(MG) FF: Me, myself and I... and you?! P9 page 32 - Page 13

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Posted: 14 years ago

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any chance of an update??? it's been 5 days! cant wait to read next part.... plz plz plz update soon😉

awww sooo sorii, bt yes im updating rite nw, hope u like itt😳
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updating rite nww😳
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Part 6

recap; geet looks away: i guess u were rite... everything is fi9

maan smiles: dats cuz maan singh khurana is always rite

The rest of the fligth goes away quitely... niether does or maan aurgue...soon they land in mumbai... and then go to the hotel they were to be staying at

Manager: Mr. Maan, it is always a plesure to have you here

Maan smiles: yes same here, its pleasure being in ur hotel, anyways i booked two rooms... Maan Khruana and Geet Handa

manager: letme check... ummm there is a booking of you sir bt for the ma'am there was a cancelation last nite

maan: cancelation... no no, u r probaly mistaken, no one had canceled

geet: yes, u mite wana check over again

manager: yes i have checked over, bt there was a cancelation in the name of geet handa

maan: well can u nt book another room?

manager: im sori sir, bt we are totaly booked...

Maan: wot are you saying

Manager: i m veri sori, bt, all i can provide you is wid a extra bed

geet: wot?

manager: like a iin one room we can put up two beds...

geet: one room

maan: okay we will take it

geet takes maan away 4om the manager: maan sir... eik kamra kasey? main...

maan: geet jus shut up

maan goes back to the manager takes the key and goes back to geet

maan: look geet u can sleep on the bed and i will sleep on the extra bed... no big deal... OKAY it will be just to mature adults sharing a room

maan started walking: chalu...

geet walked behind maan thinking 'kya yeh tik hai, idk why bt im getting doubts about this'

maan slide in the card and open the door and room was spacouis... a almost queen size bed was in the middle wid a dresser/mirror... and everything dat was needed... it was soo prefect

maan: nt bad huh??

geet gave a small smile

maan knew she was feelin reali uncomfortable... so dicided to go to the meeting straigth...

maaneet went thier, and everything went fi9 the clients were impressed and maaneet got the deal (dont reali wana go into that details) on thier way back

maan: gosh im reali happy, this deal means new hiegths for the khrunana construstions

geet: yes, the clinets were reali impressed

maan smiled: so u hungry?

geet: yea

maan: wot do u wana eat

geet: ummm

geet sees a gol gap-pa stand: gol gappey

maan: wot?

geet: yea stop the car

maan stops the car and geet gets out

geet: du plate khatta meetha gol gappa

GGD (gol gappa dude)!

ggd: abhi laya

maan: nhai nhai sirf eik plate, im nt going to eat such unhealthy food 4om such a drity place

geet: arey maan sir, u just try it, i m sure u will like-- nhai nhai LOVE ITT

maan: no i dont want it

geet: plz maan sir u have to try it, for me "for me... wot am i saying"

maan: fi9 "just for her"

maan gets out of the car

and geet puts a gg in her mouth: yummm, try itt

maan hesitates...

geet: maan sir, dw u wont die eating this

maan takes on gg: nt bad

geet: c i told u, u will liek it

maan: i do!

maaneet eat gg and suddenly maan sees a chor starting HIS car

maan: WT*

geet: whos that... u nw him?

maan: NO I DONT NW HIM, who the hell is he, till maan reached his car, it was gone

geet: if u dont nw, then why did u give him ur car keys?

maan: geet will u shut up, he he a bloody chor, choro kay ghari start karna atta hai widout the key

maan puts his hand inside his pocket and pulls out the key

geet: u mean, apki ghari koi chori kar gaya woh bhi apka samne??

maan: WOW geet ur a genouis

geet didnt say anything after dat untill... untill untill it started RAINING

maan: gr8 bas iski he kammi thi

geet: maan sir the more u think negative, the more negative will happen, like u can njoy the rain ...

maan: i hate the RAIN

maan went and took shealter under a tree: cum here geet

geet: nhai maan sir i like the rain... infact i LOVE the rain, so im nt cuming

maan: u will fall sick

geet: maan sir... phir negative?

maan: GEEEEET

geet: its geet... nt GEEEEEET

the rain had turned into a hard rain wid ocsoanly big hail in it

maan in a veri love dovly talks: geet, cum here, AS THIS IS A ORDER

geet didnt want to hear maan bt the hail was hitting so she also took shealther underneath the tree next to maan

maan: nw telme wot should i see positive here??

geet didnt answer the wind started blowing reali fast there were leafes and alot of other drit blowing veriwhere, wen mitthi went in her eyes...she rubbed her eyes bt still it was no use, the sand and drit blowing everywhere was making geet have watery eyes maan saw this and was getting mad at nature...!

he stood rite infornt of geet making sure that nuthing can came into geets eyes or her face... geet was shocked at maans such behavoir... geet just couldnt take her eyes off of him and maan's eyes off of her... both stood thier still, maan notices a small leaf pice stuck in her hairs and wid his hand he takes it out... geet moves back a bit... and maan wid his eyes gives a dont-move-look-so-i-can-take-the-leaf-out-of-ur-hairs!

wen maan takes it out he shows to geet wot he was doing

geet: thanks

maan: hmm--- oops i forgot u dont like it wen i say hmmm...

geet: no at times ur hmm is just prefect!

maan smiles: no bt rite nw i wana talk... other then saying hmmm,

geet looks deep in his eyes

maan: this this is all ur fault

geet: my fault?

maan: if u hadnt insited on sum drity gg's this would have neva happened...

geet: maan sir why do u always scream on me... like... i m sori, kay yeh sari meri galti hai, infact idhar anna bhi meri galti thi... apka saath job karna bhi meri galti thi, apko gg khalana bhi meri galti thi, sara...sara kuch meri galti hai... aur main apne galti- oon ka liya sori karti hoon...i hope ab ap kush ho gaya ho...

geet starts crying, and maan feels bad, he carefully wipes off her tears wid his index finger and geet just looks at him... lost ones again in his eyes

maan: shhh, im sor...

b4 maan could finish his sentence geet had butt in

geet: look taxi

maan stoped the taxi and asked him to drop them to thier hotel

geet takes her clothes and goes to the bathroom and maan thinks: was i about to say sori to geet... like me, i have neva said sori to any1... aur main geet ko sori bolna laga tha... geett... geet?? how could it be msk khabhi kisse ko sori nhai khata... toh phir main eik secatray ko sori....

geet cums out wearing a churdar pajama wid a anarkali dress in golden shades

'she is looking so beauitful... nhai chup kar maan... wot am i saying ' maan thinks to himself

geet quitely goes and sits by the fireplace quitely, nt making any eye contact wid him, untill he walks up to her wet still in his clothes

geet: ap kapray badal lay...

maan cant hear her talking as he is so lost in her face/ eyes/ lips soft checks he moves forward to geet and geet leens back in horror

geet: woh maan sir... ap kapray badal lay

geet had tried again in saying but it was no use... he was lost all he could see was her lips moving

he moved close and bend down to her, geet was veri scared, geet got up and went to the dresser

geet: maan sir... ap bemaar hogaya gay, apney kaprey badal j layey

maan goes to her, were she is standing by the dresser geet sees him cuming in the mirror

geet gets scared again, as maan again gets reali close to her and just inches away from her lips

geet pushes him away which brings maan back to his senses and remembers wot he was doing

maan: woh... geet

geet: maan sir maine khaha ap apne kaprey badal ley jaya...

maan goes to the bathroom to chnage in the bathroom he thinks 'gosh wot was i doing i have totaly lost it, nw i do owe her an apolize to her

geet outside thinks: i knew it sharing a room wasnt a gud idea... bas babaji yeh raat guzaar gaya accha se

after sometime maan comes out and sees geet brushing her hairs

maan thinks: ab main kissay khahoon... god maan you have really done it now

geet gives a lilte peck at maan through the mirror and look away b4 maan could see her

geet thinks: maan sir is very good looking, nhai stupid, he probally has tons and tons of girls drooling on him, geet tujhai yaad hai na, job interview pe larki kya kar rahi thi... gosh i need to get out of this thougth...

geet and maan together: sono(listen)

both quite, both hesetate

maaneet again together: bolo

both look at one another... it was a very awkard moment for geet but a cute moment for maan!

geet decided not to say anything this time

maan: kya baat hai?

geet: nhai, pehla ap bataya?

maan: main toh woh, bas pooch raha ta kay kuch pena hai

maan thinks: pena... dimaag tik hai tera, sorry karna aya tha aur peena ki baat kar raha, geet kya samj gi

geet: peena?

maan: haan, kuch peena hai, like coffce or tea

geet thinks: omg yeh coffce ki baat kar raha ta, aur main kya samj rahi thi silly me

maan: bolo?

geet: nhai main tik hoon

maan: acha tell me what were you going to say?

geet: i wanted to talk to dadima, rajjio and tittoo

maan: oh okay, I will call dadi

maan dails the number and puts the loudspeaker on

dadi: helow

maan: hey dadimaa

dadi: omg is this maan?

maan: haan it is maan, likan itna omg karney ki kya jarurat thi?

dadi: well weneva you go out on bussince trip you never call me, so i m just surprise, i bet yeh geet ka asar hai

maan: geet

maan looks at geet and geet is awkardly looking at maan

maan: dadima your rigth, geet ne apsa aur apna bhai bahain se baat karney hai

dadi: haan toh phir tum do geet ko phone, asey he tumne mera itney persouis time waste kiya hasi

maan: dadimaa?!

dadi: kya dadima dadima laga raki hai, geet ko phone do

nw wen maan turns to look at geet her awkardness on her face has turned into a naugthy lilte smile, 'which offcourse must had happened wen dadimaa was insultin me' maan thouted to himself

maan gave th phone to geet, geet had a cute talk wid dadi and wen geet asked about her silbling, dadi said they are sleeping, and geet was relaxed, geet went and gave the phone to maan, while she was giving it to maan, thier hands touched and both felt a million vibes of curent going through them

maan was staring geet rite in her eyes and so was geet, maan again moved forward... and geet leaned back, maan more forward and geet back this happened a few times wen geet fell on the bed, followed by maan on top of her, maan didnt knw what he was doing was it rigth or worng, but he didnt want to think any of that, he just wanted to kiss geets lips with love and passion, maan moved downwards at geet, geet was lost, she didnt want this to happen and niether did she want it to stop, she was confuse, kya yeh tik hai yah galat??

geet close her eyes

maan thoted: i have to stop myself from making anything happen...

but maan kept on moving downwards at geet untill maans breathing was on geet

KNOCK KNOCK

geet got up in fear and sits up on the bed and maan moved off of her immdeitly and sits next to her on the bed

geet was breathing fast

KNOCK KNOCK

maan reali didnt now what to do... 'kya main geet se baat karaan kay nhai, whats happening, or what was about to happen"

KNOCK KNOCK

maan gulps his spit down: kon...kon hai?

'sir its room service (rs), im here regrading the extra bed" said a voice 4om behind the door

geet and maan stil sat nervously on the bed togeher side by side... both are remebering what was or what just could have had happened

KNOCK KOCK

maan atlas get see what he wants

rs: sir, woh jo apko extra bed chaya tha, im sorry to say likan woh ab apko nhai mil sakta

maan was still lost in remembering how close he was to geet, so he wasnt really paying any attention to rs

rs: but sir if there is anything else you want please do letme now

maan: hmm

maan shut the door on him, and maan turned around to see the face of geet full of anger

maan thinks: oh god what do i do nw, geet probally wants an expalination... what do i say, but she didnt stop me either, infact she shut her eyes in consent

maan: well you wanted it

geet: kya?

maan: the kiss

geet looks away in embrassment and thinks: he is rigth, likan woh waqt mein kuch tha... or else i dont look at maan that way... or do I?

geet: mein... woh... ap ne kuch nhai khah us banda ko...

maan: kya... kis banda ko?

geet: for an extra bed

maan: geet i think you have lost, tumhara samey toh hi khaha tha, and even he said oh okay...

geet: im talking about this rs guy... did you not hear him say, that we dont have anymore extra beds...

maan thinks: is that what he was saying... but if i say dat i didnt hear him, it will get quit obvious that i was still thinking about geet... but i cant say that

maan: yea... dat i herd him its still okay you can sleep on the bed and i will sleep on the sofa..

geet: wot sofa?

maan looks around: umm it is still okay you can sleep on the bed and i will sleep on the side of the bed

geet looks at maan with furious eyes

maan: or not i will sleep on the carpet... look its sooo comfy... hannah

geet: forget it

geet gets out of the room in anger

maan: arey geet, where are you going?

geet: bar(not the club but hell) mein

maan: okay im cuming wid

maan went outside the door but saw geet already in the elvator...maan ran there but it was no use.. she was already gone... maan went downstairs and saw her no where

maan thinks: ab yeh kidar chali gi hai?

maan asks people if they saw a gurl walking by.. they said yes she went outside, maan asked the watchmen if he saw her going, he also said yes... maan went there

maan thinks: gosh this gurl is sooo stupid... pata nhai kidar chali gi hai.. she doesnt even now the ways around here...

geet on the other hand finds a stable... and enters it... (dil wale dhuhenya la jaya)

maan walks around the place and finds a stable: thinking how stupid geet is she must have be in the stable

maan: OH WOW

geet truns around to find maan

maan: this place is soooo damm beautifull, you now what you are soo rigth, us ganda 7star hotel heated room is achi toh yeh jaga hai... it is sooo warm and cosy... aur yeh horse... mar gaya... awsum

just then the horse makes noise

maan: oh zinda hai kya... mujahi laga mar gaya hai... but thats even better i think we can go horse riding later on, woh bhi free of cost... and OMG what im seeing is it rite... the view it is awsum... (the view was of garbage which made the satble stink) dats why i was wondering why does it smell soooo gooooooood in here, and lovely we are going to sleep on hay stack awsum you you if i sleep on a bed it makes my back ache, so this is just soooo much more better, thanks geet

geet: well if you dont like it, you didnt have to follow

maan: just shut up geet

maan moved a few steps forward to her

maan: did you think that i was going to leave you here all alone, in the middle of the nigth

geet: i m a old enough to take good care of me.. thank you very much

maan: geet

maan again moved few steps towards her

maan: chalu yaha se

geet: no im fine here

maan held geets wrist

geet; maan sir leave me, i dont want to go there...

maan: fine

maan felt her hand went and sat with the horse

geet: ab ap kya kar raha hain?

maan: well if you are not going to go then i wont go either

geet: fine do as you like

geet also went and sat opossite of maan and shut her eyes

maan: so basanti tumhe kya lagta hai, being the rude and unthougthfull, woh nhai jaya gi na

geet opened her eyes and saw maan talking to the horse

maan: hmm, i m also thinking the same thing... ab dekho na, galti insaan se he hoti... and me msk is even sorry for it, and promise it will never happen... likan ab yeh sari baatein geet ko kon samjaya.... basanti shahid woh tumare baat son lay... why dont you give it a try, likan koi fida nhai, woh insaano ki nhai sonthi toh tum toh phir bhi janwar ho... no offence basanti... wasey kash basanti tum meri secartray hoti... kitney acha hota.. kum bolti, aur mein khabhi bhi nhai tumhai kiss karne chata

maan thinks: oh shit what did i say

geet think: maan sir wants to kiss me...

maan: mera mutlub hai kay, above all im sorri

maan looks at geet

geet thinks: why is he just saying sorry, likan agar keh hi ray hai toh mein bhi its k keh dey di hoon, vasey bhi he is a good mood surprisinly

geet clears her throat so she can get his attention: it is okay

maan stands up: great now then if that is clear lets go back

geet: back to the same hotel room

before maan could say anything more it starts to pour rain again...

maan: great...

geet: koi baat nhain maan sir, barish hai, rok jaya gi... and umm then we will go

the rain get heavier by the moment...

maan again goes and sits with basanti: pata larkian itney dar kyun laga thi hain...

geet: basanti bhi larki hai toh sir ap asey batien us sa na karian

maan starts laughing

geet thinks: im seeing maan sir laugh for the first time

maan: tumhai kassey pata basanti larki hai

maan: kyun kay uska naam basanti hai...

maan luaghs: but stil, naam toh meine hi diya hai ussa aur woh bhi sholay ko yaad kar kay

geet: kya?

maan laughs

geet: but what if maan sir basanti is a basanta?

maan still laughing: basanta?? AHAHAHAAA

geet starts laughing as well both laugh for a while wen atlas they shimmer down

geet: maan sir ek baat khahoon

maan: hmm.. ops mera mutlub hai khaho

geet: ap acha lagta hai has ta hua

maan gives a smile at geet and thinks: i was laughing and nw im smiling whats happening? this must stop, smile go away...

but it was no use, his heart was too comanding at that moment for him to listen to his brain

geet: barish rok hi nhai rahi hai

maan: yea, it has been a raniy day

suddenly the roof rips open cuz of the rain, onli at the place where geet was sitting

geet quickly gets up and runs to maan and accidently lands on his lap, and wraps her hands around his neck

in this lillte while geet had gotten really wet

Comment plz... N sorri to stop like that, cuz i just got my net i wanted to update already... so hope u like it, will update soon

Edited by Mina H - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
what update amazing perfect thanks pm pls cont soonnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great update and that was so funny when the thief stole the car right infront of maan and the incidents which happened ine after the other leading then to a stable and a wet geet in maans lap oh if only stuff like that happened in real life na but a girl can dream lool anyways continue soon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
woooooooooooooooow loved da update
plzzzzzzzzzzzz continue
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perfect & lovely update pls cont soonnnnnnnn thanks pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hiiii
Awesome update
Loved it
Maaneet r falling 4 eachother
Loved maan talking 2 the horse
Love the ending
Can't wait 4 more
Con soon
Thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sharmake11

what update amazing perfect thanks pm pls cont soonnnnnnnn

awww thank you so much😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -shamima-

Great update and that was so funny when the thief stole the car right infront of maan and the incidents which happened ine after the other leading then to a stable and a wet geet in maans lap oh if only stuff like that happened in real life na but a girl can dream lool anyways continue soon 😊

dats true a gurl can dream... like how i am always dreaming... HEHEHE😆😃😆

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