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Babaji Ka Thullu

@BabajiKaThullu

Achiever

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#291

fabulasss

amazing yaar loved it totally rockinggg

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anumeha khanna

@anumeha_rajat

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#292

awww...

that was simply amazing n superb os..

loved it alot..

really amazing..

thnx for the pm...

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youth_showsfan

@youth_showsfan

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#293

hey sushmita

it was an awesome OS

it had pain emotion seperation f lovers nd love

i loved d way how armaan realised his love fr ridzy

d way u have written this story is brilliant

awesome work

do write more

nd thnx fr d pmz

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Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#294

such an amazing short story...enjoyed immensely.

pls write another one soon...

-Sona

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sjain

@sjain

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#295

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#296

Sushmita :) you manage to capture everyone's attention with whatever you write, be it a FF or a short story. Your story and concept always stand out. And it obviously is also because you're an awesome writer.

I loved how you took the story ahead. Armaan and Riddhima seperating, giving them time to understand their feelings, rather giving time for Armaan to realize his own. His frustration was somewhere because he probably always loved her, and didn't realize and what pinched him was that when she did say it, she went away. But I love how the realization struck him and how he covered up for what he had done The last moment between the two was so adorable. His words and their conversation just made the wait worth it. Lovely story and lovely writing Sushmita :)

I hope you keep writing stories like these <3

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aarti waghray

@arrmaaan

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#297

hiii sush
i knw i'm late in readin dis os but jus read d complete one n it was jus amazing man...
jus loved der chemistry n srsly u write ossum ff's...
hope to read more of ur ffs n os

aarti