FF: EHSAAS-THE FEELING Thread 1 - Page 74

hey I heard tht u r not well....plz forget bout updating and take rest first...fan fics can wait....:D

You need to rest!

Nice update

dudette!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

hey dear we can wait for ur sweet updates but take proper rest nd get well soon

Ha ha ha jealousy is the trick which always work.Nice update,plz add me to ur pm list.

Hey..!!

aakriti!
m really very very sad n dissappointed hearing about ur health!
plz take care of urself
get well soon!
so v cn get quick updates :D
lol.............health cumz first
juz recover first n then update
v cn alwayz wait
i noe v will miss ur updates n stuff......but as i said before
health always cumz first!
so plzz plzzz take care of ur health!
get well REAL soon!

luv
Navpreet

Hello every1 First of all its not Aakriti its Aastha her younger sis yes d same who has informed u all about his illness nd afterwards has heard lots of scoldings from her. Dont think that i have taken over her channel. i m just posting here on her behalf. But before i Post i want to convey Di's Msg to all of u. She said that she is very much touched nd overwhelmed wen i told her about ur Pm's. She was happy to see that her friends care so much for her. she said thanx to all of u for ur Lovely Wishes nd Msgs. nd Sara Di i have twisted her ear on ur Behalf she said a lots of thanks to u 2 for ur lovely Cards. ok i guess i speak too much. Nw Coming to the point Since Di is not well nd Doc has told that she is suffering from Dengue so that Means that she needed Minimum 1 Week complete rest to get better (Bechari ko Gurmeet ki Bimaari ka Sadma Lag gaya😆😆) nd she dont wanted her readers or should i say friends to wait for the Update. So this Update she has written wen she was quite well nd she asked me to Post it for the time Being so that u all dnt miss her much. its a bit short but she hopes that u all will like it. Pls Feel Free to criticise if u all dnt like it. Here's D Part 28 of the FF.


Part 28:

Geet bid a good bye to her Nanimaa nd Mom nd came outside d House where Maan waiting for her outside d Car. She wondered where Savy has gone den she thought may be she already gets herself seated. Maan moves forward to taker her Luggage nd placed it at the back bonnet of car. As soon as Geet opened d door of Passenger Seat she saw Savy sitting over dere smiling at her. Initially Geet felt irritated as it was her place nd Hw could maan let her sit over dere. She looked at Maan who knows wat to do nw

Maan: wo..... Savy likes d front seat of car so I thought.....

Geet: its ok. I don't mind (she said with a smile)

Maan(amuzed): Really?

Geet(smiles): Ya! I mean Savy has came after so many years nd she's ur Good Friend afterall. Hai na Savy

Savy(amuzed too): Ya ofcourse.

She gets herself seated at d back seat. Both Maan nd Savy looked at each other. Both were confused at her sudden change of behaviour. Maan gets himself seated at d driver's seat nd started Driving. He looked through d Mirror at Geet who was sitting Quietly watching outside d window.

During d Whole journey it was only Savy who was talking to both Maan nd Geet nd dey were giving their Answers. Till nw Maan has a misconception dat only Geet can talk so much but no Its d Habbit of every girl. He smiled at his thought. After 6 Hrs of Journey All of dem finally reached to Mumbai. Maan Drops savy at her Home.

Savy: Thanx Maan

Maan: Anytime Princess.

Savy: Awww So sweet of u. Bye Shona!

Maan: Bye Princess

Geet made an irritating face wen she heard their Convo.

Savy: Bye Geet.

Geet: Bye Savy (she said with a fake smile)

Maan couldn't help himself Laughing but tries to control himself. After Savy left Maan notices dat Geet is still sitting at the Back.

Maan: Waise u can come at front.

Geet: its Ok, I m fine over here (she said while looking outside d Window)

Maan: No I dont have any problem if u sit over dere but agar tum aisi hi peeche baithi rahi to sabko lagega ki main tumhara Driver hoon. So if u pls come in front.

Geet(murmurs): Dusht Daanav Chain se baithne bhi nahi deta.

Maan: U said Something?

Geet: No.

Maan: so r u coming or should I send an invitation to u?

Geet gets out from d car nd gets herself seated at the passenger's seat. Maan looked at her anger nd smiles nd started driving.

Maan: Waise Geet, Savy tumhe kaisi lagi?

Geet(to herself): Nw Y is he asking this from me? (den To Maan) She's good

Maan(teases her): Good or Excellent?

Geet: Both.

Maan: Really?

Geet: Ya.

Maan realized that Geet is not in d mood of talking so he decided to do something else.

Maan: ummm Geet

Geet: Nw wat?

Maan: Well I just want to ask that will u mind if I listen to some music?

Geet(To herself): MSK nd Music? Wats wrong with him?

Maan: wat r u thinking?

Geet: Nothing.

Maan: So will u mind If I.......

Geet: Its ur Car na?

Maan: ya

Geet: Den do whatever u want?

Maan: ok.

By saying dis he switched on d FM wishing that somewhere in some channel Kishore Kumar's Songs would be playing so that Geet's mood gets better but to his luck none of d channel is playing Kishore Kumar's Song but luckily in one channel an old song is playing. He thought that may be she like it. He increases d Volume of d song. Nd d song was

Pyar hua, Ikrar Hua hai, Pyar se fir kyun darta hai dil. Kehta hai dil Rasta Mushkil maloom nahi hai Kahan Manzil.

As soon as Geet listens d Song she started feeling uncomfortable as dis Song was completely Suiting to their Present situations. Maan's noticed Geet's Restlessness but he didn't interrupt nd continues listening to song because he was loving her restlessness. As d song is going on It was getting difficult for Geet to sit comfortably. She finally switches off d Radio. Maan looked at her surprisingly

Geet: Wat?

Maan: Y did u switched it off? I mean I thought u love old Songs nd dis one is d most beautiful one.

Geet(muffled): Ya. But I dnt feel like listening to song right now. U have any Problem?

Maan: no I don't have any problem.

By saying dis he started concentrating on road. Geet thanked her stars that Maan Didn't Argued dis tym from her to listen dis Song as dis Song is almost pouring out their Feelings. But then to her utter surprise she heard someone Humming d same song. She looked at her side nd saw Maan was humming

Maan(Humming): Pyar hua, Ikrar hua hai Pyar se fir kyun Darta hai Dil (he humms while looking at Geet)

It was getting difficult for Geet to bear his Gaze. She looked at the other side nd Maan continues Humming. Geet didn't know that Maan can actually sing also that too so well. She wonders wat other Avatars of him r left for her to see. She smiles listening to him making sure that he didn't notices it but he notices her smiling.

Maan(to himself): Chalo, kum se kum smile to kiya. (den to Geet), thanx

Geet(amuzed): Wat?

Maan: I mean ab tum itna smile kar rahi ho mera Song sun ke so definitely u r going to praise my Voice so I said Thanx in Advance.

Geet(almost caught): ummm.. wen did I said dat I m smiling?

Maan: So u were not smiling? (he said while looking into her eyes)

Geet said nothing but turned her face again towards d Window. Maan knows that Geet is not angry anymore so he concentrate on his Driving again. Geet is lost on her own trails of Thoughts. She wondered Y has she came back to Mumbai with him? Y did she told him d Lie that Mr. Chopra is arriving next day? Wen she knows that its not true. Was it because he was going with Saver and she cant See him with someone else? Wats going wrong with her? She should not be Jealous of Savera. Afterall she's such a sweet girl. She even talked to her properly. No she should not do this.

Her trail of thoughts were Broken wen Car stops at a sudden halt.

Geet: Wat Happen? Y did u stop?

Maan: No I don't mind taking u on Long Drive but we have reached to Home (he said while pointing finger towards Outhouse)

Geet smiled as she heard a familiar line from him. She has also said d Same wen she has dropped Maan home. Maan knows y Geet is smiling he remembers that incident too. Maan get out from the car nd opened d Door for Geet. Geet gets down quietly nd started moving towards outhouse.

Maan: Geet.....

Geet Stopped nd looked at Maan. Maan came closer to her nd stand in front of her.

Maan: Geet, maine kaha than a MSK se jeetna itna aasan nahi hai. Look u r here, in Mumbai that too in 24 Hrs.

In her Jealousy Geet didn't realize that she has lose d Challenge. But she can bent down in front of him.

Geet: Maan, I came over here because of dis Project as Mr. Chopra is coming tomorrow nd datsy I .........

She couldn't complete her sentence as Maan puts his Finger on her lips to make her Quiet.

Maan: Chup! Bilkul Chup! Y u always try to say Lie wen u dnt know hw to say it.

Geet: I m not saying lie. Its true.

Maan: Really? (he said while moving towards her)

Geet: Yes. (she said while moving backwards)

Maan: So Mr. Chopra is coming tomorrow?

Geet: Ya

Maan: at wat tym?

Geet has no idea of d Flight schedule but still she tried her hard

Geet: ummm.... somewhere around 5 in d evening.

Maan: but there's no flight which comes from London at 5.

Geet: Wo..... Actually

Saying dis Geet realizes that her back hits d door of d Car nd she was stuck between Maan nd Car. Maan puts his Hand on either sides of her so that she cant run away. Geet looked at Maan's eyes who has made an intense eye contact with her. they looked at each other's eyes. Geet didn't know wat to say. Her mind has stopped Working wen she saw Maan standing so close to him. For a moment she has forgetten that she was Angry From Maan. All she could remember that she was in front of the person whom she loves d most nd who loves her even more den her. A hair strand comes in front of her eyes. Maan looked at it nd slowly tucked it behind her ears, caressing her soft cheeks.

Maan(whispers): Geet, I knw u r lyieng because Mr. chopra is coming next week not tomorrow. U did all dis because u cant see me nd Savy Going alone rite?

Geet: No its not like dat (she said while broking d eye contact)

Maan: Really den looked into my eyes nd say dis dat my closeness wid savy didn't affect u.

Geet said nothing. Maan continues

Maan: it has affected u Geet

Geet nodded her head in No.

Maan: No?

Geet couldn't say anything nd Maan continues to move closer to her. He felt her Breathing heavily nd his eyes looked for her lips. Geet lowered her gaze to look at his lips. She closed her eyes as she felt him coming closer to her. She could feel his Warm breath on her face. Her breathing heavied nd parted her lips. Maan looked at her rosy Lips. He moves closer to dem seems going to kiss dem. Geet's eyes were still closed. Maan looked at her face nd moving his face more closer to her he was almost touching her lips den stops nd instead Kissing on her lip he kisses at her cheeks beneath her eyes nd slowly draws back. Geet opened her eyes as she felt his lips on her cheeks. He looked at Maan who was seeing her smiling.

Was she dreaming or Maan has really Kissed her? She thought nd looked at Maan

Maan: Geet, still u have not been affected?

Geet looked at other side, she noticed that Maan's Hand r not on her either side anymore. She takes d Opportunity nd quickly runs from dere to the outhouse. Before entering d Outhouse, she turned Back to give a look at Maan who was still standing dere nd watching her. She couldn't bear his gaze so she Quickly rushed inside d House nd closed d door. Maan watched her nd shakes his Head with smiling.

Maan: Pagal! Loves me so much but still denying from it. Ego Problem huh!!! Kyun na ho? Afterall she is MSK's love. Ego to hoga hi. But dnt worry Soon dis Ego of urs will be out from between us.

By saying dis He tooks out his cell phone nd Text to Savy.

"Plan is Working. Nw wat will be the next step?"

Within 5 mins. He got a Reply

"U'll come to know Soon"

Maan smiles nd Puts his cell back nd Drove towards d Mansion

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As soon as Geet reaches d Outhouse Shilpa hugs her tight. She was so happy to see her sis back.

Shilpa: Oh Di! Finally u r back. I cant tell u hw much happy I m.

Geet: I can see dat Shilpa.

Shilpa: Well, I think u must be very tired nw. y dnt u just take some rest, while I'll prepare dinner for u?

Geet: U'll prepare? Shilpa I don't have medical insurance yet?

Shilpa: Di....

Geet: ok Baba I m sorry. Ok go ahead. Call me if u need any help.

Shilpa: Sure

By saying dis Shilpa headed towards d Kitchen nd Geet towards her Room. but she didn't take rest instead she goes to the Window nd looked at the Sky remembering the moment that has just passed by. She touches her cheeks with her hand

Geet(To herself): Geet wats Wrong wid u? remember u r angry on him. Focus!! But still I came with him back. Completely forget about tha challenge. I lose to him but still I m happy to lose dis challenge. Is it because I didn't let him come alone wid Savy or I couldn't able to stay from him anymore. Geet, wake up come out from ur dreams. He has hurted u. but after that he had done so many things to manofy her. So wat that doesn't less his mistake. But he has done for my happiness. So wat he should have talked to u before doing any such kind of thing. Uurgghhhhhhhh..... I'll definitely go mad. Y do I love him so much? That it gets difficult for me to hate him. Geet, u should go to sleep nw. u really need some rest. Ya.

Saying dis she goes to her Bed nd sleeps. Poor girl not able to choose between her heart nd Mind. Her Heart diverted her towards Maan but Mind tells her to stay away from him. Nd she don't know of whom to listen.

Precap:

Geet's Jealousy Continues

So guys hope u all like dis Part. pls Dnt forget to leave ur Comment/Criticism nd hit d like Button if u all like dis Part nd keep praying for her nd Gurmeet's good health so that they both can get well soon😊

Luv Aastha
(on Di's Behalf)😆