didn't do much at all.

She tried sooo hard to figure out what the problem was, & why he hurt her so much. "how can God give you the most perfect gift of your whole life to love, and take it away as if it wasn't yours to keep" she asked everyday. Angad became meaner and meaner, and it hurt her more and more. One day he picked her up from school, and his was so different. She looked at him slowly. His built was bigger, his lips …no smile, his voice so monotone, and his eyes…. She looked at his eyes through the rear view mirror, and she began to cry. His eyes were so cold now, and that love, warmth, and sweetness she use to see no longer existed.

Angad wasn't Angad anymore. They didn't speak a word that car ride home, and all she could think was "Why ? why was it like this now?" She came home and cried her heart out. And all that played in her head was the days he always dropped by just to see her, just to hold her.

Now, he seemed as if he didn't even want to hold her anymore, touch her, or look at her. She blamed herself for all of this, didn't know why, but it just seemed like it was her fault. She lay in bed that night reminiscing about the nights they laid together in bed, and he held her close to his body, and never did let go. ((you guyz can picture what happened next. lol *PG 13*.))

How she use to wake up summer mornings, and he'd be smiling and watching her sleep till she got up. Why was everything so hard now, and why did it hurt so much? She remembered the sweet ring of his voice constantly telling her he loved her, while they kissed, or just stared into each others eyes. She remembered the days when he'd stroke her hair, and laid the most simplest, sweetest, kisses on her lips. She remembered the days when he'd run all the way to her house just to hug her tight, and she remembered the days when just everything between them was so perfect.

She cried helpless tears, and all hope was just gone. She knew she was still so young, but regardless what age she was, it still hurt. She felt that endless pain that shuts your whole life and hope down. The point was, she felt it, and she didn't know how to make it go away. There were times where she'd think about leaving him, but she imagined how worse the pain would feel knowing she lived a life without him.



Part 6

Just as long as she knew she was his, and he was hers made the slightest bit of feeling okay. Her tears fell harder, and her mind began to shut down on her. All she could think was "God I love you Angad, I miss your old self so much."

One afternoon, Angad picked her up from school again. They were both walking until Kripa began to cry like usual. "Why are you crying again. damn it!" Angad yelled. "Nothing…" she struggled to say. "You know what I hate about seeing you all the time, is that you always end up crying on me for no f**kin reason! What the hell am I doing wrong now " he yelled again.

She tried to hug him tight, yet he resisted. "I love you Angad, I'm sorry," she cried. "yeah whatever," he coldly said. Angad was so frustrated, didn't know what he was thinking, didn't know what he was doing. A confusion of being with her or leaving her just rushed through his head, as they walked towards the car. Suddenly, in the midst of it all, a loud bang alerted them both. Angad didn't know what it was. He turned around to see if Kripa heard it, "Ey did you……. NOOOOOO!" he cried.

What was that loud bang??? WhAT HAPPENED? will their relationship get better or worse???

**There is only few parts left.. becuz i'm not going to stretch this story.*** IT A SHORT STORY. So hav fun reading it!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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what was the bang? I hope nothing happened to kripa....I hope she doen't die!! 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
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plz plz plz cont!!!...god angad is so freakin insensitive!!!!....how sad 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pooja922

plz plz plz cont!!!...god angad is so freakin insensitive!!!!....how sad 😭



yes she is rite!!!why is angad being soo freakin insensitive??!!Plzz bring old angad bac!!and i hope kripa is alright!!! i was crying while reading this fanfic!! 😭😭!!! It soo sad!!!😭!!plzzz continue!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#17
I simply love ur story too...Itz so good...Plz cont. very soon...I so wanna knw wht the loud bang was...
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Posted: 19 years ago
#18
it was a lovely part...dont tell me tht kripa was hurt in any way...plsss cont soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#19
i just read ur story its fabulous
cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#20
I love your stories. Great part. 👏

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