(MG) FF~Jab Sparks Flew *Part 12,Page 40* - Page 7

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Posted: 15 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: desigurl953

Thanks everyone for liking my ff



How could we not? 😃😃😃😃😃

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Posted: 15 years ago
#62
Gr888888888 ff.
Lovee each part.
I think so dadi is choosing geet for maan.
Plzz continue soon.
Can u plzz add me in ur pm list?


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Posted: 15 years ago
#63
:D just read both parts hehe... Sorry never realised ur fd was up.... Add me to ur pm list... It's really good
Lol... Dev and geet bro....
So funny
Lol
I am felling a bit sic in my ff they both have massive crash on her hahaha
Lol
Sloop good.... Can't wait till u get maaneet to gather

:D
Sokol nice... Updte soon
Xxxx
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Posted: 15 years ago
#64
Lolz,yeah it's so true...In ur ff,they both have a crush on her and here,Dev's her brother..I guess that's why it's called FF,our won versions of the story...Yeah..I am updating soon..Actually I am writing the ff already but I can never focus.I tend to wander off and come back after 5 mins to continue updating it as I am already typing it..Lolz..Dunno why I can never sit down and write it at one go..Do you ever face this?

Originally posted by: FIRESafiReFIRE

:D just read both parts hehe... Sorry never realised ur fd was up.... Add me to ur pm list... It's really good
Lol... Dev and geet bro....
So funny
Lol
I am felling a bit sic in my ff they both have massive crash on her hahaha
Lol
Sloop good.... Can't wait till u get maaneet to gather

:D
Sokol nice... Updte soon
Xxxx

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Posted: 15 years ago
#65
Hi Maneetians,or should I say FFs ki 'deewani's? Lolz..I am a huge FF ki deewani...
Firstly,I'd like to thank all of your lovely comments..A few of you even guessed and some of you got it right and I want to give you all a huge huge huge jhappi!!🤗🤗🤗
I love you..Felt so good reading each and every one of ur encouraging comments.
So I am back with part 3..Hope you enjoy this part too...Don't forget to comment 😉

Part 3

Recap :Maan and Geet finally meet(well sort of).Dadi talks to Geet.Geet is about to tell dadi something when Dev interrupts and excuses Geet from there and tells her not to tell anyone anything but Geet doesn't agree.Dev is hurt,Geet,being the perfect sister,consoles him.Maan eavesdrops on their conversation.They leave.New character to be introduced,Pari. Is this recap even required?Is it good enough?

Dev and Geet join everyone in the hall.Dev whispers to Geet not to say anything for now.Geet reluctantly agrees as she doesn't want to spoil the merry atmosphere in the house.
Dadi noticed the tension amongst the two Handas and decided to lighten up their mood.

''Hmmm..Dev,rasmalai sach mein acchi thi..lekin aapki wale biwi ne humse cheen lee😭...Hume toh bas uss din ka intezaar hai jab yeh finally chali jayengi aur hum khoob dher saari rasmalai khayenge..aap hume bata dena iss dukaan ka naam,hum roz wahin se magayenge,okayz?😈'' joked dadi.

The siblings broke out into fits of laughter while NT put up a sulky face and was even about to cry upon the thought of leaving her dadi alone.Dadi noticed her about-to-cry face and thought, '' What the hell is wrong with all these fools? Lagta hai mera pura din inhe hi khush karne mein zaya ho jayega!(knowing it takes the entire day to console her grand-daughter)''.

First,it was Maan who was making life hard for her,then she had to cheer up Dev and Geet who were looking gloomy and now,the biggest drama-queen of all,NT.

Maan enters the hall with a shocked expression on his face.He unknowingly comes and sit next to Geet,who was sitting to dadi and continuing her chat with a patient with the same disease - Chatterboxeritis - according to Maan.

Anyways back to Maan,he was in deep thoughts,about Geet. Although he just met her a few moments back, he couldn't stop his straying thoughts from swaying to her.He found her intriguing.He saw the spark in her eyes,the craziness,the love- STOP...What the hell was he thinking?It was some random girl and he was thinking so much about her.A voice from his mind told him,''No,Maan! She is not some random girl..She is special!''.Maan tried to shoo away all these disturbing thoughts but to no avail.

Maan was day-dreaming when Rajji came with more snacks for them.Her jaw dropped to the ground when she saw the HOT saala of Dev.She lost her senses and was walking with her eyes on MSK. What happened next was every girl's dream - The very next moment,she was in THE MSK'S arm.How? - now that's the big question.The answer was simple.Of coz,like in any Indian drama - the girl trips and falls and her hero saves her just in the nick of time,just before the girl reaches the ground but the only difference was it weren't the leads of the story involved.It was the potential jija - saali. However,since this is MY FF,it has got to be extraordinary right? Something silly happened too, the snacks that were in her hands flew high when she tripped and guess where it landed - maybe some of you guessed it - yes,on our hero's head.

''Oww!!''he squealed in pain,rubbing his head.''Are you blind?Tumhi hogi woh Rajjo or whatever...Dekho main itna bhi HOT nahi hoon ki tum dekh ke na chal sako...(realises she's not listening)Sunn rahi ho ki nahi?Hello?(waving his hand in front of her) Lagta hai behri hai!''he tried to talk to her.

Geet sprang into action.She shook Rajji and tried to make Rajji regain her senses.However,Rajji was still in her daze.(Imagine Pari's 'Dreamy' daze,just change the 'Dreamy' to 'HOT') Geet was annoyed and everyone was staring at Maan,Rajji and Geet,the only three,who were moving. The entire room was motionless except the three. Even the air-conditioner had stopped operating.It seemed as though the entire universe had stopped,only the two eternal souls were moving.

Okay I know this is not a place to stop but I have to sleep now..
I've got school tmr..Will probably update tmr..

So people tell me..How was this part?
Do you want me to continue in this style?
Please tell me how you feel about this update..
Expecting lots of comments..thanks
Love you guys a lot
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Posted: 15 years ago
#66
I am really sorry guys but I won't send the pms today..I'll send tmr ,maybe....so start commenting and of coz liking
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Posted: 15 years ago
#67
oh man ur r really hilarious.i am literally laughing. my stomach is aching . u mentioned abt pari were is she
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Posted: 15 years ago
#68
oh come on i am loving this ff plzzzzzz i need a long update and that to soon..........
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Posted: 15 years ago
#69
omg it was an awesome update. Rajji's day dreaming was superb nd Maan was feeling something for Geet. D humour u tried to put on it was fr8. i m still laughing pls Update it asap
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Posted: 15 years ago
#70
Thats Awesome Dear👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Loved it
Loved these lines sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much
''Are you blind?Tumhi hogi woh Rajjo or whatever...Dekho main itna bhi HOT nahi hoon ki tum dekh ke na chal sako...Sunn rahi ho ki nahi?Hello?Lagta hai behri hai!''🤣🤣🤣🤣
Eagerly waiting for the next part
Pls Update Soon

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