SAJAN vivaah-Journey from Engagement to Marriage - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi guys hows u all thnx u so so so much for liking da concept n i loved all u guys comments u guys r so awesome so sweet n encouraging loved everyone's comment anyways m so so so sorry i didnt post from many days m jst so so busy in college i didnt knw i will be dis busy otherwise i would never have opened dis topic anyways so dats y i have decided dat now my really good frnd nisha (mjhtrocks2010) will continue dis ff she wil give u updates so guys its a request plz give her love n support like u gave to me. Thnx again for ur lovely comments n i also might give u guys updates in between if i get time bt anyways mostly nisha will only give u update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey guys i am Nisha and i am gonna update instead of Anu!

PART 1:

A bright Sunday morning where we could hear birds singing and people busy with their morning works.we could see the milk man delivering the milk, boys selling the newspaper and women doing the morning pooja.

"welcome back to the beautiful town of Madhupur" says a shopkeeper on the busy streets of madhupur!

'Thank u Mr.chadda!" says a man with a smiling face.

"Well!I cant believe that u r back to madhupur so soon!"says mr.chadda.

"How can I cant come I came here in search of a bride for my friend's son!"says the man.

"Really!for whom?"asks mr.chadda with a big excitement in his face.

"I will!I will tell everything later now I hav to leave or else my best friend is gonna kill me!"

The man reaches a house which was surrounded by beautiful trees and it was so beautiful that any person would never want to leave it.The house was filled with the beautiful voice of the girl singing and praising the god.

He goes in shouting with joy "Rajesh !where r u?"

And turns an old man from the pooja room "Bhagat u r back!"

"Yes I am back!"says bhagat.

"But how come so early?"says rajesh ji with fear. "Is ur business alright?Did u get any loss or wat?"he continues.

"Relax rajesh!i m fine and so is my jewellery shop!i came back soon to find a suitable bride for my friend Shashank shergill ji's son.He is really worried about his future.He wants a beautiful,traditional and a lovely wife for his son who will become the choti bahu of their family."says rajesh ji.

"Oh!then u should be really careful in choosing the bride after all its his son's life"says Rajesh ji with seriousness.

"Ok.Btw where r u wonderful daughters it has been ages ever since I hav met them!"says Bhagat ji looking around.

"Well,my younger daughter dia has gone for her morning tuitions and my elder daughter!one second let me call her!GUNJAN!GUNJAN!where r u?"says rajesh ji.

"Ji dad"says a young girl coming from the pooja room with Prasad.

Her eyes r so beautiful that it makes a person think that there is nothing more pleasant than this.Her face is so innocent that it makes a person loose all his pain.Her smile makes even the most bad to change into good.Her humbleness makes the most over confident to become humble.

She continues to walk through the steps and comes to the hall where they were sitting, "Ji namaste"she says and gets the blessings of her father and Bhagat ji.

"U hav grown her up into a traditional and lovely girl rajesh"says Bhagat ji with proudness.

Gunjan bends down and gives a sweet smile.

"Well thank u!"says Rajesh ji.

Then gunjan goes into the kitchen and brings the coffee and she serves them.Then a girl enters the home with screaming.

"Dad!i m back"says the girl.

She was an innocent and pretty girl.She was very casual with no pretending nature.

"Welcome back!"says Rajesh ji. "This Is my younger daughter Dia".

"Ji namaste!"she says to him.

"Namaste beti!"says Bhagat ji.

Dia smiles at him.

"Dia I think u should go and freshen urself."says Gunjan.

"Yes my sweet sister!I will!But after sometime."says Dia.

"No dia!please do it now"says Gunjan.

Bhagat ji sees this and is really amazed at Gunjan.

"Yes dia!u should!"

Enters Dia's and Gunjan's mom with an angry look.Gunjan sees her and steps aside.

She holds Dia's hand tightly and dia could feel the pain.She feels like crying.And Gunjan sees that.

"Namaste Bhagat ji"says dia's mom.

"Ji Namaste"Bhagat ji answers back.

Then he looks at Rajesh ji and asks, "Can I ask u something?"

"Yes sure!"says Rajesh ji.

"Why don't u marry Gunjan to my friend's son?"says Bhagat ji.

All r shocked.

Gunjan and Dia's mom get more angry.She stares at Gunjan.Gunjan gets scared of her.She also gets confused.Dia smiles at Gunjan with excitement..Then Rajesh ji gets up from his place and says "I am sorry Bhagat.But no!"

PRECAP:Will rajesh ji accept for the marriage?Why does Gunjan's mom hates her so much?And who is this guy to whom Bhagat ji wants gunjan to get married?

Edited by mjhtrocks2010 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
@ Anuu will surelly give support u just chill ok
hope tu muje bhuli nahi hogi.....

@ Nisha....

its wondeful beginning dear
do continue s aoon as possibleeee
always love u n ur parts dear... so just continueee..
every sentenses are writeen very carefully liked it...

do cont ok

lots of love
Radhi...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
@Anu- its ok dear, you conc on ur studies, coz I kno dat Nisha is a gr8 writer herself n she wil do justice 2 da concept n story. Our support n love r there wid Nisha.

@Nisha- Amazing start dear, as expected! You hav done full justice to ths beautiful movie. Loved the way Gunjan was introduced, just lyk it was in da movie. Realy luking forward 2 Samrat's entry! U rocked dear! Do continue soon!


Love ya loads

urs'
Aditi
Edited by Dr.Zombie - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: RadhikaBhushan

@ Anuu will surelly give support u just chill ok
hope tu muje bhuli nahi hogi.....

@ Nisha....

its wondeful beginning dear
do continue s aoon as possibleeee
always love u n ur parts dear... so just continueee..
every sentenses are writeen very carefully liked it...

do cont ok

lots of love
Radhi...

how can i forgot u radhika dii i will never forgot u sis n aww thnx u r really sweet sis
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
Hey dear awsm part yar .i am thnking starting hi itni rocking hai toh aage kai updts kitne awsm hge. well done yar very very nice.
thanx for pm n do pm me nxt part soon.
i will be eagerly w8ing for it .
luv u
vritika
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: Dr.Zombie

@Anu- its ok dear, you conc on ur studies, coz I kno dat Nisha is a gr8 writer herself n she wil do justice 2 da concept n story. Our support n love r there wid Nisha.

@Nisha- Amazing start dear, as expected! You hav done full justice to ths beautiful movie. Loved the way Gunjan was introduced, just lyk it was in da movie. Realy luking forward 2 Samrat's entry! U rocked dear! Do continue soon!


Love ya loads

urs'
Aditi

awwwww aditi u unres it awesomeee heheh thnx for understanding aditi n ya i knw u guys r awesomeeeeeeeee u guys will loveee nsiah n support her as she is awesomee writer anyways thnx for saying dat
Edited by Anu_sajan4ever - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: Dr.Zombie

@Anu- its ok dear, you conc on ur studies, coz I kno dat Nisha is a gr8 writer herself n she wil do justice 2 da concept n story. Our support n love r there wid Nisha.

@Nisha- Amazing start dear, as expected! You hav done full justice to ths beautiful movie. Loved the way Gunjan was introduced, just lyk it was in da movie. Realy luking forward 2 Samrat's entry! U rocked dear! Do continue soon!


Love ya loads

urs'
Aditi


aww thanks aditi.🤗
I am really glad that u liked it.
Thanks for the support.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow nishu awesome start just loved it completely introduction is really awesome Gunjan entry was beautiful and Dia concern and excitement was awesome and answer of your questions are itself present in Charactersketch Jaanu😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60

awesome starting

loved it

continue soon

thx 4 the pm

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