FF manneet **HEARTBEATS** part 28 new thred [29/9] - Page 12

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Posted: 15 years ago
love it
omg it was awesome
do continue
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MANY LOVELY COMMENTS seriously i am loving it... heheh well next one hopefully up by tonight
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Posted: 15 years ago
LOL all my thred being blocked lol.... so i will share my thought with u lot lol
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Keyama,

Oh man, Ch 3 was awesome! 🤣

Muscle Guru...giving advise to 8-yrs olds. Maan is too cruel!

Can't wait to read nxt parts to see how Geet took care of him.

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Posted: 15 years ago

OMG i just loved it.........its just superb.......................................man grt ff plz con soon...........

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Posted: 15 years ago
haha. i absolutely love this story. its so funny
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Posted: 15 years ago
i have read ur last update numerous time and i am tellin u everytime i ended up with stomache as i laughed so hard.i could imagine every scene u wrote and i was rollin on the floor.everytime i imagine maan awakin and dadi seein him and laughin loud i just burst out in laughter and then giggled non stopped.
pls keep up the humor, we r in dire need of it esp.in the comin weekend as geet is comin out with her preg. part with maan
loved loved loved
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Posted: 15 years ago
sorry for delay i accidently deleted my FF for this one i am sooooo sorry... i have to rewrit again :(

EID MUBARAK
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Posted: 15 years ago
Im waiting to read wht happens in the bathroom?
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Part 6


AH1: OMG in my 3 years of working i have never seen sir in .... you know.... she blushed.
AH2: why are you blushing... you not the one who is in there...
AH1: i know... wish i was.
AH2: we are only to dream... how lucky is she...

suddenly they hard BANG!
Maan: ahhhhhhhhhh..... u..!
geet managed to push him off from her... and she pushed him so hard that... even the noise came out sounded wrong...

AH1: OMG!... i knew he was aggressive but this much.... she must be loving it.
AH2: lucky.....
AH1: but they should think about the place... u know... in a jet.
AH2: its his private jet...
AH1: but you know peoples are round here...
AH2: OH well lets go...
AH1: NO lets listen...
AH2: NO u r sick...
ah1 grabes ah2 and rests there ear against the door...

Geet took some deep heavy breath.....

AH1: omg... sir and like this....

Geet: What do you eat... a DInoser... Do you have any clue about your strength... u mongrel!
Maan: WHAT?
Geet took some water in a big tub from the sink and through all on maan!... "WAKE UP!... seriously... MOVE I WANT TO GET OUT..."
Maan: what the.... what was that for?
Geet: for surfecating me!
Maan: what...

maan was leaning against the door... so geet was straggling it to open... "Will you move your elephant size body so i can open the door.
Maan: what elephant!
Geet: what els do you want me to say "ARNOLD SHAGENEGAR!"
Maan: shut up geet...
he stood up to let geet open the door.... but it was lock....
Geet: who locked this door?
Maan with you... au tu hona hi tha!
Geet: shut up...
maan: move let me try!
no use... they locked the door from outside...
Geet: dadima!... adi...
Maan: shut up! no use they wont be able to here us!
Geet: why? how do you know?
Maan: its my jet! what do you think?
Geet thought: "ae tho fikne ve austat hi"... ahahahaha... "ur jet!... no wonder its like you... jaisy jet.. ause malik...
Maan shoved her out from the door and he started banging on it....

ah1 and ah2 hard the bang... "OMG... they still doing it... chee shee...

Geet: dadima open the doorrrrrrr pleaseeeeee. she was screaming...
but no use.... it was lock.. maan banged the door quit few time but no use... the AHs thought they still on there mischief business.. and walked off...

after while both became fed up and gave up....
geet was sitting next to the sink and maan siting on the floor.... suddenly geet started singing... which maan became irrtated....

Geet: " Hum Tum ek washroom me Band ho aur koi bhar na ja pai............ oh oh.... oh Hum Tum ek washroom me Band ho aur koi bhar na ja paiiiiiiiii....................... ai bhi hamko munjur tha agarrrrrrrrr aoooooooo koi HANDSOME HUNK ho taaaaa.......... Hum TUm......

Maan: SHUT UP!

geet: what? i am bored... and whats wrong with singing?
Maan: you talking about me and is extremely BAD.
Geet: ae le.... again back to attitude.... who said i was talking about you?? and don't listen....
Maan: how could i ignore.... THAT EXTREM BAD VOICE...
GEET: God gave you two hand.... why don't you block your ear..

she started singing again....

" aeee GOD tummmmm hamko aha band ku kia...... au bhi is bandar ki sattttt..........."

Maan: SHUT UP!!! U just called me a MONKEY...
Geet: NO.... i called the character in my song... Monkey
Maan: which is me...
Geet: stop giving tooooooo much attention to ur self... the whole world doesn't revolt round you.
Maan: What els do you want me to expect... we are stuch in the washroom.... you singing a song about it... and....
Geet: NO correct your self.... I AM STUCK IN A JET WITH YOU!.... i didn't sing a song about the jet.... have i???
Maan: SHUT up you making no sense.
Geet: yes i am .... if you were in my song i would have called you an IDIOT...
Maan: GEET!
Geet: a Mongrol
Maan: Geet!
Geet: Ugly..... come to think of it have you ever seen your self in the mirror.... seriously.... you need color up your face.... maybe pull up your cheen.... you know.... know DAYS HUMAN call this A SMILE.... i mean i know you are not a human....
Maan: GEETTTT.....

maan stood up.... walked close to her... "YOU BETER SHUT UP.... BEFOR I COMPLETELY LOOSE MY TEMPOR
maan was about to walk way... but geet tried to stand up... to answer him back... but instead she trip... it was unexpected... she landed on maan... who wasn't ready for it... and both ended up on the floor..... geet on top of him....... and the door banged opened.....

the persons mouth was half opened.... shocked to see both in that position...

geets whole body was relaxing on him.... her both leg betweens man... and one of her this pressing his one down.... and maans other leg nearly twisting on her... maans hand also didn't help to ease there position as one hand was holding the jense belt tight and another pressing her whole body on him... they embraced each other... and geets hair was covering both of there face.... and to person it seemed like they making out.....

Adi: ehhhhhhh!.... sirrr........ it- eh- how?
he was confused... firstly... Maan wasn't that type... he always stayed from girls.... secondly.... for past month he have been non stop arguing.... and... ok he thought.....

Geet: ADI.... oh atlast you saved me from him.... the AH locked the door... and we... no.. no ..no... I was stuck with this ugly man.... she stood up... leving maan on the floor....
Maan: Geet!
Geet: what? comen adi... we should leve him alone with his lovely GF...
Adi: GF?
Geet: yes... Washroom... you know.... its black and white like him...
Maan: GEET!...
geet walked off with adi....

adi was still confused... and socked about the position...
Dadi: Geet what happend to your hair?
her hair was all messed up.... geet quickly looked at her reflection.... " Must have happend when maan rubbed his face against my...

Dadi and Adi: WHAT?
Dadi: maan rubbed his face against yours......
Geet: ha.... he is so anoing.... he basickly rubed all the ink against my face....
Dadi: even his mustase near lips...
Geet: "yes.... i think he kissed me lots of time....".... she thought for whille .... "OMG HE KISSED ME".........
dadi nearly fainting..... i was thinking her for dev........
Adi: bit shocked........
Geet: "OMG he kissed me....."
Dadi: then what happen?.... she was eager to know... that her grandson could do such a thing
Geet: "OMG he bashed me against the wall..... now i get it why those AH... oh no....che che che!"
Dadi defiantly was about to have a heart attack.... and adi listening to her in amusement....
Dadi: "i hop his body was no where near you!...." she was expecting a No..
Geet: "actually dadi... he was relaxing against me...... does he even know how strong he is physically.... seriously he was suffocating me..."
Dadi in her thought: "I cant here this any more... nahhhhhhhhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.......... bari bhi..... chote bhi ki hone bali bibi ki sat....nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.....
Adi: what els he did??... he was a bit exited... seeing maan physically so active.... " i mean i have found you and maan... in a .... u know that position."
Geet was a bit confused now.... her half truth was creating a storm in both of there mind.... but before she could say another word... maan grabbed he out of there sight.....

Dadi: "you found them in what condition?" she was breathing hard.....
Adi: au actually......... geet and maan..... dadi.... i beter not explain...
Dadi: TELL ME...
ADI: "making out..."
dadi defiantly fainted this time....... "What??" she started to panic...

Maan bashed her against the wall again... covering her mouth with his hand.... "chup ek dum chup!"
geet confused: hmmmsmsmshhhmmhhmhmmhhmhmmhhm
Maan: what?
Geet: hmmmhmhmhmhmhmhhmmhmhhmhmhmmmmhhh
Maan realises he was covering her whole mouth...
Geet: what? what have i told them??
Maan: you were telling them the half truth and that didn't sound right at all....
Geet: what?
Maan: "they were thinking... we ...." he hesitated for a minute.... "you know"....
Geet: you know what?
Maan: "is pagal laki ka me ka karu?"
Geet: "don't call me mad and move...." but maan was no where near letting her go intell she fully understands the situation... he holed her more tightly.... "LISTEN.... they are thinking we are going out..." he paused... geet gave him a disgust look......
Maan: "its not my fault... we were arguing and you are the one who was explaing everything in weird style...."
Geet: shut up!
Maan: jerked.... there face was mere inches way..... but then suddenly .... dadi and adi appeared..... dadi fainted looking at there body position again.... maan relaxing against geet.... while geet relaxing against the wall.... luckily there legs were in good position... but still.... the thing that dadi just hard.... didn't help them at all....

Geet+maan: dadi!... its nothing like you think off..... dadi!
Maan: stop copying me.....

AH on the other side.... "awww... look they started again...."
dadi walked off in strop.... adi flowed her....

Geet pushed maan.... " do you always have my body to relax on.... dadiiiiiii"
Maan stood there in silent.... bit confused about what just happened.....


Geet: dadi.... we have nothing... like that.... well what ever you thinking... we were arguing... like you know we usally do... and i punced him... or slap..... then he became angry and bashed me against the wall.... that was it.... nothing like what you are thinking.....

dadi was still not convinced... but glad her thought was wrong: "pakka!"
Geet: pakka!
maan walks in.... he tries to talk to dadi....
Geet: STAY WAY FROM ME!...
Maan: GEET...
geet: just stay way....
maan walks off in strop.....
dadi and adi smiles....... geet felt much beter after seeing her smile... and on the other side.... maan was looking for chance to murder geet......................................

as they came off From the jet... security guard started to come from all direction... geet became confused....
Geet: dadi.... why so many security???
then she noticed all the media people waiting outside..... could here the faint shout... MSK MSK MSK!.... geet was extremely confused..... security started to surround them....
Dadi: who told the media that we are coming today?
Adi: mam... you know.... they finds out everything....
Dadi: i don't want them to see geet yet.... so handle that.... maan was walking right behind them..... he spoke to someone in the phone about the car...
Dadi: maan!... do something please....
Geet was extremely confused.... "whats going on dadi?"
Dadi: "Beta i will explain everything to you later.... your dad didn't want the media to see you.."
Geet: why media want me?... whats going on??
before dadi could answer... maan grabbed her by waist..... covering her face on his chest.... forcefully..... also with his arm and hand... just enough that she could see where she was going.............
as the security started to make safe gap between the crowed..... Media started to shout.... "WHO is that girl in Mr khuranas arm?.... there was too much of the same sentence in different time.... Geet couldn't catch exactly what were they saying...... MSKs GF.............................................. or fiancee..... or wife...... random name started to scream out..........
after while they managed to enter the car..... Pure Mirror window......... maan straight way closed the door......... while dadi and adi entered through the other side........
geets earring was stuck to maans t-shirts button... she tried to pull way... but the reflex made her bounce back................. That was The FIRST time..... she hard his rapid HEARTBEATS.........................................................................................

Maan: wait....... she relaxed her hed on his chest.... listening to his heart beat........ while maan struggled to take the earring off....

Dadi: what happen beta?
Geet: my earring is stuck to his top....
dadi laughed... "Maan can you handle!"
Maan: why?
Dadi: "i mean.... no experience with girl stuff..." she teased....
maan gave dadi an angry glare....
Geet: "Dadi are you sure he is NOT... you know.... "
Dadi: "you know what?"
Geet: "More attracted to male.... then Female...."
geet and adi burst out in laugh while... dadi acted out nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii......
maan became irritated and smacked geet hard on her arm.....
Geet: OUCHHHHHHHHHHHHHH............ she couldn't even move way as her earring was stuck to his t-shirt button........
Geet: maan that hurts.... do you know how strong you are..... its like an elephant hitting a rat....
dadia nd adi laughed again...
Maan: shut up geet.... one more word.... and i won't take this earring of and you can stay like this forever......
Geet: thats it.... she took the whole earring off.. lifted hanging on his button..... then she tried to rtake it off.... it only took her few second.....
Geet: what kind of grandson you have dadi..... who is not capable of anything
Maan shouts: GEET!

after while pinky calls geet.....: crying
Geet: Pinky what happen?
Pinky: "MSK geet......." cried a bit more
geet: did they take your land?
Pinky: no.... crying
Geet: then?
Pinky: he has a GF... or wife but maybe fiance.......... crying louder.......
Geet: emmmmmmmmmm...... OK! u are an idiot
Dadi: geet beta....
Maan: see dadi thats why i have arguments with her.... so rude!
Geet: STOP calling me rude.... have you ever looked at your self in the mirror...
Pinky: Geetttt....... how could you.......... don't you think i am pretty enough for him...... she cries louder....... i seen hi in the news............ hugging her............ IF I EVER GET MY HAND ON HER I WILL MURDER HER......

everyone hard that...............
Adi: owo.... who she will murder?
Geet bursts out in laugh..... killing her self laughing......
Pinky: its not funny geet............ cries even louder..........
Geet: ok by i will talk to you later........



NEXT: geet kicks him on the face......

now wonder who she kicked on the face MAAN or DEV
lol

heheh ty for all the lovely comments
xxx

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